Hello, Kin T. This is a really fun to read story, finally get to see the ladies in action!

I love what you've done with the characters, very interesting twist to the familiar ones in Skyrim. The Companions as a mutant eyed all-lesbian team from Akavir - very cool and creative! I also very much like the arrangement of the comic, short dialogue in between pictures arranged vertically make it very convenient to scroll through and read (at least for me). Nice design on the frame/template too, I'll say. Having the text included within the images makes downloading the story much simpler, a nice plus for collectors as myself.

The writing and language is already very good, so that one's definitely not a worry. I'll go through the chapter again, will edit this post or write a new one if any mistakes catch my eye.

I've a few questions regarding the content creation as well:
1. How did you go about changing the eyes of all the characters? Did you have to edit the facegeom files?
2. How were the poses and facial expressions done?

All in all, very good read, and dare I say good fap as well. Looking forward to the next episodes, even more so after Aela's "I'm going to watch you getting enjoyed by them." line!

Hey Rattlesnark =) Thank you for your praising words!

Your answers:

1. Most characters (like Bijin Warmaidens) are using separate eyes contained in a folder inside it. I edited the eyes with paint.net a free program. With that I can open and save the new versions over the old.

Sounds like much of work but it wasn't. I just had to copy the round iris from the original and paste it into the existing old one from the character I wanted to edit. Needs a bit of flair but it's not that hard after you know how to handle paint.net

2. For the expressions I used Facial Expressions Project (F.E.P)

Thank you again for the great comment! I'm sure you'll like what's coming up next =D

Thanks, seems like I have FEP installed but simply haven't explored it much. As for the language errors, only slight ones that don't take away too much from the story, so it's all well and good. Expect the reader to be too focused on other things to bother anyway, hah! Thanks again, I'll be back for the next