My first animation, feel free to critique!

[YammiJammi]

I am an absolute beginner and have no idea what's going on for most of the time but I'm having so much fun with blender that I wanted to share what I've made so far. If all goes well I may add this animation to the strip dance category when I manage to wrap my head around importing the thing XD

   

 

 

[Simpossible_xx]

Ooh, I really like the facial expression animation. It is a bit chaotic, but that seductive tongue is just adorable! Maybe adjust the timing for the hand movements to make it more smooth.

 

As a total beginner in animation I'd say that's a good start, thanks for sharing! I'm also working on my first animation right now, so feel free to message me if you want to learn and grow together. 😉

[SilentAegis]

Not an animator, but if it helps anyway, I concur with the above. I like the facial animation, it's got a lot of personality, but her hands when they go up to her head and back down seems a bit too fast. 

 

Still, very good start. 

[vinceguldo]

It seems great! I agree, the only not-great part is the arms movement at 3rd and 4th seconds 

[YammiJammi]

21 hours ago, Simpossible_xx said:

Ooh, I really like the facial expression animation. It is a bit chaotic, but that seductive tongue is just adorable! Maybe adjust the timing for the hand movements to make it more smooth.

 

As a total beginner in animation I'd say that's a good start, thanks for sharing! I'm also working on my first animation right now, so feel free to message me if you want to learn and grow together. 😉

Thank you so much! I'm still trying to wrap my head around keyframes, I know I can move and delete but I find sometimes that doesn't really do anything? Still not too sure.

 

Oh you're a newbie too! Dude, I'd be down for sharing and learning! it would be invaluable! x

 

10 hours ago, SilentAegis said:

Not an animator, but if it helps anyway, I concur with the above. I like the facial animation, it's got a lot of personality, but her hands when they go up to her head and back down seems a bit too fast. 

 

Still, very good start. 

The hands are nagging at me man XD but noted, going to fiddle around and see what I can do. Thanks so much! x

6 hours ago, vinceguldo said:

It seems great! I agree, the only not-great part is the arms movement at 3rd and 4th seconds 

Thanks for the feedback, definatley going to refine it so it's not so jankey XD x