Female/Lesbian writing help needed.

[fishburger67]

I am upgrading Sex Slaves.  As I write this, I have several hundred hours into the upgrade and am maybe 2 weeks or a month till I release a beta version.

 

After I get the male portion finished, I want to go back and add to the dialog for female players.  However, I have no idea what salacious dialog you guys use in the bedroom.  For that, I would like some help from some of the women here.  Here is an example of some salacious male oriented dialog:

 

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Ooooh, it felt so amazing sleeping next to your with your hard cock pressed against  my ass.

 

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Then, when I wouldn't get up fast enough, you made me get up and bend over and then you spanked my pussy.  Hard!  Then you threw me on the bed and pushed my feet up around my ears and drove your cock so deep in me that I came with every stroke.

 

 

If you can help, please PM me.  I would like to have 3 or 4 gals that can collaborate to come up with some dialog that will excite female players.  Please, female players only.  I want something authentic.  There are maybe 5 dozen lines of dialog that contain "cock in me"  or "master"  that need a female oriented counterpart. 

 

I am also always looking for female voice acting if you have an interest.  Can't offer much except fun in exchange for your efforts.

[piranha45]

IDK if there's any demographic data on this site or your mod.

 

There could actually be more WAY more guys RPing lesbians, than actual lesbians, in your user base.

 

 

 

Maybe even make a strawpoll & link it to multiple areas on LL and Nexus; get an idea of your user demographics.  

Edited January 30, 2025 by piranha45

[fishburger67]

On 1/30/2025 at 4:59 AM, piranha45 said:

IDK if there's any demographic data on this site or your mod.

 

There could actually be more WAY more guys RPing lesbians, than actual lesbians, in your user base.

 

 

 

Maybe even make a strawpoll & link it to multiple areas on LL and Nexus; get an idea of your user demographics.  

I agree 100%.  I always talk to the person until I get some feedback that I can trust about their true sexuality.  Just wanting to be a lesbian does not count as experience.

[fishburger67]

BTW, I have gotten almost zero feedback on this issue, so at this point, I am not going to produce a version with female dialog. 

[an angel of blood]

i am very sapphic but also have a very atypical experience of it, so idk if i'd be any help, but i guess you've given up on it anyways. really cool of you to look for input from actual lesbians, we don't get much authentic rep anywhere, just what guys think we do

[Oliverleo]

On 2/5/2025 at 3:56 AM, an angel of blood said:

i am very sapphic but also have a very atypical experience of it, so idk if i'd be any help, but i guess you've given up on it anyways. really cool of you to look for input from actual lesbians, we don't get much authentic rep anywhere, just what guys think we do

I appreciate your perspective! Your experience is valid, even if it’s different.

[fishburger67]

On 2/4/2025 at 2:56 PM, an angel of blood said:

i am very sapphic but also have a very atypical experience of it, so idk if i'd be any help, but i guess you've given up on it anyways. really cool of you to look for input from actual lesbians, we don't get much authentic rep anywhere, just what guys think we do

Well, it's not too late.  This is a MAJOR update and I probably still have a couple of months left to go (assuming I work on it more actively than I have the past week.  So, if you have some feedback, post it here or send me a PM.

 

Remember that I am limited to the animations that are available for lesbian sex and there really isn't much for Flowergirls.

 

Still, the whole point of much of the dialog is to be arousing, so for female (as in real Lesbian) players, having good lesbian dialog would be paramount.  Specifically, what salacious dialog do you engage in to tempt your partner?

 

PS, I just had to look up "sapphic", mostly to get the pronunciation and was offended by the list of synonyms. 

Edited February 22, 2025 by fishburger67

[Lyyli]

7 hours ago, fishburger67 said:

Well, it's not too late.  This is a MAJOR update and I probably still have a couple of months left to go (assuming I work on it more actively than I have the past week.  So, if you have some feedback, post it here or send me a PM.

 

Like the other poster, my identity is more of "queer" or "sapphic" than lesbian, but I am married to a woman (or maybe, it's a developing situation, a non-binary person) so I guess I count. =p I'm not big into dirty talk personally, but I've read plenty of lesbian romance (and have done an inordinate amount of text-based online roleplay over the years) -- I'm willing to give a go at uh, translating your scenes, if you like.

 

[DrunkenCow]

11 hours ago, fishburger67 said:

Well, it's not too late.  This is a MAJOR update and I probably still have a couple of months left to go (assuming I work on it more actively than I have the past week.  So, if you have some feedback, post it here or send me a PM.

 

Literally covered decades ago by a fairly decent lesbian author: https://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-write-lesbian-sex-scenes

 

tl;dr - butch lesbians can be considered dudes; the vast majority of animations available to you will use dildos so maybe stop stressing that you aren't female.

Edited February 22, 2025 by DrunkenCow

[Vexing Vixen]

I mean if you need inspire yourself to write something like that than I suggest read a few romance novels, movies, etc. Asking the very few women here is not going to lead alot of results. Besides someone like me or other girls that use this site tend to have very weird view of romance or kinks that are unusual for most girls so asking around here might be pointless since were unusual for being here and play skyrim . Take me for example I like being degraded and dominated, I expect most girls don't like to be insulted so Instead just write out what you enjoy for a female/lesbian characters and you might figure out what dialogue to use.

 

 

[Miauzi]

Vor 9 Stunden sagte Vexing Fox:

Ich meine, wenn Sie sich inspirieren müssen, so etwas zu schreiben, als ich vorschlage, ein paar Romane, Filme usw. zu lesen. Wenn Sie die wenigen Frauen hier fragen, werden sie nicht viel Ergebnisse führen. Neben jemandem wie mir oder anderen Mädchen, die diese Seite nutzen, haben die sehr seltsame Sicht auf Romantik oder Knicke, die für die meisten Mädchen ungewöhnlich sind. Wenn Sie hier die Fragen hier nicht umgehen, ist es möglicherweise sinnlos, da es ungewöhnlich war, hier zu sein und Skyrim zu spielen. Nehmen wir zum Beispiel gerne degradiert und dominiert. Ich gehe davon aus, dass die meisten Mädchen nicht beleidigt werden, und schreiben Sie stattdessen einfach, was Sie für eine weibliche/lesbische Figur genießen, und Sie könnten herausfinden, welchen Dialog Sie verwenden müssen.

 

 

 

The only problem is that the sex industry is essentially male-dominated - that is, men produce for both heterosexual and homosexual customers... and essentially it is men who are the customers.

 

Accordingly, the "lesbian" sex films are not intended for lesbian customers - but for (essentially) heterosexual men... and the corresponding (male) clichés are served.

 

A few years ago I was able to attend a demo screening of a lesbian porn film - which was actually shot (and therefore produced!) by women.

But here too, the typical male clichés (sexual intercourse with a dildo) were served... why? -> essentially male (and not female) customers.

 

But the idea of sex between gay men is also burdened with the typical (heterosexual MALE) prejudices... the vast majority assume that there must be a division of roles between men as "man" (aka "active") and "woman" (aka "passive").

And there is another level -> the power imbalance

This is about "sex slaves" - that already includes the elements of "dominance" and "submission" right from the start... and of course this is reflected in the dialogues required for this.

 

In the lesbian (and gay) couples from the BDSM scene that I know (personally), the SM-heavy elements are much more pronounced than the "same-sex" ones.

 

So does paying attention to reality help the mod author to create a fiction... a fiction that is essentially for an audience that is "not the least bit interested" in this reality?

[fishburger67]

On 2/22/2025 at 11:59 AM, Lyyli said:

 

Like the other poster, my identity is more of "queer" or "sapphic" than lesbian, but I am married to a woman (or maybe, it's a developing situation, a non-binary person) so I guess I count. =p I'm not big into dirty talk personally, but I've read plenty of lesbian romance (and have done an inordinate amount of text-based online roleplay over the years) -- I'm willing to give a go at uh, translating your scenes, if you like.

 

May I send you a PM to get started?

[fishburger67]

On 2/22/2025 at 3:50 PM, DrunkenCow said:

 

Literally covered decades ago by a fairly decent lesbian author: https://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-write-lesbian-sex-scenes

 

tl;dr - butch lesbians can be considered dudes; the vast majority of animations available to you will use dildos so maybe stop stressing that you aren't female.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll head over there and see if I can read it.

[fishburger67]

On 2/24/2025 at 7:31 PM, Vexing Fox said:

I mean if you need inspire yourself to write something like that than I suggest read a few romance novels, movies, etc. Asking the very few women here is not going to lead alot of results. Besides someone like me or other girls that use this site tend to have very weird view of romance or kinks that are unusual for most girls so asking around here might be pointless since were unusual for being here and play skyrim . Take me for example I like being degraded and dominated, I expect most girls don't like to be insulted so Instead just write out what you enjoy for a female/lesbian characters and you might figure out what dialogue to use.

 

 

You would be surprised to found out how many girls like your kinks.  The Dark Possession scene was written for just one such woman who offered her help and asked for a favor (although I apparently did not get it exactly right for her).

[Raven 54]

9 minutes ago, fishburger67 said:

May I send you a PM to get started?

I have nothing to offer here, just wanted to say I like that you asked permission to send a PM, wish more users did this.

Also thanks for reworking the mod, Your Time, Effort, Talent is appreciated.

[fishburger67]

On 2/25/2025 at 4:57 AM, Miauzi said:

 

The only problem is that the sex industry is essentially male-dominated - that is, men produce for both heterosexual and homosexual customers... and essentially it is men who are the customers.

 

Accordingly, the "lesbian" sex films are not intended for lesbian customers - but for (essentially) heterosexual men... and the corresponding (male) clichés are served.

 

A few years ago I was able to attend a demo screening of a lesbian porn film - which was actually shot (and therefore produced!) by women.

But here too, the typical male clichés (sexual intercourse with a dildo) were served... why? -> essentially male (and not female) customers.

 

But the idea of sex between gay men is also burdened with the typical (heterosexual MALE) prejudices... the vast majority assume that there must be a division of roles between men as "man" (aka "active") and "woman" (aka "passive").

And there is another level -> the power imbalance

This is about "sex slaves" - that already includes the elements of "dominance" and "submission" right from the start... and of course this is reflected in the dialogues required for this.

 

In the lesbian (and gay) couples from the BDSM scene that I know (personally), the SM-heavy elements are much more pronounced than the "same-sex" ones.

 

So does paying attention to reality help the mod author to create a fiction... a fiction that is essentially for an audience that is "not the least bit interested" in this reality?

 

Thanks for the feedback.  Your thoughts are mine exactly and that is why I am asking for real lesbian input so I can get it right.

 

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So does paying attention to reality help the mod author to create a fiction... a fiction that is essentially for an audience that is "not the least bit interested" in this reality?

The coming version is not a lot like the current version.  In the next version, your primary task is give the chance for each slave to choose their own fate (sort of, you are actually choosing for them with some personality inputs from me).  You are also a hero (or heroine) here trying to make right the wrongs that were committed on some of these women.  You are highly esteemed for your sexual prowess and become more so as the dozen or so quests progress. 

 

It is therefore essential to have have good feedback from the female crowd.

[lbHanna]

    sounds like we need some females in here to get this going 

[fishburger67]

I am nearly done with this.  If I can get some female help some time, I might revisit it if there is enough interest.  As it is now, it is only for male player characters (or female is you don't mind references to male parts).