I don't undersstand why you don't want change  bg of text. I'm sorry some time it's just unreadeable.  red on blue, yelow on yelow, red on red, black on red, pink on red, blue o blue. I'm not joking my eyes was actualy hurt when i read some parts. Pls i beg you! Use only black transapret bg for text, and you can use any collors for text.  But pls  keepbackground collor atlest dim. 
This is chart that show what collors come good togheter: 

Second assuming this is romantick story? not usual for this site porn story right? it's just sex scene too vanila, for me, but if this is romantic story then all god. 

And last critisism for this episode, is teleports, sometimes you movind characters to fast, like in one pic they in one place in other the immididatly in other place, doing  somethign different. 

1 hour ago, ERPModEnjoyer said:

I don't undersstand why you don't want change  bg of text. I'm sorry some time it's just unreadeable.  red on blue, yelow on yelow, red on red, black on red, pink on red, blue o blue. I'm not joking my eyes was actualy hurt when i read some parts. Pls i beg you! Use only black transapret bg for text, and you can use any collors for text.  But pls  keepbackground collor atlest dim. 
This is chart that show what collors come good togheter: 

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Second assuming this is romantick story? not usual for this site porn story right? it's just sex scene too vanila, for me, but if this is romantic story then all god. 

And last critisism for this episode, is teleports, sometimes you movind characters to fast, like in one pic they in one place in other the immididatly in other place, doing  somethign different. 

For the colors, ok.

I put in function after emotions (anger, etc).

No, it’s not just a vanilla sex scene.

Like I said, there will be romance.

After, I repeat, Daegon is a free character who does not hesitate sometimes to go to sleep with others.

Otherwise, there is romance between the main character (agarmir) and her.

And there will be more.