True to my word, I'm back for the next episode!

The Urufu do have quite strange culture and traditions, very creative stuff. Did you come up with them yourself completely, or did you take inspiration from somewhere? (nothing wrong with that, of course!)

I'll do a re-read and a review on some of the the writing quirks tomorrow night.

Hey Rattlesnark, I'm glad that you still like it!

It's completely my own story =) but I have to admit that the two jokes aren't from me .. ^_^"

Ah, wonder who could have come up with such lousy jokes

Nothing too particular about in the writing this time around either, in fact very good overall. Just that some of the action descriptions are written correctly with adverbs (e.g. quickly, slowly) while others aren't.

Example: *smacks loudly as an answer*, and *tremors erratically*; are perfect.
While: *slurps loud and voracious*, *mumbles lustful*; should be written with 'loudly', 'voraciously' and 'lustfully'

Can't find the 'Follow' button on your blog, but I'll be keeping an eye on the Sex Screenshots thread as always. See you again soon!

EDIT: I don't recall if there were any in the previous episodes, but since there is (and will be) a lot of licking involved, have you tried out the HTools/HTongue mod? I don't know if the other content creators use that, but it does let you equip a tongue on your character to have it pop out of their mouth - a nice touch.

I personally have lots of trouble getting the tongue to align well with my character's mouth in scenes, and it's not too practical since it gives you 30-40 different tongue items without proper labeling. It does do the job in it's own way, though.

Last question! Are you using Pinup Poser to do all the posing in the screenshots? Seems like a whole lot of work involved, what with all the console commands and manual selection of poses involved. Big props to you, if that the case!

 

Hello again
Thanks for the hints, I'm going to correct the text as soon as possible!

I have the tongues installed (all of them) but as you mentioned, it is a lot and lot of work to bring them in the right position. I will mess with it a little bit more, maybe I can use them later on.

I use Halo's Poser which contains everything. And it is a pain in the a** .. I started a thread some weeks ago with a problem I ran into. Adjusting a stage with two or more actors is terrible since at some point the actors are resetting to idle animation when I'm giving new commands to other actors. Because of that I love the chairs of Skyrim since at least they keep sitting there.....

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I use Halo's Poser which contains everything. And it is a pain in the a** .. I started a thread some weeks ago with a problem I ran into. Adjusting a stage with two or more actors is terrible since at some point the actors are resetting to idle animation when I'm giving new commands to other actors. Because of that I love the chairs of Skyrim since at least they keep sitting there.....

I know exactly what you mean! Initially, I thought there has GOT to be a more convenient way to be doing it. It's so difficult to remember the poses, manually typing the necessary console commands, and everything else. That's why I'm so impressed with all these long story comics with a 101 poses and expressions, Close Alliance included.