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Sloan's story chapter 57 - The Night Mother


jfraser

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The sanctuary had a way of changing without moving. It was the same stone, the same low ceilings that held the smoke close, the same dark corners that ate sound; yet, as Sloan drove the cart through the larger of the entrance passages with Cicero’s bells chiming like a warning no one had asked for, the air felt altered, somehow. It was like a room after someone says a name that shouldn’t be spoken out loud.

 

Cicero bounced at her shoulder, hands fluttering, muttering affectionate nonsense, as he had not stopped doing (there were only so many times one could hear the word “dearest mother” without going insane, Sloan had decided. Which might help explain Cicero.)

 

The sanctuary opened into the main cavern and the attention hit them all at once. Not a shout, or even a pause in motion; just the subtle turn of bodies, fractional shifts of weight, the minute redirection of gazes. The Brotherhood did not panic - it simply…recalculated.

 

Sloan could see each of them even where they thought shadow made them invisible, but she kept her eyes where the braziers cast light, let herself appear appropriately limited; let them believe the dark still did its work on her.

 

Cicero, of course, did not pretend anything.

 

“Ohhh, home!” he cried, arms wide, bells ringing. “Cicero has come to his new home! With a wheel that lived and a road that screamed and…” he leaned over the cart, whispering loudly toward the iron-bound box secured behind the bench, “…with you, yes. Safe and sound. Very safe. Very sound!”

 

Sloan did not look at the box, she watched the room, noting the way each member’s eyes told a different story – some focused on it, some avoided it, some seemed to circle it, as if they wanted to look but were afraid of getting burned.

 

The cart came to a halt and Lexzal stopped beside it, looking much as he had when they had first started traveling with Cicero – as if he wanted to be anywhere else.

 

Kira appeared as if the sanctuary had opened to let her through. No dramatic entrance, or announcement; she simply stepped into the space the way a blade slides into a sheath. Her eyes took everything in -- Sloan, Lexzal, Cicero, the cart, the box -- in a glance.

 

“So,” Kira said, voice even. “You found him.”

 

Cicero clapped as if praised. “Found! Yes! Found and rescued and celebrated and -- oh! Look! Everyone’s faces! Such beautiful faces. Such tense faces.”

 

“Cicero,” Kira said.

 

He froze in place mid-bounce, grin bright. “Yes?”

 

“You will stop talking for the span of three breaths.”

 

Cicero’s grin wavered, as if the request physically pained him. Then he clasped his hands under his chin and shut his mouth with theatrical obedience.

 

One breath.

 

Two.

 

Three.

 

The moment the third breath passed, he burst out, “Cicero did it! Cicero is very good at discipline!”

 

Kira’s gaze remained steady. “Put the box on the table.”

 

Cicero looked scandalized. “On the -- on the table? But that’s where food goes! Mother does not like crumbs.”

 

Sloan’s spine tightened at the word. Mother. Cicero said it like it was obvious, like the room should nod along.

 

Kira did not even blink. “On the table.”

 

Cicero began to move very slowly, but Lexzal didn’t -- he approached with the same measured calm he’d used on the roadside, hands steady, movements economical. He didn’t touch the box immediately; first, he unloosened the straps, released the tension, tested the weight as with any other cargo. Yet Sloan noticed he kept his fingers just slightly away from the iron bands, as if touching them might impart some of Cicero’s insanity upon him.

 

Finally, he grasped the box and lifted. The wood did not creak, the iron did not rattle; the box seemed like a box, too normal for something that had caused this much tension. Cicero followed Lexzal with bouncing steps, hovering near his shoulder as he narrated under his breath like a priest at a ceremony.

 

“Careful, careful. Gently. Mother hates being jostled. She likes smooth roads. But roads are not smooth, are they? No, they are disappointing.”

 

Lexzal placed the box on the table. The sound it made -- wood on wood -- was ordinary. The silence that followed was not.

 

Kira stepped closer. “Everyone out,” she said, still calm. “Not all of you. Naza, Lexzal, Sloan, stay.”

 

Tusef’s jaw tightened, but he moved. Babette smiled and drifted away as if leaving was her idea. Vezeera was already gone before Kira finished speaking. Cicero did not move at all until Kira looked at him.

 

“You also.”

 

Cicero gasped. “But Cicero is the Keeper! Cicero carried her! Cicero protected her from mean farmers and judgmental roads and…”

 

Kira lifted a hand. Cicero’s mouth snapped shut. He bowed extravagantly, bells chiming, then backed away in a series of prancing steps until he was swallowed by the shadows of a side passage.

 

Even then, his voice carried faintly: “She likes this part. The suspense.”

 

When they were alone enough that the sanctuary didn’t feel like it was listening, Kira placed her palm on the top of the box. Sloan expected a reaction -- a chill, or a pulse of something. Instead, it was just a hand on wood.

 

Kira looked at Sloan. “You don’t know what this is.”

 

It wasn’t a question.

 

“Kind of. Lexzal mentioned something called the Night Mother but did not provide more details.”

 

Lexzal’s staff tapped once against the stone. The sound felt too loud.

 

Naza leaned back against the table, arms folded loosely. “That’s for the best,” she said, tone light. “It is better to travel unburdened.”

 

Sloan’s eyes flipped to where Cicero had exited. “I wouldn’t call it that, exactly.”

 

Kira did not smile. “Lexzal was correct. This is the Night Mother.”

 

Lexzal’s pale eyes rested on her. “She is an instrument. And a symbol.”

 

Naza’s smile widened. “And a problem.”

 

Kira’s fingers remained on the box. “She’s supposed to be our conduit. When someone performs the Black Sacrament, she becomes aware.”

 

Sloan frowned. “Becomes aware how?”

 

Kira’s gaze sharpened. “That doesn’t matter. It is enough that it’s true.”

 

Lexzal’s posture stayed composed, but Sloan saw the tension in his grip on the staff. “Awareness is not usefulness. Not without a Listener.”

 

Kira’s eyes flicked to him, acknowledgment. “Exactly.”

 

Sloan looked between them. “Listener?” The word landed like a missing piece she hadn’t known was missing.

 

Naza sighed theatrically, as if disappointed to be dragged into doctrine. “A Listener hears what the Mother ‘says.’ And then the Listener tells the rest of us where the contracts are.”

 

Sloan blinked. “So…the Brotherhood is supposed to be getting work from…her.”

 

Kira’s expression went flat. “Yes. That is the old way.”

 

Naza’s amusement sharpened. “And the way we haven’t had in years.”

 

“Indeed.” Kira sighed. “There has been no Listener here for a long time.”

 

“And without one,” Lexzal added, “the Night Mother is inert. A sacred object without function.”

 

Cicero’s distant voice drifted from somewhere in the corridor, as if he’d been waiting for the cue: “She is never inert! She is always…”

 

“Kira,” Naza called without raising her voice, “your leash is slipping.”

 

There was a brief pause, then Cicero’s tone changed instantly to bright compliance: “Cicero is quiet!”

 

Kira didn’t look toward the corridor. “Without a Listener, the old pipeline is broken.”

 

Sloan stared at the box. Nothing about it looked like a pipeline. It looked like wood, iron, and the kind of careful craftsmanship used for things meant to survive long journeys.

 

“And you’ve still been getting contracts,” Sloan said slowly, the pieces shifting into place.

 

Kira’s mouth twitched, almost a smile and almost not. “Yes.”

 

“How do you know when someone has done the dark sacrament? How do you find contracts?”

 

Kira’s hand slid from the box to the map table as if moving away from a touch that carried weight. “We don’t know every single time someone performs the ritual, of course. But the world does not stop needing people dead because we lack ceremony. People talk. People pray in their own ways. People have grudges and grief and coin.”

 

Naza’s tone warmed with genuine respect underneath the bite. “Contacts,” she said, as if tasting the word. “Informants. Favors. Bribes. Old friends.”

 

Kira’s eyes did not leave Sloan’s. “We listen. In taverns. In kitchens. In bedchambers. In letters passed hand to hand. I built the web and now we maintain it. It may seem as if there are few of us in this tong, but we number in the thousands – we have people all across Skyrim gathering information. When someone wants something done, they always tell someone. If you know how to hear it, you can route it.”

 

Sloan felt herself flush as she shook her head. Her question had been stupid – of course Kira didn’t need mysterious prayers around skeletons and hearts; she had run the Vixen without such things, after all.

 

Lexzal’s voice was quiet. “And now, a different machine has been placed on your table.”

 

Kira’s eyes narrowed by a fraction. It was the closest thing to real emotion she’d shown.

 

Naza watched Kira like a cat watches a door. “The old way will inspire the devout. And the ambitious.”

 

Kira’s voice lowered. “I am not afraid of the Night Mother. I am afraid of what people will do with her presence.”

 

Sloan glanced down the corridor where Cicero had vanished. “And Cicero?”

 

Kira’s gaze flicked, quick as a blade. “Cicero is a courier. A relic-bearer. He has a story and a devotion and a mouth that never closes.”

 

Naza’s smile returned, sharp. “And he stands next to the box like a priest who wasn’t ordained.”

 

Sloan remembered the road; Cicero whispering about Mother’s likes and dislikes, as if the box had opinions and he was simply skilled enough to interpret them.

 

“He doesn’t hear her,” Sloan said before she could stop herself.

 

Three sets of eyes shifted to her. Sloan felt heat crawl up her neck. She kept her expression neutral.

 

Kira’s gaze lingered, assessing. “What makes you say that?”

 

Sloan chose her words carefully. “He talks as if he knows. But it’s…performance. Inference.”

 

Lexzal’s staff tapped once. “Correct.”

 

Kira’s eyes narrowed, not at Sloan, but at the implication. “Then Cicero is not a Listener. That makes things easier – I admit to some concern about what would happen if he started trying to talk for her.” She stepped back from the table. “We will secure the box. We will contain Cicero. We will allow the sanctuary to adjust.”

 

Naza’s tone was almost too casual. “And what happens if a real Listener appears?”

 

Kira’s gaze sharpened. “Then we will deal with it.”

 

Lexzal’s voice was quiet. “And if one does not?”

 

“Then nothing changes.”

 

They separated on those words, but Sloan knew them to be false -- something had already changed. She did not know what the Night Mother really was, but she knew power when she felt it. And the sanctuary felt like a room where power had just been introduced -- quietly, politely -- and everyone was now deciding whether to bow, resist, or pretend not to notice until it was too late.

 

 

 

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Edited by jfraser

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fred200

Posted

Trying to figure out the relationship between Astrid and Kira.

Kira is clearly performing Astrid's function.

No Astrid in this timeline?

By all rights - I expect we will see Sloan discovering she is the Listener.

Please remember - there are better uses for Cicero - than dead.

HM1919

Posted

Another rather atmospheric chapter. 😊 No high octane action, but instead just the forboding feeling that something's gonna happen. Soon. Very nice. 👍

 

Currently I'm wondering wether there's going to be a listener in Shae-Skyrim, or if we'll get another one of those (in)famous JFraser plot-twists in that regard. Also considering how such a plot-twist might look like. 

 

I guess this will go on my growing list of things to speculate about, right next to the topic of mighty Merks' (hopefully) grisly demise. 

jfraser

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2 hours ago, fred200 said:

Trying to figure out the relationship between Astrid and Kira.

Kira is clearly performing Astrid's function.

No Astrid in this timeline?

By all rights - I expect we will see Sloan discovering she is the Listener.

Please remember - there are better uses for Cicero - than dead.

 

Kira = Astrid for our purposes. I would never kill Cicero. At least, not in a meaningless way -- as you have seen, no one is safe. ;)

 

2 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Another rather atmospheric chapter. 😊 No high octane action, but instead just the forboding feeling that something's gonna happen. Soon. Very nice. 👍

 

Currently I'm wondering wether there's going to be a listener in Shae-Skyrim, or if we'll get another one of those (in)famous JFraser plot-twists in that regard. Also considering how such a plot-twist might look like. 

 

I guess this will go on my growing list of things to speculate about, right next to the topic of mighty Merks' (hopefully) grisly demise. 

 

Yeah, this is one of those bridge chapters that has to exist to support what comes next. Not too exciting, sorry! Maybe i should make two posts every Bridge Chapter Week. XD

 

That is correct - you have no idea what might happen to Merks. If I were to guess, I would bet he captures the other sisters as well and has his own Shae harem.

HM1919

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52 minutes ago, jfraser said:

Not too exciting, sorry!

Nothing to be sorry about. Matter of fact, I like it this way. For one, because you managed to capture the creepy atmosphere of the DB sanctuary quite nicely. Then there's also the point, that characters who can sustain nonstop action indefinitely tend to feel less human. At least that's how I see it. Because even the mightiest of heroes should need a break every now and again, no?🤔

jfraser

Posted

3 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Nothing to be sorry about. Matter of fact, I like it this way. For one, because you managed to capture the creepy atmosphere of the DB sanctuary quite nicely. Then there's also the point, that characters who can sustain nonstop action indefinitely tend to feel less human. At least that's how I see it. Because even the mightiest of heroes should need a break every now and again, no?🤔

Yes. I just don't want you readers to feel bored or disappointed that nothing really happened and now you have to wait and week for another one ;)

HM1919

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1 hour ago, jfraser said:

If I were to guess, I would bet he captures the other sisters as well and has his own Shae harem.

Nah, I don't believe that. Not unless we get more time-shenanigans, where Merks somehow manages to study under a Lich for at least a couple of centuries before enacting his cunning ploy. Otherwise there's just no way his puny magic could hold all four of the sisters. 😊 I mean, Trendil's pissed off glare alone would be enough to make his d*ck shrivel up and die, surely. And Sloan? She'd likely let him do what he wants. And then poison him while he's busy. Like she did with the dude in Windhelm.

 

p.s. Actually letting him capture all four Shaes could be entertaining. So, let him capture them, I say. Allow the sisters spirits and energies to fuse, to become one, and to do what they are supposed to do: Summon a thoroughly peeved Melissa! A Melissa that would then swiftly proceed to annihilate poor, little Merks...  Yes, that would be fun. And also appropriate. 🤔

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jfraser

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1 hour ago, HM1919 said:

Nah, I don't believe that. Not unless we get more time-shenanigans, where Merks somehow manages to study under a Lich for at least a couple of centuries before enacting his cunning ploy. Otherwise there's just no way his puny magic could hold all four of the sisters. 😊 I mean, Trendil's pissed off glare alone would be enough to make his d*ck shrivel up and die, surely. And Sloan? She'd likely let him do what he wants. And then poison him while he's busy. Like she did with the dude in Windhelm.

 

p.s. Actually letting him capture all four Shaes could be entertaining. So, let him capture them, I say. Allow the sisters spirits and energies to fuse, to become one, and to do what they are supposed to do: Summon a thoroughly peeved Melissa! A Melissa that would then swiftly proceed to annihilate poor, little Merks...  Yes, that would be fun. And also appropriate. 🤔

 

Omg, if all four Shaes are too close together the fuse like Voltron and become the Ultimate Shae - Melissa! She doesn't really exist separately and none of the four remember when this happens, so they all just think of her as a distant figure. 

 

That would be an amazing twist - Melissa is actually a mech. XD

HM1919

Posted (edited)

6 minutes ago, jfraser said:

 

Omg, if all four Shaes are too close together the fuse like Voltron and become the Ultimate Shae - Melissa! She doesn't really exist separately and none of the four remember when this happens, so they all just think of her as a distant figure. 

 

That would be an amazing twist - Melissa is actually a mech. XD

I suppose there were signs all along... I mean, Me-lissa... Mecha-Lissa... Yeah... I can see it now.🤔😉

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jfraser

Posted

15 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

I suppose there were signs all along... I mean, Me-lissa... Mecha-Lissa... Yeah... I can see it now.🤔😉

Lissa means a bee And a shay it is a type of transportation. It was in front of us all the time. Melissa Shae = Stinging Mobile Mech

fred200

Posted

Shae Harem?? Go Team Merks!

Those silver collars won't wear themselves.

jfraser

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2 hours ago, fred200 said:

Shae Harem?? Go Team Merks!

Those silver collars won't wear themselves.

 

Ooh, unexpected turnaround! never thought I would see fred200 on Team Merks! XD 

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