replacer Aggressive Curse Story Replacer for Bimbo of Skyrim mod

[DrSeptimus]

Aggressive Curse Story Replacer for Bimbo of Skyrim mod

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Aggressive Curse Story Replacer replaced the bimbo curse story from the Bimbo of Skyrim mod with a more aggressive, violent, and degenerate version.  Feel free to be a proofreader and point out any errors I might have made.

 

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Original Version

 

 

ACSR Version

 

 

Requirements

 

Bimbo's of Skyrim

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• Submitter
  DrSeptimus
• Submitted
  07/27/26
• Category
  Adult Mods
• Requirements
• Regular Edition Compatible
• Install Instructions
  Install only one file. If you install all of them, only enable one at a time, or the files with the highest priority win.

 

[DrSeptimus]

If you are proofreading and pointing out the mistake, please remember to use a spoiler tag. 

 

Thank you for your cooperation.

[QueenMaker]

dose this change the hypno note quests or is it just the initial getting hypnotized sequence ? 

[DrSeptimus]

5 minutes ago, QueenMaker said:

dose this change the hypno note quests or is it just the initial getting hypnotized sequence ? 

 

Only the hypnotized sequences.

[QueenMaker]

ok cool thanks for the clarification

[DrSeptimus]

14 minutes ago, QueenMaker said:

ok cool thanks for the clarification

 

Even if I want to change the story of hypno notes, I don't think I am creative enough to do so. The story and details in hypno notes seems rather rigid.

 

Oh well, hopefully I can finish [ACSR] Become A Meat Toilet in a hour or two. Each versions take me about 5 hours to wrote.

 

Spoiler

And hopefully my boner calm down once I am done, staying erect for 5 hours while writing the story was rough.

 

Edited July 27 by DrSeptimus

[cold burn]

A note regarding the hypnotist messages. I think having him be referred to as 'my Master' rather than 'the hypnotist' would read better. edit: To explain 'the hypnotist' is much less personal, and much less submissive, a name when compared to 'my/your Master'.

Edited July 27 by cold burn
To avoid making a second post.

[DrSeptimus]

2 hours ago, cold burn said:

A note regarding the hypnotist messages. I think having him be referred to as 'my Master' rather than 'the hypnotist' would read better. edit: To explain 'the hypnotist' is much less personal, and much less submissive, a name when compared to 'my/your Master'.

 

Spoiler alert..

 

Spoiler

Have you reach stage 110? That's when PC start to acknowledge the hypnotist as her master.

 

Edited July 27 by DrSeptimus

[NeoJK]

Hii is this for the version 1.9.1.2 of Bos? the mod autor of BoS said to have a problem with the hypnosis quest in this version, I assume u have no problems with that hypnosis quest.. or maybe I miss something 🤔

[DrSeptimus]

6 hours ago, NeoJK said:

Hii is this for the version 1.9.1.2 of Bos? the mod autor of BoS said to have a problem with the hypnosis quest in this version, I assume u have no problems with that hypnosis quest.. or maybe I miss something 🤔

 

This ia just a story replacer and it work with all version unless jib change the directory where the json files is.

[NeoJK]

1 hour ago, DrSeptimus said:

 

This ia just a story replacer and it work with all version unless jib change the directory where the json files is.

Got it, thnks!

[nefer385]

I think you are on to something.  Just looking at the main page in which you shared some snippets.  I did catch one minor error.  

 

As soon as the hypnotist took off his pants, I immediately tore off my clothes and jumped on to his cock, tearing up my hymen and giving away my virginity. 

 

The error that I caught was that it stated "jumped into his cock"

 

Also, this is unrelated, but something that I have noticed with all of the adult mods, whether for Fallout 4 or Skyrim.  Why are mod authors always saying 'cock' instead of 'dick'?  I never hear people outside of 'Hollywood' saying 'cock'.  In most cases the raunchiest term in my mind would be 'dick', now if it is considered demeaning or politically incorrect then please forgive my ignorance.  Just been something that always irked me as it always takes me out of the scene each time I read or hear 'cock'.  Just curious about it.

[DrSeptimus]

On 7/29/2026 at 2:48 AM, nefer385 said:

I think you are on to something.  Just looking at the main page in which you shared some snippets.  I did catch one minor error.  

 

As soon as the hypnotist took off his pants, I immediately tore off my clothes and jumped on to his cock, tearing up my hymen and giving away my virginity. 

 

The error that I caught was that it stated "jumped into his cock"

 

 

Thanks for proofreading. I look for references and it seems like onto can be used. Message Box have limited room for letters, so if onto is also the right choice, I would rather use the word onto instead on to to save space.  So should I go for onto instead?

 

I been using word with least letter while writing ACSR due to space limit in Message Box. More than 650 letters and the text would be cut off.

 

On 7/29/2026 at 2:48 AM, nefer385 said:

Also, this is unrelated, but something that I have noticed with all of the adult mods, whether for Fallout 4 or Skyrim.  Why are mod authors always saying 'cock' instead of 'dick'?  I never hear people outside of 'Hollywood' saying 'cock'.  In most cases the raunchiest term in my mind would be 'dick', now if it is considered demeaning or politically incorrect then please forgive my ignorance.  Just been something that always irked me as it always takes me out of the scene each time I read or hear 'cock'.  Just curious about it.

 

Dick sounds more casual while cock is more sexual & erotic.

 

Edited July 30 by DrSeptimus

[nefer385]

Damn it, you taught me something, which isn't cool! 😄  I was actually only concerned about "into".  You actually took me to school by introducing the question of 'on to' or 'onto', to my shame I have never known or used the word as 'onto'.  I have our answer, you can absolutely use 'onto'.  According to eslteacher.org they state the following:

 

(Sorry for the size of this pasted section--wanted to help confirm your point with their instruction).

Onto or On to? The One Rule to Get It Right Every Time

Jan 12, 2026 · Onto is a preposition used when there is movement or direction toward a surface or position. If something moves from one place to another and ends up on a surface, use onto.

[nefer385]

Regarding the difference between dick and cock.  Guess that makes sense I've only ever heard it 'casually'.  😁

[DrSeptimus]

8 hours ago, nefer385 said:

Damn it, you taught me something, which isn't cool! 😄  I was actually only concerned about "into".  You actually took me to school by introducing the question of 'on to' or 'onto', to my shame I have never known or used the word as 'onto'.  I have our answer, you can absolutely use 'onto'.  According to eslteacher.org they state the following:

 

(Sorry for the size of this pasted section--wanted to help confirm your point with their instruction).

Onto or On to? The One Rule to Get It Right Every Time

Jan 12, 2026 · Onto is a preposition used when there is movement or direction toward a surface or position. If something moves from one place to another and ends up on a surface, use onto.

 

You can thanks game limitation for that 😒. When there is a limit, you tend to get creative with your choices of words. Even with Better Message Box Controls, the letter limit for message box is about 650. So even if my proofreader fixes the typo for me, I am always looking for alternative words that use the fewest words or space. For example, if my proofreader fixes it with the word aphrodisiac, I try to see if I can use philtre instead, since philtre only has 6 letters compared to 11 in aphrodisiac.

 

 

 

[nefer385]

14 hours ago, DrSeptimus said:

 

You can thanks game limitation for that 😒. When there is a limit, you tend to get creative with your choices of words. Even with Better Message Box Controls, the letter limit for message box is about 650. So even if my proofreader fixes the typo for me, I am always looking for alternative words that use the fewest words or space. For example, if my proofreader fixes it with the word aphrodisiac, I try to see if I can use philtre instead, since philtre only has 6 letters compared to 11 in aphrodisiac.

 

 

 

Well, the positive side it definitely keeps you on your toes to find ways to fit the words.  I now realize that that is the issue with YPS Immersive Fashion as it is options to try to truncate the messages or split them in half.  It is really messed up as you said, because you want to convey messages to the player, that are really engaging and yet, sometimes the sentence structure gets so butchered that sometimes I miss the first part of the message.  I did not consider that it is due to the game's text limitation.  Well, what you modders have been able to do for this 15-year-old game is extraordinary in and of itself.

[DrSeptimus]

2 hours ago, nefer385 said:

 I did not consider that it is due to the game's text limitation. 

 

You do now. What makes it even worst is the spacing, I found out that even if you manage to fit 650 letter into the message box; your text can still be cut off if there is too many word. More word = more spacing. Each space that was consume means less word to fit in.

 

I do hope you enjoy it and do proofread it if you got time. I am now writing another version albeit with slight variation.

 

Spoiler

The next version is probably the most degenerate version I ever wrote. I should stop reading Japanese erotic novel.

 

Edited July 30 by DrSeptimus

[nefer385]

I will do, honestly, I appreciate you advising us of the limitations.  I have for over a decade chalked some of the writing up to mod authors unwittingly misspelling or chopping off words due to lack of focus, or language barriers.  It is without question something that most players are unaware of, hell I recall back in the day some mod users critiquing some mod authors' text and writing within a given mod.  Now, looking back how many of those instances where the mod authors being unfairly maligned.  Those mod users are crappy individuals anyway for complaining about free work and free art that someone provided to them, but I digress.

 

Yes, I will be another set of eyes for you and hell I'll learn some stuff along the way. 😉

[cold burn]

So, I have downloaded all of these and looked through them. Here's my two cents. First I'm not a fan of the way they all claim the player was a virgin before gaining 100 corruption and the curse started. This is... very unlikely due to the mechanics of BoS even if you are playing someone who might have been one before hand. Which not everyone will. Second I'm not a fan of the way it phrases wanting to be raped. I'm firmly in the camp of 'cannot rape the willing' when it comes to the term, and so this comes across as a bit nonsensical in some cases. I think a better way to phrase this would be the idea that '(insert bimbo type here) always consents'. Besides this avenue gives more room for variations of descriptions. Take the thoughts from the Meat Toilet lines. Rather than this line  'Must get raped... quickly...' we could have something like 'A Meat Toilet cannot withhold consent from sex'. 


Also the virgin lines feel very out of place in the thoughts. Pretty much all of the stage 40 all felt really weird.
 

Edited August 1 by cold burn
clarity

[DrSeptimus]

2 hours ago, cold burn said:

So, I have downloaded all of these and looked through them. Here's my two cents. First I'm not a fan of the way they all claim the player was a virgin before gaining 100 corruption and the curse started. 

 

Become A Meat Toilet and Corrupted By Dremora is non-virgin. I wrote 6 version (1 still wip) with 3 version start as virgin and 3 as non-virgin.

 

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This is... very unlikely due to the mechanics of BoS even if you are playing someone who might have been one before hand.

 

They are merely story replacer for BoS curse story, not representing the BoS mechanics.

 

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Second I'm not a fan of the way it phrases wanting to be raped. I'm firmly in the camp of 'cannot rape the willing' when it comes to the term, and so this comes across as a bit nonsensical in some cases. I think a better way to phrase this would be the idea that '(insert bimbo type here) always consents'. Besides this avenue gives more room for variations of descriptions. 

 

If I use the word "consents", "non-consensual", "aggressive" and etc too frequent, I would be running out of space for the message box. There is a limit on how much word and letter can fit into message box before it was cut off. 

 

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Rather than this line  'Must get raped... quickly...' we could have something like 'A Meat Toilet cannot withhold consent from sex'. 

 

The only problem is that font size would be adjust based on how long the sentences are, the longer it was the smaller the font going to be. Too small and nobody can read them.

 

For example, the line "Must get raped... quickly..." would look like this. but if I used your line, this is how it going to looks like "A Meat Toilet cannot withhold consent from sex" due to long sentence.

 

I welcome creative writing, but I must somehow find a way to fit as little letter and word as possible. 

 

If the limit isn't there, I would have avoid using the same word over and over again.

 

Gee!! Thanks Todd.

Edited August 2 by DrSeptimus

[ineedtherapy225]

i have an idea 

a dibella breeding priestess theme 

now im not a good writer in any way so i dont know what that would read like but i just thought id put the idea out there 


as a side note 
im really enjoying the mod so far you have cooked with this one :3

[DrSeptimus]

50 minutes ago, ineedtherapy225 said:

i have an idea 

a dibella breeding priestess theme 

now im not a good writer in any way so i dont know what that would read like but i just thought id put the idea out there 


as a side note 
im really enjoying the mod so far you have cooked with this one :3

 

I would probably do it as book instead of replacer for BoS curse stage. I been planning to make one for Journey of a Bimbo Babe for quite awhile.

 

This BoS curse stage use message box. Message Box have character limit roughly around 600-650, it really dampen my writing skills. Books on the other hand is different story.

 

 

[ineedtherapy225]

28 minutes ago, DrSeptimus said:

 

I would probably do it as book instead of replacer for BoS curse stage. I been planning to make one for Journey of a Bimbo Babe for quite awhile.

 

This BoS curse stage use message box. Message Box have character limit roughly around 600-650, it really dampen my writing skills. Books on the other hand is different story.

 

 

i gotcha i will look forward too it if you ever decide too make that ^.^

[DrSeptimus]

On 8/4/2026 at 3:41 AM, ineedtherapy225 said:

i gotcha i will look forward too it if you ever decide too make that ^.^

 

Yeah working on it...

 

If you are interested to read the introduction, it is available here.

 

 

This log are introduction story for my "Book of Depravity" mod. There is a total of 7 log, log 4-7 would be available around 7-9 August.