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Trendil's story part 43 - The Usurped Patrol


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The one bright side of the calamities that had befallen the Stormcloaks – the loss of Company E, the lack of reinforcements since they had not procured the Jagged Crown, their missing second-in-command – was that their manpower was low enough that even Company D had to start taking patrols. It was a relief to get out of the city, even though it put Marcus in daily close quarters with Jaunty, who he grew to hate more and more with each passing day.

 

It started with the restrictions on Marcus’ daily sword practice, which Jaunty forbade the moment he saw them (“You are an archer! If you still need more practice, work on that!”). Marcus tried to get around this command by getting up early, while Jaunty was still asleep (their patrols never got moving until the sun was well up and stopped well before sundown; this made for a fairly short day in these mid-autumn weeks) but, as before, Jaunty had his spies, so the loophole was shut down.

 

Jaunty very nearly lost his head when he tried to take the swords from Marcus. This probably would have led to a fight with the entire company and a sudden violent discharge from the Stormcloaks, but Privy, Jaunty’s second in command, talked the fop out of it (“He might need swords if an enemy gets too close.”)

 

The salt flats stretched out in every direction, a blinding white wasteland beneath a pale sky. Marcus trailed behind the company as they marched (well, more like ambled – they were Stormcloaks, after all, and from Company D, at that, so there was nothing akin to “marching” going on in their vicinity, beyond, perhaps, ants in some nearby ant hill). He held his bow in loose hands, his swords strapped across his back. The monotony of the flats made him restless and his mind drifted to memories of another life, another body, and a certain battle on these very plains.

 

He laughed a little at himself. He had warned Bent about patrolling this area, some weeks ago, but, of course, nothing had come of it – at this date last time, she and Bent and the rest had barely been sworn into the Stormcloaks. They were still nearly three months away from that fateful day; the day she had faced her first…

 

“Dragon!”

 

The word sent a jolt through Marcus and he swiveled his head. Sure enough, the familiar form of a dragon was screaming out of the west toward the also-familiar partially built house. Without hesitation, Marcus dropped his bow and started to run forward, swords already half out of their scabbards. At last, his time had come! He would take on the dragon, just as Trendil had before, and prove himself. Even Jaunty would have to…

 

“Marcus!” The officer’s voice cut through the clamor. Jaunty was resplendent in his tailored armor, his hair oiled and his face set in a permanent sneer. “Get back with the archers. You’re not a frontline fighter. I don’t want you anywhere near that thing.”

 

Marcus glared at him, frustration boiling over. “I can help! I’ve done this before!”

 

Jaunty’s eyes narrowed. “You can help by following orders.”

 

“I…”

 

“You’re an archer because I say you’re an archer. You want to play hero, do it on your own time. Today, you follow orders.”

 

“But…”

 

Marcus was interrupted by a boom, so loud it rattled his teeth. Or maybe they just hurt because he was grinding them together in frustration. In the near distance, the dragon’s wings froze mid-flap; it seemed to hover in the air for a moment, then it hurdled to the ground. The impact shook the flats, and just like that, the fight was over.

 

Sure, there was still a little to do - the beast thrashed, tail lashing, claws gouging the earth. Squads A and B rushed in, swords flashing, while Marcus watched, helpless. A woman with dark hair dressed in fur armor held the dragon’s attention, doing something – probably a shield spell – whenever the dragon loosed its flame while the others hacked at the beast. A sandy-haired woman – Holo, Marcus remembered, the wife of the crafty khajiit who had trapped the dragons last time - drove ice into its side. The dragon roared, flopped, then fell still, and Marcus had to acknowledge how impressive the takedown had been. Even she and her Company at their strongest would have been hard pressed to match that time.

 

Jaunty nodded, his face smug. “See? Sometimes the best thing you can do is stay out of the way.” He sauntered toward the remains of the dragon, presumably to take full credit for the kill, and Marcus bit down the retort he so longed to verbalize and began to turn away, but then stopped and turned back.

 

He watched as the strangers – now that the dust had settled, Marcus saw three more, two orcs and a human in College Mage robes – talked with Jaunty and the khajiit. There was something familiar about the dark-haired woman, but her face had been turned away, so he couldn’t…

 

Then she turned and started walking toward the building with the orcs, the mage, and Kra’aft and Holo, and Marcus’ heart skipped a beat. It was one of his sisters; he was sure of it. Probably Aithne, although why she was dressed like the orcs and not in College robes, he could not guess. He called out to her but was too far away to be heard, so he started running toward the building, only to be stopped once again by the returning Jaunty.

 

“I see you are still full of energy. That’s good! And I have more good news for you – you get to use those swords after all! Get over to the dragon and chop off its head. We’re going to bring it back to Windhelm.”

 

“I will in a moment, first I need to…”

 

“What you need to do is follow orders or I’ll have you put in chains! You’ll spend the rest of the war in prison! You are on your last warning, Cuss!”

 

Marcus thought over his options. Killing Jaunty would solve one of his problems but would create several more, beginning with the follow-up necessity of killing the rest of the company, who would surely not take an enlightened view of the situation. The only other option was galling but, really, the only one he had.

 

As he turned and made his way toward the dragon, he tried to comfort himself with the knowledge that it wouldn’t have really mattered had he been able to talk to Aithne - it wasn’t as if he was free to go with her, nor did he have any useful information to give her. Whatever else he had managed to do in this iteration of Skyrim, making progress on his primary tasks was last on the list of accomplishments. 

 

Needless to say, his halfhearted attempts at self-consolation served only to deepen his depression. Not for first time, he cursed himself with bitter breath for choosing this path. Not for the last time, he vowed to find a way to make it work anyway.

 

 

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HM1919

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What a chapter! Poor Marcus' frustration was positively oozing off the screen. I can only hope there will be a suitable reward waiting for him at the end. I can't really think of anything right now, but it would have to be something truely outstanding that could only be achieved by being patient and not ventilating Jaunty's brain-casing and that of his closest cronies. 

I mean, considering Sian was able to defeat the better part of a (presumably more competent) company of Cloaks, it stands to reason that Marcus would have been able to come out on top in this confrontation. IMO a good chunk of the men would likely have decided to leave and live another day - rather then throw their lives away for their sliced-up, former boss. Which in turn would have made Marcus' victory even more likely. And since "he" is a very temporary individual to begin with, this almost certainly wouldn't have turned into another "borrowed horse"-situation either. 

So, yeah, kudos to our  level-headed hero for keeping his cool.

 

Afterthought: During the events of Skyrim 1.0 Trendil had arguably the least trouble among the sisters - relatively speaking. I guess this time it's her turn to suffer - albeit in a very different way than Aithne and Sian had to back in the day.🤔

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jfraser

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1 hour ago, HM1919 said:

What a chapter! Poor Marcus' frustration was positively oozing off the screen. I can only hope there will be a suitable reward waiting for him at the end. I can't really think of anything right now, but it would have to be something truely outstanding that could only be achieved by being patient and not ventilating Jaunty's brain-casing and that of his closest cronies. 

I mean, considering Sian was able to defeat the better part of a (presumably more competent) company of Cloaks, it stands to reason that Marcus would have been able to come out on top in this confrontation. IMO a good chunk of the men would likely have decided to leave and live another day - rather then throw their lives away for their sliced-up, former boss. Which in turn would have made Marcus' victory even more likely. And since "he" is a very temporary individual to begin with, this almost certainly wouldn't have turned into another "borrowed horse"-situation either. 

So, yeah, kudos to our  level-headed hero for keeping his cool.

 

Afterthought: During the events of Skyrim 1.0 Trendil had arguably the least trouble among the sisters - relatively speaking. I guess this time it's her turn to suffer - albeit in a very different way than Aithne and Sian had to back in the day.🤔

Marcus/Trendil (Marcil? Trendus?) has defeated an entire company in the past (and one, as you say, far more competent than this), so I agree he would have a good chance to come out on top. Dealing with stupid/recalcitrant/arrogant bosses is, indeed, among the worst punishments in the lower parts of hell. Will Jaunty get another comeuppance? Only time will tell.

 

Ventilating his brain my help to remove some of that hot air, come to think of it. 🤔

HM1919

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Marcilus Trendulus. Now, that's a proper imperial name, and no mistake about it. Perhaps it can become Marcus' new alias after he succumbed to temptation and given Jaunty the good, old Himmelstoss-treatment*.🤔

 

*In case you haven't read the book: Corporal Himmelstoss is a character from the novel "All quiet on the Western Front". He's a bit of a bully and at one point gets ambushed and beat up by some of the recruits he'd tormented a little too much during basic training.

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jfraser

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22 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Marcilus Trendulus. Now, that's a proper imperial name, and no mistake about it. Perhaps it can become Marcus' new alias after he succumbed to temptation and given Jaunty the good, old Himmelstoss-treatment*.🤔

 

*In case you haven't read the book: Corporal Himmelstoss is a characters from the novel "All quiet on the Western Front". He's a bit of a bully and at one point gets ambushed and beat up by some of the recruits he'd tormented a little too much during basic training.

That is a good Imperial name! Shame he didn't go there.

 

Speaking of shame, i am ashamed to say I have not read (nor watched) that particular classic.

MTB

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On 1/26/2026 at 11:10 AM, HM1919 said:

Poor Marcus' frustration was positively oozing off the screen.

 

Indeed, as boredom is radiating from the picture, just imagine having to amble across that for hours on end (and with haughty servants, I mean underlings, that just can't follow orders).

Too close for comfort. Keep musings and predictions to oneself, or accept causing them, or at least having the nagging feeling they were self fulfilling. 

 

>Not for the last time

Ominous.

 

On 1/26/2026 at 1:04 PM, HM1919 said:

Marcilus Trendulus. Now, that's a proper imperial name, and no mistake about it. Perhaps it can become Marcus' new alias after he succumbed to temptation and given Jaunty the good, old Himmelstoss-treatment

 

No headless recruiter, no headless Jaunty, MT' self control indeed knows no bounds (not to be confused with Mr.T's whose character is not know for that). But then again discipline was drilled into her from day one.  
Without his daily exercises .... stop! no predictions don't do it!


So Privy is right below Jaunty? With all the sh*t coming out of the latter, I guess it's good he's on the privy...  
Such a tortured pun, guess MT' oozing frustration got to me there. 

 

On 1/26/2026 at 11:10 AM, HM1919 said:

Afterthought: During the events of Skyrim 1.0 Trendil had arguably the least trouble among the sisters - relatively speaking. I guess this time it's her turn to suffer - albeit in a very different way than Aithne and Sian had to back in the day.🤔

Her torment seems to be more of the mental kind, and I'm not just talking about her mother. In Skyrim 1.0, while she initially seemed to made quite some progress, she was eventually caught in a fruitless loop of kicking Forsworn out of forts and killing dragons, knowing they'd both come right back again after she left. Completely Sisyphean. And when she does manage to break that loop, she gets to Solitude just to have it be destroyed before her eyes, as she reaches for the crown it moves out of reach, her new love so close and yet out of reach, the life she planed with her first love, janked away as it's about to start.  Anything she desires seems so close, but receding as she reaches for them, the torment of Tantalus all over again.  (Torment of Trendulus?)
(Had to add some cultural references to compensate for that pun.)

 

Looking forward to the continuing adventures of MT, Smol, Birdy E. and Aithe. Hmm we need a nick name for her yet because imagine saying Archmage Shea-Growl-Snob-Go-TaShake-it-knights-who-say-nyi please help me (or something like that, Orcish names are hard to pronounce) with a dragon after you.


And ps to previous exchange:
> ... Waist 
D'oh.

(waist nut wand nut.)

> Challenge
Wouldn't dare, not even for a Scooby snack.

 

 

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jfraser

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6 hours ago, MTB said:

 

Indeed, as boredom is radiating from the picture, just imagine having to amble across that for hours on end (and with haughty servants, I mean underlings, that just can't follow orders).

Too close for comfort. Keep musings and predictions to oneself, or accept causing them, or at least having the nagging feeling they were self fulfilling. 

 

And not even with a horse! Jaunty is, as I'm sure you're all well aware by now, the true hero of this convoluted tale. He had gone through the worst suffering of anyone.

 

6 hours ago, MTB said:

 

>Not for the last time

Ominous.

6 hours ago, MTB said:

 

No headless recruiter, no headless Jaunty, MT' self control indeed knows no bounds (not to be confused with Mr.T's whose character is not know for that). But then again discipline was drilled into her from day one.  
Without his daily exercises .... stop! no predictions don't do it!

 

maybe, in this world where Melissa is an assassin, not a sword school teacher, missing some days of practice won't be a bad as might be expected.

 

unless other world melissa also somehow made the leap... >>

 

6 hours ago, MTB said:


So Privy is right below Jaunty? With all the sh*t coming out of the latter, I guess it's good he's on the privy...  
Such a tortured pun, guess MT' oozing frustration got to me there. 

 

Jaunty sure knows how to pick the names! Just like a hero

 

6 hours ago, MTB said:

 

Her torment seems to be more of the mental kind, and I'm not just talking about her mother. In Skyrim 1.0, while she initially seemed to made quite some progress, she was eventually caught in a fruitless loop of kicking Forsworn out of forts and killing dragons, knowing they'd both come right back again after she left. Completely Sisyphean. And when she does manage to break that loop, she gets to Solitude just to have it be destroyed before her eyes, as she reaches for the crown it moves out of reach, her new love so close and yet out of reach, the life she planed with her first love, janked away as it's about to start.  Anything she desires seems so close, but receding as she reaches for them, the torment of Tantalus all over again.  (Torment of Trendulus?)
(Had to add some cultural references to compensate for that pun.)

 

What is worse: having your heart's desire but having it torn from your grasp or never quite achieving it? Is it truly better to have love and lost than never to have loved at all?

 

6 hours ago, MTB said:

Looking forward to the continuing adventures of MT, Smol, Birdy E. and Aithe. Hmm we need a nick name for her yet because imagine saying Archmage Shea-Growl-Snob-Go-TaShake-it-knights-who-say-nyi please help me (or something like that, Orcish names are hard to pronounce) with a dragon after you.

 

Asgsgtikwsn it is!

 

6 hours ago, MTB said:


And ps to previous exchange:
> ... Waist 
D'oh.

(waist nut wand nut.)

 

If you go on a diet, is that waisting away?

 

6 hours ago, MTB said:

> Challenge
Wouldn't dare, not even for a Scooby snack.

 

 

 

I dunno, it seems like those are pretty addicting.

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MTB

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On 1/31/2026 at 10:41 PM, jfraser said:

And not even with a horse! Jaunty is, as I'm sure you're all well aware by now, the true hero of this convoluted tale. He had gone through the worst suffering of anyone.


Ah, Benrad the jaunty but misunderstood hero.  I see a spin-off series in the making: Dragonsquasher, from mouse tail to hero's tale.
Ep1 The one where he steps on a mouse. 
Ep2 The one where the show is cancelled by popular demand.

 

On 1/31/2026 at 10:41 PM, jfraser said:

unless other world melissa also somehow made the leap

 

Marcus wouldn't put it past her because, as he would say, "She'd know."

 

On 1/31/2026 at 10:41 PM, jfraser said:

If you go on a diet, is that waisting away?

Badumm tss...

If, addicted to Scooby snacks, you go on a binge afterwords (thus undoing all your hard dieting work) is that waist full ?
 

On 1/31/2026 at 10:41 PM, jfraser said:

Asgsgtikwsn it is!


That just rolls off the tongue doesn't it. Maybe her fans will start calling her T.c.f.k.a.A. not that that's much of an improvement.

 

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jfraser

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4 hours ago, MTB said:


Ah, Benrad the jaunty but misunderstood hero.  I see a spin-off series in the making: Dragonsquasher, from mouse tail to hero's tale.
Ep1 The one where he steps on a mouse. 
Ep2 The one where the show is cancelled by popular demand.

 

 

Ep3 Jaunty feels he has no choice but the turn to the dark side to save his reputation from slander, thus cementing his place in history as the one and only Mid-Tone Blather.

 

4 hours ago, MTB said:

Marcus wouldn't put it past her because, as he would say, "She'd know."

 

I can hear her screaming across time and probabilities even now.

 

4 hours ago, MTB said:

 

Badumm tss...

If, addicted to Scooby snacks, you go on a binge afterwords (thus undoing all your hard dieting work) is that waist full ?


 

 

yes, just as snorting coke off someone's hips can get you waisted.

 

4 hours ago, MTB said:


That just rolls off the tongue doesn't it. Maybe her fans will start calling her T.c.f.k.a.A. not that that's much of an improvement.

 

T'chfka sound like the name for an alien from Star Trek

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