Either I missed this one, either it is recent. Anyway, it's noticeable there have been improvements regarding the pace, as we don't linger on each scene like before. The integrated subtitles are also appreciable. However, the vocabulary, the names (Shepard in particular), and the significantly frequent typos, and the not too commander-like behavior do break the immersion.  Nice intensity however in that farewell scene, which is a good reminder of what "going to war" means.