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Rage of the Northman part 1


Midnight19

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Prafect Ragnar Long-Prick has just finished his service in the legion, he has went to meet his Childhood sweet heart, Charlotte 

 

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Charlotte Ragnar ? are you finally done with your service ?

 

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Ragnar : yes my dear, with the money i purchased a home, a horse, and a forge, 

 

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Charlotte your finally going to settle down and become a blacksmith ?

Ragnar : yes, but i their is one thing i don't have.

Charlotte : and what is that ?

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Ragnar will you marry me ?

Charlotte Yes! 

 

Next Week

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Maramal do you take this man as your Husband  ?

Charllotte i do 

Maramel : and do you take this woman as your wife ?

Ragnar : i Do. 

Maramal : with the Power vested in me by Mara i pronounce you married

 

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a few days later

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Ragnar i know its small, but its ours, 

Charlotte i love it,

Ragnar : Now lets consummate the marriage!

 

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Charlotte : wow, now i know why they call you "Long-Prick"

 

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Ragnar : i love you

Charlotte : i love you too.

 

The Next Day Ragnar starts to work in his forge Smiting a dozen of swords  within the 1st week*

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Charlotte : how things going at the forge ?

Ragnar :  Good, im going to sell the swords to the Khajiit caravan"

Charlotte are you sure that is a good idea ?

Ragnar the Companions have  Greymane, and the City guard has the stewards Daughter, and i highly doubt they want to sell a Competitors Wares

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Charlotte i suppose your right...

 

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Charlotte anyway, i want to polish your "Sword"

Ragnar : then  here it is.

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the Next day 

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Kajiit This ones Tent is not set up yet, but i will still do business with you.

Ragnar :  let me get the crate.

after the exchange ragnar goes home and goes to bed, however he is hit in the back of the head and wokens in the middle of the night, restrained and gagged, to Imperial Legionaries are in his house

 

 

 

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Ragnar Mmhhph (what in Oblivion is going on?)

 

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Imperial 1 you shouldn't of sold those swords to that Cat

Imperial 2 those Swords ended up in the hands of Brigands, those brigands killed our squad"

 

One of the Imperials begin to rape Charlotte

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Charlotte No! Stop! take it out! 

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the Imperial then starts to Force her to blow him

Imperial : this should keep you quiet.

 

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Ragnar : AAAARRRRGGGG!!!!!!!

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Ragnar breaks his binds and grabs hos Axe  

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Ragnar Kills both of the imperials        20190722030935-1.jpg

 

 

Charlotte (sobbing) please forgive me! i didn't want to have sex with him!

Ragnar : no i am sorry, i failed to protect you. 

 

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Ragnar i will Kill all of these Imperial Bastards, 

Charlotte you what ?

Ragnar : i will join the Jarl of Windhelm, in his War.

Charlotte but...

Ragnar They broke into our House!, they Raped you! they Cuckolded Me! i will not stand by! i wasted 10 years of my Live in the Legion! and this how they Repay me ? i swear to Talos i will stop at nothing until they and their Thalmor Overlords are Driven out Skyrim!    

Charlotte but what about me ? what about us ?

Ragnar , but just in case more of those bastards shows up i will forge you a protective Chastity belt.

Charlotte : are you serious ? 

Ragnar i will visit as often as possible, i will keep the Key on me, but in the case of my demise you can find a copy of the key in the Oak in the yard. but do not touch it unless you have received notice of my death.

Charlotte : *sigh* okay honey"

Ragnar : enough of this talk for now, we need to clean this mess up.

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Hey, a new blog! :D

I absolutely love the name! Long-Prick :joy:?

What did they call him in the Legion? Prick? :sweat_smile: His hair style is great!

 

You're off to a good start, overall, and I think you will find your own pace and style with time. Though I noticed Charlotte does not seem to have any facial expressions at all, that's kind of creepy...
 

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I agree with Ingun, there's a lack in expressions and lip syncing. The scenario as well somewhat lacks as it is strange in a way that in less than an evening newly forged swords could be sold twice, already used for lethal applications, and traced back to Ragnar by two stray dogs of the legion. Same for a legionnaire swearing on Talos. But despite of this, the freeing of Ragnar from his bonds was impressive, the relatively harsh turns of events makes it more compelling to read, and your character design is pleasing to the eye. 

 

Now I noticed since quite a few entries you don't answer to feedback anymore, so I'll probably stop bothering you with comments. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

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On 7/27/2019 at 4:18 AM, Tirloque said:

I agree with Ingun, there's a lack in expressions and lip syncing. The scenario as well somewhat lacks as it is strange in a way that in less than an evening newly forged swords could be sold twice, already used for lethal applications, and traced back to Ragnar by two stray dogs of the legion. Same for a legionnaire swearing on Talos. But despite of this, the freeing of Ragnar from his bonds was impressive, the relatively harsh turns of events makes it more compelling to read, and your character design is pleasing to the eye. 

 

Now I noticed since quite a few entries you don't answer to feedback anymore, so I'll probably stop bothering you with comments. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

well the idea was the found out by torturing the bandits and then the Kajiit gave him up, 

Ragnar was a secret Talos worshiper when he was in the legion, then he retired, as for the facial animations i will work on it in the future. 

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