Interesting. Can't wait to see the next part

This becomes more and more interesting,very well written and great photos,hope to see the next part soon!

More are coming. im just trying to figure out where to take it

Nice to see some stories on here. Every body starts then we don't here from them anymore.... so far this one has been updated frequently. And yes pics are worth a thousand words thumb up on your screen archery. Good story too.

Part 4 is comming on the week end. been very lazy of late

Outstanding story and picture portrayal!!! I do hope you will continue this epic tale. If you need a jump-start of imagination I have thought of several directions to take. But out of respect, I've chosen to not share them at this time. It always bothers me to see someone who "pushes" at the author of quality work to try to influence his/her own direction...I say to those people, write or create your own project and just appreciate what the author has done and what he/she may be trying to do...

Please keep your imagination and creativity alive and carry on with this epic project. I like to write and will offer my help if you want it. You may contact me on the Nexus @ LavaHawaii.

Respectfully

LavaHawaii (G Brooke)