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Close Alliance - Act II - Chapter III


Kin Tsuchi

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(Lesbian)

 

 

Act II - Chapter III

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You can find all chapters and characters in my blog-description. 

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Loved it! Nothing shall get in the way of the lovemaking. You did very well setting up the poses in such a complex manner, I appreciate that effort very very much. :)

The only grammatical mistake I assume not to be a typo is: "quiet" (low volume), is spelled that way instead of "quite" (a little bit).

Also the use of adverbs in the asterisks, e.g. *purrs gentle* should be written as *purrs gently*. 
Something like: "He is quick" (adjective), "He runs quickly" (verb (run) + adverb (quickly)).
Like how "moans soft" is incorrect, but "moans softly" is correct 

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Hey Rattlesnark,

 

thank you for the corrections, of course, you're right. I hope that I caught every mistake.. guess adverbs and I will never become friends in this life ;)

 

And you're right the second time. Maybe I'm using your phrase in one of the next chapters "Nothing shall get in the way of the lovemaking!" sounds like something Aela would say =P

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And you're right the second time. Maybe I'm using your phrase in one of the next chapters "Nothing shall get in the way of the lovemaking!" sounds like something Aela would say =P

Haha! That was funny to read, thanks. See you on Chp. XIV :)

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Most brilliant. Love your story(es) and screenshots.

Thank you very much =)

 

The plot thickens, very nice! 

After so many chapters it was time to get serious ^_^"

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