[RAGS] Gender switch.

[rebby]

seems everyone is doing RAGS these days, so i thought i'd take a crack at it too.

i've managed to come a bit on the way, but i kinda put my foot in the mouth when i wrote the title.

 

http://www.4shared.com/file/KfVIwq6r/Gene_stealers_015.html

 

yes, the title says gene stealers. and no it has nothing to do with 40k

question is, what would a better title be?

 

also: WARNING, this game contains nudity, violence and adult themes. and if that offends you gtfo

you will need the rags engine to run the game, free for download http://www.ragsgame.com/Downloads.aspx

 

if you have comments, suggestions, bugs, crabs, itches, cake or cookies, please leave them below.

 

2013-4-06

http://www.4shared.com/file/HmMRx1_H/GenCo_X_016.html

 

small update, and a name change

[alako]

Are those all custom graphics? What software did you use to create them?

[cereburn]

I played through twice, other than converting an xy to an xx, what else happens that makes gene stealers an appropriate title?

[rebby]

@alako

most are from premium play darkness, the rest form various games and internet grabs

 

@cereburn

thats the thing, i started making the game without thinking about its title. so its stuck with that name until i can come up with a better one

[cereburn]

@alako

most are from premium play darkness, the rest form various games and internet grabs

 

@cereburn

thats the thing, i started making the game without thinking about its title. so its stuck with that name until i can come up with a better one

 

I'm trying to get a sense of what the game is really about, that's why I'm asking.  Otherwise my suggestions will be Towel Snatcher 3000 or something.

[FlyingLemon]

How about The Calamaties of A New Body as the new title?

[cereburn]

A prick took my dick and how I got even.

[Mailamea]

fun fun fun, cant wait for more

[Sparlimb]

Unsure what title to suggest without knowing much about the direction you plan on taking, but it certainly is a fun beginning!

[XJ347]

I am about to give it a try. Give's me a nice break from working on my own game. I'm 80% done with coding chapter 1 and really could use a break!

 

<now played> 

Did a quick run through and I like it. Premium play darkness works well with your display pictures.

 

Your game obviously needs some polishing along the lines of display text.

 

You start in the Laboratory and the next room over is called corridor. - The text capitalization isn't consistent.

 

Your objects are Towel(worn) and debug. - The text capitalization isn't consistent.

its late, and you've just given your report to Mr Frost. - You need to capitalize It's

 

Some of your text is so long/big that I had to scroll up to read the same section..  I would use a slightly smaller sized font, I had to override yours to see it properly.

 

Other things...

 

Hmm once you search the car, the search action stays there. Not a big deal, but it would be nice to say you found nothing, or remove the search action if it can find nothing.

 

Once you have the Keys to the car, the hotwire option is still there.

 

Think that is it...

 

Ohhhh, for the BJ scene, the guard would wake up... BUT if you just gave him a BJ maybe he would let you go... Minor logic issue, feel free to ignore me.

 

I really enjoyed your game so far. Thanks!

 

 

[cereburn]

Rebby,

I and a few others are still waiting for you to tell us what the game is really about so that we can give you better, non-joking suggestions for titles.

 

That being said, if you aren't answering because you got run over by a bus, I hope you get better.

 

-CB

[rebby]

thanks for your concern CB. luckily that truck only graced me.

 

as for what the game is about. well.... its still in the making.

 

but the story is what is presented so far. your a scientist working on a treatment for old age, and your boss tries to kill you.

(im not expecting any praise for the story)

but you survive and become a girl instead. what follows is how you deal with it.

[cereburn]

thanks for your concern CB. luckily that truck only graced me.

 

as for what the game is about. well.... its still in the making.

 

but the story is what is presented so far. your a scientist working on a treatment for old age, and your boss tries to kill you.

(im not expecting any praise for the story)

but you survive and become a girl instead. what follows is how you deal with it.

Thinking about the game summaries you've read on the back of the boxes for other games, how would you describe this game in two paragraphs?

[Nonsense667]

Identity

 

Witness Protection (Get it? )

 

A New Body

 

Life in a New Body

 

The Man who was a Woman

 

Dr. Genderswap

 

The Otherside

 

============

 

Any of those any good? Oh, and sexvilla... ewww.  

[rebby]

thanks for the suggestions Nonsense.

maybe i'll consider them if i ever make a sequel.

 

and concerning sexvilla...

i'll try to stay away from it as much as possible. that poser UI is a nightmare

[rebby]

Thinking about the game summaries you've read on the back of the boxes for other games, how would you describe this game in two paragraphs?

 

 

i dont think i've read the back of a game box in years, i simply looked at the pegi rating.

but lets try:

erotic mystery adventure about life, lust and greed.

rated R for sex Romp

 

meh, sounded funnier in my head...

[cereburn]

Yeah...Uhm...you and your english teacher need to get back together and talk about paragraphs.

 

I don't think PEGI uses R.  

 

Do you have the endings mapped out for this story or are you writing it according to where you think the character will go next?

 

 

[rebby]

i know pegi doesnt use R.....

*pouts* so much for trying to be funny.....

 

yup, pretty much writing it as i go along. nothing set in stone yet

[cereburn]

In that case, just keep a temp title and rename it when you get out of beta.

[teremaster]

i'm getting "file link invalid" errors?

[rebby]

project is abandoned.

feel free to edit or continue as you like

http://www.4shared.com/file/hqMg-FRk/genetic_switch.html

[cereburn]

That sucks, I'm sorry to hear it.  Care to share the reasons for not continuing?

[rebby]

lack of time and motivation. its also quite a mess code wise, and i really lack the motivation of cleaning it up