Feedback needed

[Azzhat]

I made my vampire character but something feels off. Something about the face bugs me. I can't put my finger on what though. Does anyone have any suggestions and/or pointers? 

[Psalam]

27 minutes ago, Azzhat said:

I made my vampire character but something feels off. Something about the face bugs me. I can't put my finger on what though. Does anyone have any suggestions and/or pointers? 

She's not quite as angular as most which makes her look less hungry but that's all I can see.

[Azzhat]

3 minutes ago, Psalam said:

She's not quite as angular as most which makes her look less hungry but that's all I can see.

I'll try reducing the jaws width and see how that goes.

[worik]

37 minutes ago, Azzhat said:

Does anyone have any suggestions and/or pointers?

She looks a bit "clean" => maybe add some shades/freckles/birthmarks/blemishes

?and you could try to add some "depths" to her face contours.  Cheekbones, chin, etc ...

[GodSmack]

You added a powerful jaw on a milk drinkers body.

[Azzhat]

22 minutes ago, GodSmack said:

You added a powerful jaw on a milk drinkers body.

This better you think? 

[Alessia Wellington]

3 minutes ago, Azzhat said:

This better you think? 

 

I think she'd look even better if you'd decrease her cheekbone's width. She has a very triangular face right now.

[Azzhat]

1 minute ago, Alessia Wellington said:

 

I think she'd look even better if you'd decrease her cheekbone's width. She has a very triangular face right now.

I decreased it and rounded out her chin somewhat. This better? 

[Psalam]

1 minute ago, Azzhat said:

I decreased it and rounded out her chin somewhat. This better? 

I'd need some more angles to be sure but yes, that is what I was looking for. Now she looks less well fed, leaner and, to quote Shakespeare, "hungrier".

[Azzhat]

4 minutes ago, Psalam said:

I'd need some more angles to be sure but yes, that is what I was looking for. Now she looks less well fed, leaner and, to quote Shakespeare, "hungrier".

I got a few more angles. 

[Alessia Wellington]

2 minutes ago, Azzhat said:

I got a few more angles.

 

Now she looks really nice. I'd leave her this way.

[Azzhat]

Just now, Alessia Wellington said:

 

Now she looks really nice. I'd leave her this way.

Alright I will. Thanks for the feedback. 

[Azzhat]

Okay looks like she's in an acceptable state. Thanks for the feedback everyone. It really helped.