Always playing with the ambiguity between possible reality and illusions I see, that's excellent and opens a lot of flavorful jokes/situations. And ending the entry on such cliffhanger is a good idea as well, as we can only imagine how unsure your elf is of what's happening or not. Good job. ^^

PS : about long loading times, I think you should resize and recompress your images. 3840x2160 and 2 MB/image is absolute overkill for web publishing. You could easily recompress them to 1600x900 with jpeg compression at 95 and get the same result... but with loading times 5x faster. You can use Irfanview for batch compression/resize purposes if you don't have already a tool to do so.

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Always playing with the ambiguity between possible reality and illusions I see, that's excellent and opens a lot of flavorful jokes/situations. And ending the entry on such cliffhanger is a good idea as well, as we can only imagine how unsure your elf is of what's happening or not. Good job. ^^

 

PS : about long loading times, I think you should resize and recompress your images. 3840x2160 and 2 MB/image is absolute overkill for web publishing. You could easily recompress them to 1600x900 with jpeg compression at 95 and get the same result... but with loading times 5x faster. You can use Irfanview for batch compression/resize purposes if you don't have already a tool to do so.

 

Thanks for the comment. I just want the better quality for images. Next time I will resize it to 1920x1080 for faster loading :). 

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Very nicely done. As Tirloque said, the play of reality and illusion is excellent ... ghost? vampire? succubus? protective spirit, uh, no think not?

Wait to see next part.