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Sloan's Story part 35 - A Generous Offer, All Strings Attached


jfraser

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“Hey, girl! Stop!”

 

Sloan stopped as a burly guard stepped toward her, then put forth her best innocent face.

 

“Me?” She squeaked her voice on the word.

 

“Yes, you.” The guard stopped, towering above her. “What are you doing with that dagger?” He cast a dismissive eye over her. “If you have a license, I’m the Jarl of Solitude.”

 

Sloan didn’t have to feign her surprise or ignorance on this one. “License?”

 

“Aye. You know women can’t carry weapons without a license.”

 

What?! “I’m…sorry, sir, I…um…just got out of the orphanage this morning. I didn’t know.”

 

“Oh, one of Grelod’s, are ya? Figures. We’ve told that woman many times to make sure you kids know the law before she dumps another homeless wretch on us. Fine. Come with me – we’ll make sure you don’t have anything else you’re not supposed to and explain all the laws, then you can be on your way.”

 

Several options went through Sloan’s mind but none of them seemed her best course of action (at least, not here in the middle of the busy street), so she surrendered the dagger and followed the guard. She grimaced as they walked – she would have a choice to make once they were in the Guard Station, and she wasn’t sure which way she should go.

 

She was going to be raped, possibly by more than one guard. If she allowed it. The question was, should she? On the one hand…well, she didn’t really want to be raped, especially since she had not taken any of the medication that would stave off pregnancy. On the other, though, murdering the entire station would add unneeded complications to her agenda. Perhaps best to just let them do what they were going to do – it was not really different than a whoring assignment, in effect. She would even get paid, after she picked all their pockets.

 

The guard interrupted her thoughts. “Where did you get this, anyway? You don’t look like you could afford something like this.” His voice had taken a suspicious bent.

 

Sloan told the truth, more or less, since it was the most plausible response for something like this anyway. “I found it by the canal.” Murky things happened down there, so someone stumbling across a wayward dagger was not out of the question. Four of them however…

 

“Ah.” The man’s tension and his suspicious tone melted away. “It’s dangerous down there. Probably safer to stay in the upper city.”

 

“Yes, sir.”

 

As they reached the central guard station, her escort held the door for her. His voice had lost its aggressive tone – he sounded almost kind as she passed by him into the building. “I feel bad for you kids, just dropped off in the middle of the city with just the clothes on your backs. Just through that door on the right. It’s like you aren’t given a chance. Here we go.

 

“Now, don’t worry – nothing bad is going to happen to you here. I’m going to have to touch you, but I promise, it’s just a formality to make sure you don’t have other things you didn’t know you weren’t supposed to have. All right? Then we’ll go over the other laws you probably won’t know, and then…well, then I’ll have a question for you to answer, and then you can go. If you choose to.”

 

Sloan blinked, once again not needing to fake her discombobulation as he started a thorough but professional pat down. No groping, no leering, nothing but…

 

“Wait, what is this?”

 

Sloan cursed to herself. She had meant to do something about the other daggers – maybe drop them here and there along the path – but had distracted herself thinking of how to deal with the rape that hadn’t materialized. She was acting just as sloppy as Mishi had always accused her of being.

 

The guard hesitated, then shook his head. “I’m sorry, but I’m going to have to ask you to remove your clothes.” His eyes were wary now, but he still acted more professionally than any guard Sloan had ever known before. And she had known many. In fact, there was a decent chance she had slept with every guard in Riften at least once. So why didn’t this one look familiar?

 

Another mystery to try to solve later. For now, she made a show of being embarrassed as she slowly began to remove the clothes she had taken from the canal ambushers.

 

It was decision time. It was only her and the guard in the room – another strange thing; in the previous Riften, she would have been taken to the middle of a room full of guards so they could all enjoy the show – so she wouldn’t have any difficulty killing him and slipping away.

 

Perhaps it was the oddly kind way he acted that made her decision for her; she never had been able to shake the dim sense of guilt from all…well, most of her assassinations. She had no real motivation to kill an innocent man out of convenience. With a sigh, she took off her clothes, setting the other three daggers on a nearby table as she did.

 

“Don’t tell me you found all of those by the canal as well.” The guard’s tone had shifted to something more hardened and icy but he still acted like a professional. Which is to say, he did not grab the naked woman in front of him and try to have his way with her. “This looks more like the work of a thief. Typical for you orphans.” He shook his head, but his eyes still betrayed a hint of that empathy. “I suppose it’s not all your fault. Still, though, I’m afraid the law is the law. I’m going to have to arrest you.”

 

He turned away (and Sloan, even as she broke into tears and pleaded in the way a real teenager in her position would, resisted the offer of such a tempting target of his exposed back for those daggers), rummaged through a cabinet, turned back, and handed her a bundle of clean if plain clothes. “Put those on. And don’t worry – you have probably heard about the bad things that can happen in prisons, and many of them are true, but I’ll put you in a cell of your own.”

 

Sloan shook her head through her continued faux sobs as she put on the rough linen clothes. Who was this guy?

 

She got at least a partial answer after he brought her to the prison and, as promised, locked her into a spacious cell devoid of other inmates. As she clung to the bars while gulping down sobs, he paused, then reached down and lifted her chin with his finger.

 

“Listen. I know you didn’t know any better. I promise, I’m going to make sure you’re not in here for long. But…” A pause, and then she finally got a glimpse of his game. “Look, you’re only going to end up dead or keep ending up in here if you live the way you have started to. And I won’t always be around to make sure you don’t get put in a cell with rapists and murderers. I don’t want to see that happen to you. So, tell you what – when you get out of here, I’ll bring you to my house. You can live with me. It’s not a big house, but it’s safe, it’s warm, and you will have food and a place to sleep. You don’t have to say anything now,” as Sloan opened her mouth, “just think about it. I’ll be right back with some food.” The guard’s finger moved from her chin to caress her cheek for a moment, then he gave her a soft smile before walking away.

 

And there it was – instead of forcing her, his game was far more insidious. The grateful pretty orphan girl with nowhere to go and no one to turn to, rescued from a short unhappy life on the streets by a gallant man who takes her in and provides for her. In exchange for her undying loyalty and gratitude, as well as her body, of course. That girl would be better off than a slave but no more than a kept whore, something she wouldn’t realize for years, if ever. She would probably think of herself as an unofficial spouse, but would have none of the agency or rights to go along with it. The moment she stopped being young, pretty, and/or compliant, she would be right back on the streets with no life skills to protect her.

 

Current Sloan had no interest in such an offer, of course – she had much bigger fish to fry – but would past Sloan have taken it? She thought back, remembered her desperation, especially after she found her money had been stolen. If she had been arrested instead of stumbling into the Vixen and had received this same treatment, this same offer…

 

She probably would have taken it. It certainly would have been better than going back to having nothing on the street. It would at least have given her some stable time to think. And she had ended up being a whore regardless, so even that wouldn’t have been much different. Of course, all the things that happened after were another question.

 

She allowed herself a quiet laugh as she paced away from the bars and sat on the low platform bed. Even this prison (including the food, which the guard came back with as promised) was nicer than the orphanage had been. Re-killing Grelod bumped up a spot on her internal to-do list.

 

In the meantime, though, she settled on the bed and ate while half-formed plans swirled around in her head. There had to be an opportunity here that could help her get where she needed to go. She only needed to figure out what it was.

 

 

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HM1919

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Ahhh! Just as things were going well(-ish) for our heroine she had to get caught by some random guard. But hey, at least he doesn't seem like an (overly) shady guy. And who knows, perhaps S. will be able to turn this situation to her advantage. After all, having a "friend" among the cityguard may turn out to be useful. 🤔👍

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jfraser

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On 8/6/2024 at 4:13 AM, HM1919 said:

Ahhh! Just as things were going well(-ish) for our heroine she had to get caught by some random guard. But hey, at least he doesn't seem like an (overly) shady guy. And who knows, perhaps S. will be able to turn this situation to her advantage. After all, having a "friend" among the cityguard may turn out to be useful. 🤔👍

There was an alternate plan where she ended up at the guard's house and escaped from there but eventually i felt it would have dragged the story without adding anything and added a fun cameo instead 

HM1919

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2 hours ago, jfraser said:

There was an alternate plan where she ended up at the guard's house and escaped from there but eventually i felt it would have dragged the story without adding anything and added a fun cameo instead 

I can see what you mean, but I think something similar could still be an interesting option. Perhaps not in Riften and almost certainly not with that particular guard, but other cities have (hopefully) ruggedly-handsome and helpful (or gullible) guards as well. So, IF Sloan ever feels like really testing her acting chops, then I'm sure she'd have no problems finding a suitable target. And yes, the idea of her pretending to be but an innocent little lass who's gotten lost in cold, harsh Skyrim is pretty hilarious. To me at least. 🤔☺️

 

 

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HM1919

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Not that I'd expect Sloan to ever WANT to put on such an act, mind you. If anything it would have to be a situation where a job requires her to put on an innocent persona. Under such circumstances I'd expect her to be able to pull it off. Unlike for example Trendil, who'd be staring deadly daggers at anyone who even looks like he might consider making a comment about the pink ribbon in her hair.

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HM1919

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@jfraserOn a slightly less silly note: In theory Trendil and Sloan might both be able to pull this off under the right circumstances. Like I said, I see Sloan as a naturally serious, one might even say dour, person. However, thanks to her training as an inflitrator she can successfully pretend to be something else. 

Now, it's also possible that Trendil is very girly and feminine by nature and we just haven't seen any of it, because that side of her has been thorougly buried thanks to the training regimen Melissa's put her through. Wether she'd be able to unearth/re-discover that hypothetical side of hers I can't say. But it would require one hell of a reason for her to do so, if it'd be possible at all. Of that I'm pretty certain.🤔

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jfraser

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30 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Not that I'd expect Sloan to ever WANT to put on such an act, mind you. If anything it would have to be a situation where a job requires her to put on an innocent persona. Under such circumstances I'd expect her to be able to pull it off. Unlike for example Trendil, who'd be staring deadly daggers at anyone who even looks like he might consider making a comment about the pink ribbon in her hair.

 

If i wasn't bed bound after my surgery, I would 100% be trying to create both these scenes on my computer at this moment  XD

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HM1919

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4 minutes ago, jfraser said:

 

If i wasn't bed bound after my surgery, I would 100% be trying to create both these scenes on my computer at this moment  XD

Wish you a speedy recovery after your surgery. Hope it wasn't anything too serious.🤞

jfraser

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8 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Wish you a speedy recovery after your surgery. Hope it wasn't anything too serious.🤞

Just a repaired ruptured Achilles. Nothing too serious but I can do nothing but crutch from the bedroom to the bathroom and back for now.

 

As you have probably noticed, I am filling the time by reading through my stories and commenting on things that got neglected to be commented on before and making small edits to fix continuity Errors from time to time. XD

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HM1919

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23 hours ago, jfraser said:

Just a repaired ruptured Achilles. Nothing too serious but I can do nothing but crutch from the bedroom to the bathroom and back for now.

 

As you have probably noticed, I am filling the time by reading through my stories and commenting on things that got neglected to be commented on before and making small edits to fix continuity Errors from time to time. XD

Glad to hear that it's not too bad.👍And, just as an idea, perhaps refrain from annoying ancient greek gods (like Apollo) in the future, so they stop guiding random arrows towards your heels. #trojanwar #HM's random thoughts

 

p.s. And yes, I noticed you re-visiting older chapters. Had obviously no idea why, though.

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jfraser

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3 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Glad to hear that it's not too bad.👍 But, just as an idea, perhaps refrain from annoying ancient greek gods (like Apollo) in the future, so they stop guiding random arrows towards your heels. #trojanwar #HM's random thoughts

 

p.s. And yes, I noticed you re-visiting older chapters. Had obviously no idea why, though.

 

Since this is the second ruptured Achilles tendon fix i have had to have, you may be on to something 

HM1919

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21 minutes ago, jfraser said:

 

Since this is the second ruptured Achilles tendon fix i have had to have, you may be on to something 

Sorry to hear that it was already surgery #2. Will be keeping all available fingers crossed that there won't be need for a third.🤞

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fred200

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First reaction: Good Lord, he posted five new chapters today!

 

Bad news: It is not five new chapters. Just revisions.

 

Good news: It is not five new chapters. A @jfraser chapter should be savored. One every couple of days is the most we can handle. One a week is wonderful.

 

Side note: Hope your healing goes well.

jfraser

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13 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Sorry to hear that it was already surgery #2. Will be keeping all available fingers crossed that there won't be need for a third.🤞

I only have two, total, so a third is unlikely. I ruptured the left one about ten years ago and this one last year. Except I did not realize I ruptured them either time, so I kept walking on them. 

jfraser

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2 minutes ago, fred200 said:

First reaction: Good Lord, he posted five new chapters today!

 

Bad news: It is not five new chapters. Just revisions.

 

Good news: It is not five new chapters. A @jfraser chapter should be savored. One every couple of days is the most we can handle. One a week is wonderful.

 

Side note: Hope your healing goes well.

 

There will be four Sian chapters this week, so you will have something to savor through Thursday ;)

HM1919

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27 minutes ago, jfraser said:

I only have two, total, so a third is unlikely. I ruptured the left one about ten years ago and this one last year. Except I did not realize I ruptured them either time, so I kept walking on them. 

Ouch! Reminds me of my grandma, who years ago fell on her arm mere days before a planned vacation. Figuring the arm was only bruised she went on the trip anyway, only to be told that her elbow was in fact broken when she had it checked AFTER her return home. So, yeah, pls take care of your heels, so you won't hurt them AGAIN.

 

32 minutes ago, jfraser said:

There will be four Sian chapters this week, so you will have something to savor through Thursday ;)

Yay! Sounds like we're in for a treat this week.😁

jfraser

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5 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Ouch! Reminds me of my grandma, who years ago fell on her arm mere days before a planned vacation. Figuring the arm was only bruised she went on the trip anyway, only to be told that her elbow was in fact broken when she had it checked AFTER her return home. So, yeah, pls take care of your heels, so you won't hurt them AGAIN.

 

Yay! Sounds like we're in for a treat this week.😁

Your grandma and I share the curse of high pain tolerance. The first time, i didn't realize it was ruptured and so kept doing things on it, and it ruptured over and over again so much that part of the tendon actually calcified, and then snapped in pieces. 

 

On the other hand, the high pain tolerance  is nice during this recovery because I am in no pain and don't need the percocet they gave me

HM1919

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10 minutes ago, jfraser said:

Your grandma and I share the curse of high pain tolerance. The first time, i didn't realize it was ruptured and so kept doing things on it, and it ruptured over and over again so much that part of the tendon actually calcified, and then snapped in pieces. 

 

On the other hand, the high pain tolerance  is nice during this recovery because I am in no pain and don't need the percocet they gave me

Holy...!😮 You sure you aren't related to the black knight from Monty Python? You know, the "Tis but a scratch!"-guy? NKhSJt1VSVVS.gif

jfraser

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3 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Holy...!😮 You sure you aren't related to the black knight from Monty Python? You know, the "Tis but a scratch!"-guy? NKhSJt1VSVVS.gif

 

I must be!

 

"Your Achilles is ruptured!"

"No it isn't."

"Well, what's that, then?"

"I've had worse."

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