The poses and expressions seem to get more detail/less rough. Maybe the artist is getting adjusted to this drawing style. Anyway, it's too soon to say anything regarding the story itself, yet the potential is there.

« Angela's dress is very special : she can show whatever she wants when she bows, yes. 

                That grandpa look kinda strange. There's like a line between his face and his hair. Just like if he wasn't bald, uh.  »