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Story delivery style question  

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  1. 1. Do you prefer traditional "comic" style stories? (Speech bubbles, multiple lines, reactions...) or a "silent protagonist" style story, where you get to make up your "own" reactions to lines/dialogues given by character? (like in this story)

    • "Traditional" comic line delivery (set in story, less imaginative)
      12
    • "Silent protagonist" line delivery (how character reacts to dialogue by characters is up to your imagination)
      1

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> Oh, gee. The differently executed story of Eden makes me a difficult dilemma.? Because, all version / form presented by you are very ingeniously, got funny lines and they're tightly focus my attention on your charming character.❤️

It's really nice of you to provide a viewers the best experience of studying your entries.:classic_smile:  I find your colorful text in speech bubbles placed at the height of Eden's head and npcs to be very comfortable to read and keeping a certain form / style of comics.:classic_cool:

Of course, that's just my opinion.?‍♀️ Whichever form of screening you choose, my friend ~ I'll be satisfied!:classic_happy:


More feetback!?

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> Well, it's a much longer pictorial adventure of sexy, plucky, unshy squirrel than the previous ones with a comic book touch.? There is no lack / shortage of traveling, fighting, gestures, faces of Eden and funny twists in this episode!?
That was enough for my eyes, but I don't slide down the slider of page to see the final / climax of this story.. Believe me or not, but I've read all statements of Eden!?


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> Eden wearing this combat suit.. It's a knocking answer to Gordon Freeman from Half-Life, as for me.? Hmm.. I wonder who else she's going to consign into obscurity / oblivion.?
Maybe next time your fem-protagonist will send a friendly punch to Adam Jensen from Deus Ex.:classic_tongue:


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> Sorry, boss. I just can't get over the sight of your fancy sneakers with a high platform.?



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> "Focus, enemies ahead?" It's easy for you to say that but hard to do for me.?‍♀️
 

 

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> There's nothing like a first-person perspective at hot pieces of Eden! ?


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> Your fantasstic flower got sometimes a crazy-ass idea.. "She's sweet but psycho. A little bit psycho.."?


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> Nice ploy / dodge!? It looks like the outer layer of her bodysuit has been overexposed by some lewd light source in that room.? It's always nice to see Eden so relaxed, surprised and barefoot, of course!?
A lovely face and feet of this hottie are what arouse / turns me on the most in her outward appearance.:classic_wub:

 

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> I nearly forgot to ask.. What's the deal with those different colored frames of her glasses?? Is it some kind of Easter Egg, glitch of game, or does Eden just have two pairs of spectacles??
 

 


> Many Thanks 4 Everything!:beer: :smiley: :thumbsup:

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1 hour ago, smartfon said:

> Oh, gee. The differently executed story of Eden makes me a difficult dilemma.? Because, all version / form presented by you are very ingeniously, got funny lines and they're tightly focus my attention on your charming character.❤️

It's really nice of you to provide a viewers the best experience of studying your entries.:classic_smile:  I find your colorful text in speech bubbles placed at the height of Eden's head and npcs to be very comfortable to read and keeping a certain form / style of comics.:classic_cool:

Of course, that's just my opinion.?‍♀️ Whichever form of screening you choose, my friend ~ I'll be satisfied!:classic_happy:


More feetback!?

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PPP

> Well, it's a much longer pictorial adventure of sexy, plucky, unshy squirrel than the previous ones with a comic book touch.? There is no lack / shortage of traveling, fighting, gestures, faces of Eden and funny twists in this episode!?
That was enough for my eyes, but I don't slide down the slider of page to see the final / climax of this story.. Believe me or not, but I've read all statements of Eden!?


image.png vs. half-life-gordon-freeman-speaks-hl-valve
> Eden wearing this combat suit.. It's a knocking answer to Gordon Freeman from Half-Life, as for me.? Hmm.. I wonder who else she's going to consign into obscurity / oblivion.?
Maybe next time your fem-protagonist will send a friendly punch to Adam Jensen from Deus Ex.:classic_tongue:


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> Sorry, boss. I just can't get over the sight of your fancy sneakers with a high platform.?



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> "Focus, enemies ahead?" It's easy for you to say that but hard to do for me.?‍♀️
 

 

11.png
> There's nothing like a first-person perspective at hot pieces of Eden! ?


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> Your fantasstic flower got sometimes a crazy-ass idea.. "She's sweet but psycho. A little bit psycho.."?


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&
35.png
> Nice ploy / dodge!? It looks like the outer layer of her bodysuit has been overexposed by some lewd light source in that room.? It's always nice to see Eden so relaxed, surprised and barefoot, of course!?
A lovely face and feet of this hottie are what arouse / turns me on the most in her outward appearance.:classic_wub:

 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

> I nearly forgot to ask.. What's the deal with those different colored frames of her glasses?? Is it some kind of Easter Egg, glitch of game, or does Eden just have two pairs of spectacles??
 

 


> Many Thanks 4 Everything!:beer: :smiley: :thumbsup:

Thanks for feedback, always appreciated ^_^

 

I had an idea about new style of comics, where main character says something, then reacts and you "fill in the blanks". Works for me and is interesting concept (I also find it easier to work with), but its not traditional comic style... I will probably go back to the old style, with speech bubbles read from top (first) to bottom (last).

 

The glasses... never ending story with certain materials and their reaction to light. Can't be helped/fixed :D

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On 1/7/2024 at 2:08 AM, Z4chary said:

Thanks for feedback, always appreciated ^_^

 

I had an idea about new style of comics, where main character says something, then reacts and you "fill in the blanks". Works for me and is interesting concept (I also find it easier to work with), but its not traditional comic style... I will probably go back to the old style, with speech bubbles read from top (first) to bottom (last).


> Not bad, not bad ~ your head is pretty thinking about that!:classic_smile: However, when you do this, your work may lose certain of its artistic value.?
 

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> Have you remember a first encounter of ginger goddess with green-skinned hunk?? You've created a very funny lines for Strong!? Without this portion of humor, the dialogue would look kind of weird, in my opinion.? 
Besides.. Somehow, I can't imagine playing / personate in the role of mutant, ghoul or any other creature.?

 Well, you know my take on that. Your stories, your choice! Decide for yourself which form of presentation you prefer the most.?

 Just a minor hint if you chose the option without dialogue for humans, humanoids & creatures.:classic_tongue: For example, you may add such incomprehensible text in the speech bubble for npc / receiver to fill its the blank / empty space a bit.?‍♀️
Or puts into the pics these ones with lines and dots. ?
 

 

On 1/7/2024 at 2:08 AM, Z4chary said:

The glasses... never ending story with certain materials and their reaction to light. Can't be helped/fixed :D


Ah, I see.:classic_biggrin:
 

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> Well, maybe Eden be able to add some colors to the frames of her glasses by exposing them to the radiation of the rainbow.:D
 


> I'm looking forward to see next rousing / gripping story of your ?shine.
See ya!?

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