My first wanking animation - please give feedback

[Kyle Woohoo]

Hi guys... I just created my first animation for wicked whims and I would love to get your feedback on this. It is just a short animation of a man wanking, standing on the floor. You can find it under "Handjobs" (name "JerkingMan", creator "dude4dadfun") when clicking on a floor for one sim. I am not really satisfied yet as it still seems a little bit to stiffy to me. What do you think? Do you see something which could be made better?

 

WW_dude4dadfun_animations.package

[Khlas]

Your animation looks fine but If you want some suggestion, try to animate the hand a bit more (the hand that is used to masturbate). 
In my opinion you should also change the position of the other hand but it’s just an opinion, it is fine as it is if you like it this way. 

[Kyle Woohoo]

Good point... Thank you very much for your feedback. I will re-work this animation soon and will consider this!