Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Posted May 11, 2020 I made my vampire character but something feels off. Something about the face bugs me. I can't put my finger on what though. Does anyone have any suggestions and/or pointers?
Psalam Posted May 11, 2020 Posted May 11, 2020 27 minutes ago, Azzhat said: I made my vampire character but something feels off. Something about the face bugs me. I can't put my finger on what though. Does anyone have any suggestions and/or pointers? She's not quite as angular as most which makes her look less hungry but that's all I can see.
Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Author Posted May 11, 2020 3 minutes ago, Psalam said: She's not quite as angular as most which makes her look less hungry but that's all I can see. I'll try reducing the jaws width and see how that goes.
worik Posted May 11, 2020 Posted May 11, 2020 37 minutes ago, Azzhat said: Does anyone have any suggestions and/or pointers? She looks a bit "clean" => maybe add some shades/freckles/birthmarks/blemishes ?and you could try to add some "depths" to her face contours. Cheekbones, chin, etc ...
Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Author Posted May 11, 2020 22 minutes ago, GodSmack said: You added a powerful jaw on a milk drinkers body. This better you think?
Alessia Wellington Posted May 11, 2020 Posted May 11, 2020 3 minutes ago, Azzhat said: This better you think? I think she'd look even better if you'd decrease her cheekbone's width. She has a very triangular face right now.
Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Author Posted May 11, 2020 1 minute ago, Alessia Wellington said: I think she'd look even better if you'd decrease her cheekbone's width. She has a very triangular face right now. I decreased it and rounded out her chin somewhat. This better?
Psalam Posted May 11, 2020 Posted May 11, 2020 1 minute ago, Azzhat said: I decreased it and rounded out her chin somewhat. This better? I'd need some more angles to be sure but yes, that is what I was looking for. Now she looks less well fed, leaner and, to quote Shakespeare, "hungrier".
Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Author Posted May 11, 2020 4 minutes ago, Psalam said: I'd need some more angles to be sure but yes, that is what I was looking for. Now she looks less well fed, leaner and, to quote Shakespeare, "hungrier". I got a few more angles.
Alessia Wellington Posted May 11, 2020 Posted May 11, 2020 2 minutes ago, Azzhat said: I got a few more angles. Now she looks really nice. I'd leave her this way.
Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Author Posted May 11, 2020 Just now, Alessia Wellington said: Now she looks really nice. I'd leave her this way. Alright I will. Thanks for the feedback.
Azzhat Posted May 11, 2020 Author Posted May 11, 2020 Okay looks like she's in an acceptable state. Thanks for the feedback everyone. It really helped.
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