That way better! ? But what happen in the end? why again yellow BG appear? it's was soo clean and pleasent, and then again.... 

About story i like it so far. Cute romantic story like i always RP in my playtrought of skyrim! Thx for this expirience once again. 

And did you see two misstakes, probably yes. but  maybe not, i don't know?  

Here yo write "How far are you willing to go for me" twice

And here a comeo of assuming your Player characer on the background. Btw from back she look good, wuld we see her in futer? 
 

1 hour ago, ERPModEnjoyer said:

That way better! ? But what happen in the end? why again yellow BG appear? it's was soo clean and pleasent, and then again.... 

About story i like it so far. Cute romantic story like i always RP in my playtrought of skyrim! Thx for this expirience once again. 

And did you see two misstakes, probably yes. but  maybe not, i don't know?  

Here yo write "How far are you willing to go for me" twice

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And here a comeo of assuming your Player characer on the background. Btw from back she look good, wuld we see her in futer? 
 

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How to explain...

First of all, I am French.

I use a translator like reverso or deepl.

With us French is complex, there are several things, sentences, words that have several descriptions, meaning.

And so when Daegon asks my character how far he can go to find her.

Basically, in French the sentence had two meanings, where it asked how far it can go or if it can go all the way to save it.

And the translator described these sentences in the same way "How far you can go to save me" "how far you can go to save me".

The character from behind in the distance is Lilissa the druidess.

It is scheduled for later in the blog.

For now, the blog focuses on Agarmir (my character) and Daegon.

5 hours ago, hana120 said:

How to explain...

First of all, I am French.

I use a translator like reverso or deepl.

With us French is complex, there are several things, sentences, words that have several descriptions, meaning.

And so when Daegon asks my character how far he can go to find her.

Basically, in French the sentence had two meanings, where it asked how far it can go or if it can go all the way to save it.

And the translator described these sentences in the same way "How far you can go to save me" "how far you can go to save me".

 

The character from behind in the distance is Lilissa the druidess.

It is scheduled for later in the blog.

For now, the blog focuses on Agarmir (my character) and Daegon.

Ohhh sorry so second noy a mistake it's a little tease what come next. Sorry to ruin surprise. it't was not obiouse. 

Abaut phrase,  i can see how that happen. So i hope translator will make mistake like this even less. Sop far it's doing good job. And you doing grate too!