You managed to create a remarkable face. It is "easy" to create sexy ladies, even for simple users, and use some poses to create even more sexy shots. That is one thing - but creating worth remembering is a different level of work. So don't bother of the feedback. You create in the level you deem worthy of your creation - and that is all it needs.

To find the right balance between body, scene, light, objects.. everything. That is what is to be considered most erotic.