Spectre_15 Posted January 25, 2014 Posted January 25, 2014 For about 4 years, I've been working on a novel series, Alpha X. Â Since I am almost done with the second of the first trilogy (the series is being written as two trilogies), I am planning on getting the first book published. Â Before I do that, however, I do want to get some feedback on my book. Â Since I plan on getting it published, I'd rather not post the entire book online here. Â However, I am looking for a few people that are willing to read it and give me feedback. Â I am looking for four or five people that want to read it and give me feedback on it. Â As of right now, I've never gotten anyone that's read it and had any complaints, it's gotten nothing but positive feedback. Â The following is what the first book is about. Â If you're interested in being a reader, please post in this thread. Â The world was once run by demons. Â Demons gave humans magic, and used them as gladiators. Â The humans turned against the demons, sealed them away, and formed kingdoms. Â Generations later, Sirus is a young man living with the love of his life and raising their son together until he becomes the obsession of one of the kings in a neighboring country. Â After the start of an all out war, Sirus becomes a target for a goal that he doesn't understand, and life changes from paradise to a fight for survival. Â Readers: airdance gaggedgirl123 H34d5h07 PandaSong Ragna_Rok Â
Spectre_15 Posted January 25, 2014 Author Posted January 25, 2014 Thulas, since you liked my post, does that mean you want to be included as a reader?
Guest Ragna_Rok Posted January 25, 2014 Posted January 25, 2014 first... LAZY SLOTHS! ... i hope more folks show up here.  second, is it to late to give it a shot in in about 2 weeks from now on? (have exams finished then, just another test a week later, after that 5 weeks for myself and my collection of po... uh, mods i mean )  third, about how much pages were talking about? i mean, do we go like "the orcs" (one of my favorites ) and wield the "berserk-battleaxe of 800 pages"? just curious, wouldnt also hurt much.
PandaSong Posted January 25, 2014 Posted January 25, 2014 I have time to read through it, if you'd like? Although I am a bit picky about books (fair warning!), I do like the setting you have going.
Spectre_15 Posted January 26, 2014 Author Posted January 26, 2014 first... LAZY SLOTHS! ... i hope more folks show up here.  second, is it to late to give it a shot in in about 2 weeks from now on? (have exams finished then, just another test a week later, after that 5 weeks for myself and my collection of po... uh, mods i mean )  third, about how much pages were talking about? i mean, do we go like "the orcs" (one of my favorites ) and wield the "berserk-battleaxe of 800 pages"? just curious, wouldnt also hurt much.  First: Same here. Second: Two weeks from now should be fine. Third: In word, it averages between 12 and 16 pages per chapter if memory serves.  Unfortunately, I cant say for sure because my current computer's word doesnt have pages.  I have time to read through it, if you'd like? Although I am a bit picky about books (fair warning!), I do like the setting you have going. I'd prefer picky people, especially if they nitpick.  I want to make it flawless and have literally no loopholes.
Guest airdance Posted January 26, 2014 Posted January 26, 2014 would you consider me as one of your readers?
Guest Ragna_Rok Posted January 26, 2014 Posted January 26, 2014 deal. im following here, i will come back here once my exams are done  *bookmarked and followed*
Spectre_15 Posted January 26, 2014 Author Posted January 26, 2014 Just PM me when you're ready to start reading, and I'll send you the first chapter.
Cynical Misanthrope Posted January 26, 2014 Posted January 26, 2014 I would love to read as well, but I have a very short attention span. Might take a few hours/days before I have finsihed readinng it. If' that is okay, then I am in for sure! Â Â
Spectre_15 Posted January 26, 2014 Author Posted January 26, 2014 I'll send you the first chapter in a little while, H34d5h07.
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