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Chapter 13-Beauties Bathing


BoLtStEr2002

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Colour coding:

Shea: Red

Sofia: Purple

None dialogue: Grey

 

 

 

"I don't suppose you mind me joining you do you?" I asked as Sofia quickly shifted her attention towards me, just how I liked it. "What am I saying? of course you don't mind."

I smirked as she began to grow a little bit red and I could soon see her frustration. I hoped it was sexual frustration, she was cute when she didn't know what to do.

 

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"What? I mean yes, sure come take a seat the water is nice and warm." Saying this she slightly gestured to the water and swilled her hand, gently in it creating a small whirlpool that disappeared as quickly as it appeared.

 

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"I'm sure it is, there is a reason I came here, and besides you look bored." I slowly began to step into the water allowing it to seep towards me and envelop me in its warm and gentle waves.

 

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"Well.." She seemed to struggle for what to say, normally I was the one who did that. i must've been doing quite well. "I mean yes I am bored, but you always make things more exciting."

 

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"How about I just sit here, this seems a nice.." I took a seat beside Sofia. "...and comfortable place to sit."

 

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"Of course it's a nice place to sit, it's next to me." She boasted though I could see that her mind was becoming clouded with other thoughts.

 

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"I don't know how you always know what to say...well most of the time."

 

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"Because I'm good at thinking on the spot, that's why I run everything with messages. I'm quick. Anyway, you say most of the time, normally I have time to think about what I want to say. you did just appear out of nowhere."

 

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"So you think about me, whenever I appear out of nowhere. How quaint."

 

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"Well one of us has to be romantic, you certainly aren't so I have to. And anyway being the romantic isn't always boring, in fact I remember a few nights ago when it was exciting."

 

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"As much as I love talking with the most beautiful women I know, I did come here to get clean and I'm sure you did as well. Would you care to join me?"

 

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"I would, but I'm already clean, and besides two clean bodies brushing and grinding against each other is much better."

 

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"I'd say two wet bodies would be better, but that's just personal preference I think."

 

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"No, I like you no matter how you feel. Dry, wet or oily, I'd gladly take you, as I'm sure you'd do the same with me."

 

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"Okay, last chance, are you sure you don't want to step under the water with me?"

 

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"It's still a no, besides I've only just got my hair dry, I'll gladly watch though."

 

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"Of course you will, I suppose we can catch up tonight."

 

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"Come on don't look at me like that, you know I can barely resist you anyway."

 

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"Then don't resist me. I'm ready."

 

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"Fine, you want that, you'll get that."

 

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"C'mon you can do better than that."

 

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"I know I can, but to do that, we'd have to move...elsewhere."

 

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A few minutes later...

 

"I think you'll like what I have in store for you."

"Don't make this just about you. We need to share, remember."

 

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"Then let me share."

 

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"Damn I should've let you do this earlier."

 

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"Of course you should've but you're too stubborn. Relax a little."

 

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"Oh I promise I will."

 

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End of Chapter 13

 

Thank you for reading this far, your views and feedback are appreciated. I've kept this short as you've probably noticed I'm trying a different style, focusing on the dialogue rather than descriptions. Feel free to let me know what you think. Any critique is welcome. 

 

I apologise for this being shorter as I didn't want to write a large amount in case you don't like the format. but for the most part, they have expression. Yay!

 

 

 

 

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5 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very nice chapter. Compliments. Enjoyed very much especially in love scene. ;)

Thank you very much!

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