You know that forced/beastly scenes aren't my cup of tea, but the abrupt transitions mixed with plot is something I like a lot. It made them much easier to follow with those scenes and get plot from, from my own personal perspective. I knew before you posted this that you were putting a lot of work into this with lots of different characters, but this is really more than I anticipated. ?

You really went all out on this one, from applying overlays, to the poses, to the edits. Good job man.

You did fuck up however and put two of the same picture in the first tab.

34 minutes ago, yorpers said:

You know that forced/beastly scenes aren't my cup of tea, but the abrupt transitions mixed with plot is something I like a lot. It made them much easier to follow with those scenes and get plot from, from my own personal perspective.

Thanks a lot. You know I was kind of unsure about how to edit those scenes together. Glad it worked out ^^

34 minutes ago, yorpers said:

I knew before you posted this that you were putting a lot of work into this with lots of different characters, but this is really more than I anticipated. ?

It was hard Man.. The freaking mods kept buging.. And suddenly, the lighting got crap when entering the second Inn.. For a Location that's so dark, they have a lot of light sources that don't work ?

And stupid Twins.. I've mixed them up myself too many times to count.. (Why did I ad 2 of them again?.. Ah Yes..Because I could.. Now they have personalitys I like very much so I can't get rid of em anymore, sooo making the best of that x_x Just have to remind myself of the flower on the hair of one of em.. )

34 minutes ago, yorpers said:

You really went all out on this one, from applying overlays, to the poses, to the edits. Good job man.

Thank you very much

34 minutes ago, yorpers said:

You did fuck up however and put two of the same picture in the first tab.

Yeah I noticed it too.. Problem about the new Upload method: you don't realize it once it's too late. x.x but i got it out

32 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

And stupid Twins.. I've mixed them up myself too many times to count.. (Why did I ad 2 of them again?.. Ah Yes..Because I could.. Now they have personalitys I like very much so I can't get rid of em anymore, sooo making the best of that x_x Just have to remind myself of the flower on the hair of one of em.. )

Before I started posting on this account here I had the idea for Loria to be a twin.?

Kind of both happy and sad I didn't do it. Though I'm mostly just sad I didn't make her with high poly head.?

32 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Thanks a lot. You know I was kind of unsure about how to edit those scenes together. Glad it worked out ^^

I feel like it did. The changes were abrupt, but it gave the entire entry a very unique pace of events. It almost read like more of a thriller. ?

32 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Yeah I noticed it too.. Problem about the new Upload method: you don't realize it once it's too late. x.x but i got it out

I'll have to remember that because I may start using it too.

3 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Before I started posting on this account here I had the idea for Loria to be a twin.?

 

Kind of both happy and sad I didn't do it. Though I'm mostly just sad I didn't make her with high poly head

A shame ? both of those.. ?

4 minutes ago, yorpers said:

I feel like it did. The changes were abrupt, but it gave the entire entry a very unique pace of events. It almost read like more of a thriller. ?

That's what i was hopping to get across a little x,x if everything works out right, the next chapter should have a similar feeling if I can make it work again.

5 minutes ago, yorpers said:

I'll have to remember that because I may start using it too.

There is that neat little symbol on the right side of the posting tabe, there where you have spoiler code and co. There you can see a Preview of what you posts. I do it actually everytime since the new method but I usually just count the Pictures to make the spoilers not having too many at once or to see which pictures to separate so it doesn't cut off a scene. Soo that's why I don't notice doppel pics

Hmm ... someone just set him up for a challenge, me thinks.
You know Jorn ... erh Gukahn, if you write up those Arlan books ... I will turn them into a Bookmod.

Anyway lots of twists and turns. Appears to me you really like M'rissi's evil, little, sister ... though she seems more a submissive, semi-evil, little, sister TBH. ^^

2 minutes ago, Talesien said:

if you write up those Arlan books ... I will turn them into a Bookmod.

? yes please.

lol damn that is a good idea.

10 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Hmm ... someone just set him up for a challenge, me thinks.

? Question is "How fucked up can you get?" or "Who catches the Killer first" Challenge.. Or maybe A "How many Times can you do bad things, while trying to do good things?" Challenge

11 minutes ago, Talesien said:

You know Jorn ... erh Gukahn, if you write up those Arlan books ... I will turn them into a Bookmod.

Uff.. If I could write good and long Stuff in englisch.. And Were able to describe motion I would take you up on that offer ?

Recently saw that a few of calming pictures Portraits have a dude that looks kinda like him so Book Covers were there a few ?

Book idea number one: (no not them covers, can't find them rn..)

15 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Appears to me you really like M'rissi's evil, little, sister ... though she seems more a submissive, semi-evil, little, sister TBH. ^^

I do like her yes, so I wanted to give her a little bit more screentime, she ain't getting much in Oldman anymore once I cut the group size to it's original number. So will end up as a Situational Side Character ? Don't worry tho, she going to be a really bratty thieving Cat again. Those "Effects" Usually don't last long after I hentai may way out of stuff ?

But i haven't decided If she is to become a regular..  Oh and I've gotten her Sister now too.. I might have a little Cat Kink now.. Should I be worried?

5 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

? Question is "How fucked up can you get?" or "Who catches the Killer first" Challenge.. Or maybe A "How many Times can you do bad things, while trying to do good things?" Challenge

 

Uff.. If I could write good and long Stuff in englisch.. And Were able to describe motion I would take you up on that offer ?

Recently saw that a few of calming pictures Portraits have a dude that looks kinda like him so Book Covers were there a few ?

Book idea number one: (no not them covers, can't find them rn..)

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"Arlan, and the twin "Towers" ?

(I miss that mod..)

 

 

 

But i haven't decided If she is to become a regular..  Oh and I've gotten her Sister now too.. I might have a little Cat Kink now.. Should I be worried?

Not really sure what mod that is supposed to be, but yeah ... so they were used by shoving them in? Or just clubbing with them?

I see talking about kin, stumbled about this one yesternight, kinda like it. ^^

Just now, Talesien said:

Not really sure what mod that is supposed to be, but yeah ... so they were used by shoving them in? Or just clubbing with them?

I mean this one here

Going to add them Pictures in one of the Chapters, just need to make them look like drawings. Not really hard to do tho ?

And them "Weapons" are the only method known to men to defeat a Succubus! Kinda like the stake for vampires! Of course they only work if you stick them in the right place!

4 minutes ago, Talesien said:

I see talking about kin, stumbled about this one yesternight, kinda like it. ^^

8 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

I mean this one here

Going to add them Pictures in one of the Chapters, just need to make them look like drawings. Not really hard to do tho ?

Not the same, but kinda similar ... you know this one?

4 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Not the same, but kinda similar ... you know this one?

yes, actually looked it up for a bit of inspiration before. Haven't got to use those as of now tho ?

might come back to them later ?

So... liked how you intertwined story, twists and sex sequences on this one. Specially with the bard's song telling about  devouring flesh while the khajiit was being abducted by the big bad wolf (who featured a second a twist). The graphics overall where of good quality, specially color-wise and models-wise. Now, sometimes the grammar, and some view angles aren't as though on as some of the others, so it feels some parts were done quicker than others. While some are just quite cinematographic (the Vargr threatening the khajiit after transforming back for example). It's a bit of the same regarding the dialogues, but overall the mix works and feels entertaining, since you manage to keep some suspense (the khajiit's fate at first, the girls band entrance in the Gnisis club, the murders mystery) and humor (the confrontation with the guards, some of the khajiit's and twins' reactions in particular) regularly. Also noticed the adaptation of the comic bubbles background,  and some variations in the comic layout, which are a nice touches. So, good entry overall.

« That Lilit gal, she looks very pretty, and very intelligent, but she doesn't looks like someone dressed for an investigation, no.

                So I very guess she gonna have problems, uh.  »

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The graphics overall where of good quality, specially color-wise and models-wise

wait till you see the start of enb x,x its a worlds difference?

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

liked how you intertwined story, twists and sex sequences on this one. Specially with the bard's song telling about  devouring flesh while the khajiit was being abducted by the big bad wolf (who featured a second a twist).

thank you =D

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

ometimes the grammar, and some view angles aren't as though on as some of the others, so it feels some parts were done quicker than others.

mhm gramma is still and probably will ever be a problem for me. I don't always get it right ><

the last part you said is probably true, there were instances when I let the flow take over too much, I started to pay more attention to small things way later on, but some times it feels made in a rush (which in case of minor scenes is true.)

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Also noticed the adaptation of the comic bubbles background,  and some variations in the comic layout, which are a nice touches. So, good entry overall.

Thank you ^__^

yeah this is the time where I started to change a few tools I've been working with, the bubbles were the very first thing that changed permanently, their colorization and design. (I did experiments.. But would decide later on to stay with their original form, but I also changed the way I did In picture texts later.)

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

That Lilit gal, she looks very pretty, and very intelligent, but she doesn't looks like someone dressed for an investigation, no.

                So I very guess she gonna have problems, uh.  »

Intelligent and Lilit.. But if you decide to read further, you will see who the real brains of Team B is ?

I have to admit, sometimes when I come back to re read the early chapters I feel the urge to remake a few with my current setup.. But in case of Team B it would feel really really weird and I lack the Time anyways ?