I don’t know why.

I laughed when I saw the chapter of your blog.

A habit for sure.

 

Well. I thought you didn’t like Toast Pack poses?

12 minutes ago, hana120 said:

A habit for sure.

Or you know you'll see Arlans stupid face again

 

12 minutes ago, hana120 said:

Well. I thought you didn’t like Toast Pack poses?

I don't like the gory bits no . But I didn't use a Pose from him in this entry. If you are speaking about the Carcette thing, it's not Toasts. Its just one normal pose for the dude, the head and the spear are not part of it, just moved and positioned to look like it with a bit of photo editing afterwards

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I love these groups, it's absolutely the worst case scenario for each one?

 

fun read man XD

6 minutes ago, yorpers said:

I love these groups, it's absolutely the worst case scenario for each one?

Well.. I would say Arlan is totally fine with it xD

 

6 minutes ago, yorpers said:

fun read man XD

thanks =D 

16 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Well.. I would say Arlan is totally fine with it xD

That's what makes it the worst case scenario.?

 

That's also the best case for fun, though. ?

31 minutes ago, yorpers said:

That's what makes it the worst case scenario.?

 

That's also the best case for fun, though. ?

Aye to both xDD

Well, this was a fun read. One has to admit neither Sofia nor Maarie are themselves anymore, they might not be broken entirely, but it's safe to say Arlan caused some lasting psychological damage to both of them.
And A. suddenly trying to be nice ... feels wrong. ? Not gonna endear him to me for sure, I don't like him and more important I trust him, I especially don't trust him to do the right thing. He proved again and again that he does utterly stupid thing for little to no reason (aside of 'he can').
Still a fun read, I hope you brought a portable battering ram to use on 'suddenly' appearing walls, I'm at least looking forward to some stuff from the other team. (Oh and tsk, tsk, Mr. Urag, really? And in the middle of the Arcanium too?)

 

 

 

Btw. who's this Saardia girl? Given the place one might think Iman (also known to go by Saadia) brought her twin sister over to the Mare as well. ?
(Even more btw.: Not bad, but I like my replacers for Saadia, Carlotta and Ysolda better ... matter of taste of course.) ^^

 

14 minutes ago, Talesien said:

One has to admit neither Sofia nor Maarie are themselves anymore, they might not be broken entirely, but it's safe to say Arlan caused some lasting psychological damage to both of them.

Ehehehehe, not saying he is not a bad influence. But There was never an instance of Maari before she got in contact with Arlan. Soo who is to say ?

As for Sofia.. Yeah something went very wrong with her.. Looks like having a Dick thrust in your mouth and nearly suffocating from it multiple times isn't too healthy for your brain ?

In other news: She still has nice tits

 

16 minutes ago, Talesien said:

And A. suddenly trying to be nice ... feels wrong. ? Not gonna endear him to me for sure, I don't like him and more important I trust him, I especially don't trust him to do the right thing. He proved again and again that he does utterly stupid thing for little to no reason (aside of 'he can').

Well he ain't up for a redemption arc, but at least he has a few more facetes than just "Me Horny, Me smash" Well.. Every now and then at least >__>

He still will fuck something up because he can >__> Unfixable asshole that he is

 

18 minutes ago, Talesien said:

, I hope you brought a portable battering ram to use on 'suddenly' appearing walls, I'm at least looking forward to some stuff from the other team

I will try my best to stay focused on them xD least for good number of parts in the next entry. At leas their adventure will a bit more traditional ?

 

19 minutes ago, Talesien said:

tsk, tsk, Mr. Urag, really? And in the middle of the Arcanium too?)

Leave him alone, she was asking for it, wearing stuff like that! xD

 

19 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Btw. who's this Saardia girl? Given the place one might think Iman (also known to go by Saadia) brought her twin sister over to the Mare as well. ?

... Wasn't her fucking name Saardia? I could've sworn.. Well she is now, Saadia is dead >_> I killed her with a Spoon 

 

21 minutes ago, Talesien said:

(Even more btw.: Not bad, but I like my replacers for Saadia, Carlotta and Ysolda better ... matter of taste of course.) ^^

Dude I freaking hate my Ysolda and Bijin looks so crap in my ENB xD But it was too late to change and I also need a good number of Bijins now because I already used them ? So I am very much aware they look like crap >__>

Saadia tho.. Is awesome

It's always fun to read your stories. Oh, and I must confess that it has helped me a lot when I want to edit mine story, even if it's from a different game.

> Serana is very beautiful and sexy.

 

 i don't know if it's your natural talant or you really jsut that good.  But damn your story always really interesting to read, and they never get boring.  Id on;t even find any critik for you so yopu kan grown even more.  
And thank you finnaly some actual public stuff! Seeing Saardia walking cum coverd was... BELLISSIMO! 

One thing for sure, your entries are still massive. Yet, appreciating how the red thread of the scenario is more consistent, and thus easier to follow compared to Old Man Dovakhiin for example. Character wise, strangely those who got the most character development there were Arlan (with a quite well written interaction with Braith ; it's good to get a male with some personality on LL), and possibly Serana (with nicely redesigned looks as well). The others, with the exception of Maari seem to have personalities less distinct from each other (specially in bed ^^).  Yet you intertwined quite well the different steps of your chapter with the adult sequences. ; with rather entertaining dialogues as well. Now, while the fluid effects were well done (specially the sperm ones, the golden shower seems less mastered), and the gifs quite fluid, I would be mindful of the total length of the entry (in MB) if they feature gifs, as it might induce a heavier loading (it's mostly a question of total size to be loaded in fact). Anyway, good work overall. ✌️

 

 

« That Arlan guy, he thinks about honey-honey all the time, but he's not that bad inside uh. Plus the kitten gal is very funny. 

               Now dunno why so many people are called Serana. It must've been a very common name at the time, yes.  »

 

 

20 hours ago, TheNooboosimmer said:

It's always fun to read your stories. Oh, and I must confess that it has helped me a lot when I want to edit mine story, even if it's from a different game.

Thank you^^ and great to hear that you got something out of it too ? 

 

6 hours ago, ERPModEnjoyer said:

 i don't know if it's your natural talant or you really jsut that good.  But damn your story always really interesting to read, and they never get boring.  Id on;t even find any critik for you so yopu kan grown even more.  

Thank you very much

 

6 hours ago, ERPModEnjoyer said:

And thank you finnaly some actual public stuff! Seeing Saardia walking cum coverd was... BELLISSIMO! 

I knew you would like that

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

One thing for sure, your entries are still massive. Yet, appreciating how the red thread of the scenario is more consistent, and thus easier to follow compared to Old Man Dovakhiin for example.

 

I like em big

Let's be honest, if I wouldn't make them that big, I would have probably 2 Entrys per week, sometimes I have.. I think doing that regularly is too much considering I am not the only one posting storys and blogs, so I rather have one Big Chap ^.^

And I learned from my shortcomings in Oldman. I wanted to do too much at once and include too many Things in a short amount of time. One Good Idea after the other, thrown into the mix until I didn't know which one I should follow first.. The reason why I did the last chapters of it to at least finish up on one thing ?

In short, I try to focus on a smaller number of things first nowadays, I am glad that it pays off ^^

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Character wise, strangely those who got the most character development there were Arlan (with a quite well written interaction with Braith ; it's good to get a male with some personality on LL), and possibly Serana (with nicely redesigned looks as well).

Thank you ?

He is quite the character..  ?

And Serana was a very lucky find. I was almost done to get the whatever options for her. Reason Why her personality changed so much is exactly how she looks. It inspired me to a different approach then  most to do and instead of doing something I've done a hundred times already, having a Character like her around is a little challenging but quite fun to work with ^^

(that and someone who can smash Arlans balls with little effort is always a Win ?

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

he others, with the exception of Maari seem to have personalities less distinct from each other (specially in bed ^^). 

That is very true, I try to make it easier on me and gave them each of them one or two very strong characterirstics to differentiate them from each other. I had a little problem first since, the actual team as it exists now only came to be after I got my hands on a tool to make my own characters. The original plan and story was going to be similar to what we have now,  just that Lilit and the Twin Elves were supposed to fill the Roles for Sarah, Maari and Sofia. That is why they seem so similar.  (As for the bed part.. Yeaah  authors kinks n stuff  ? )

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

while the fluid effects were well done (specially the sperm ones, the golden shower seems less mastered),

 

I'm still experimenting with different things for that Part?

Right now I often recolor the Semen assets I've made ready for use for it.

But I also need to make new ones, so I might find a good way to make them better looking soon^^

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

would be mindful of the total length of the entry (in MB) if they feature gifs, as it might induce a heavier loading (it's mostly a question of total size to be loaded in fact).

Mh.. Good to know.

So this entire chapter here is 178mb with header included. Most chapters range from 35 to something of 160mb plus minus some special cases ? I'm not agains the idea of reducing the use of gifs if chapters get too long.. From your experience, do you happen to know roughly the size when it starts to lead to longer loading times? For me, these chapters fully load after a few minutes and everytime I asked, most people told me they load okay, so I can't really tell ?

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Anyway, good work overall. ✌️

thank you for your feedback, as in the past I appreciate it very much ^^

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

That Arlan guy, he thinks about honey-honey all the time, but he's not that bad inside uh. Plus the kitten gal is very funny. 

 

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

               Now dunno why so many people are called Serana. It must've been a very common name at the time, yes.  »

Legends tell that Women named Serana have a 100% chance to hijack your story

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4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

I like em big

Let's be honest, if I wouldn't make them that big, I would have probably 2 Entrys per week, sometimes I have.. I think doing that regularly is too much considering I am not the only one posting storys and blogs, so I rather have one Big Chap ^.^

And I learned from my shortcomings in Oldman. I wanted to do too much at once and include too many Things in a short amount of time. One Good Idea after the other, thrown into the mix until I didn't know which one I should follow first.. The reason why I did the last chapters of it to at least finish up on one thing ?

In short, I try to focus on a smaller number of things first nowadays, I am glad that it pays off ^^

Well, that's quite considerate to other authors. Kudos mister, and may we get more of that attitude in the blogs section ! 

4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

And I learned from my shortcomings in Oldman. I wanted to do too much at once and include too many Things in a short amount of time. One Good Idea after the other, thrown into the mix until I didn't know which one I should follow first.. The reason why I did the last chapters of it to at least finish up on one thing ?

In short, I try to focus on a smaller number of things first nowadays, I am glad that it pays off ^^

Yep, Vargr was the turning point from that point of view.

 

4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Thank you ?

He is quite the character..  ?

And Serana was a very lucky find. I was almost done to get the whatever options for her. Reason Why her personality changed so much is exactly how she looks. It inspired me to a different approach then  most to do and instead of doing something I've done a hundred times already, having a Character like her around is a little challenging but quite fun to work with ^^

(that and someone who can smash Arlans balls with little effort is always a Win ?

I find that people's interpretation of Serana tell something about their style as an author. Yours is... quite original.

 

4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

 

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I'm still experimenting with different things for that Part?

Right now I often recolor the Semen assets I've made ready for use for it.

But I also need to make new ones, so I might find a good way to make them better looking soon^^

If I ever resume storytelling, I may have to explore the custom assets way as well. Yet, piss seems harder to do than cum. So Arlan is right on point, once more. ^^

 

 

4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Mh.. Good to know.

So this entire chapter here is 178mb with header included. Most chapters range from 35 to something of 160mb plus minus some special cases ? I'm not agains the idea of reducing the use of gifs if chapters get too long.. From your experience, do you happen to know roughly the size when it starts to lead to longer loading times? For me, these chapters fully load after a few minutes and everytime I asked, most people told me they load okay, so I can't really tell ?

 

thank you for your feedback, as in the past I appreciate it very much ^^

I'd say it varies depending on the servers' load (which might not be the same at every hour of the day), and the user's connection. However, 100 MB (which is Alter's classic entry size) seems to be always safe, while going beyond 160 MB (which is Crw's entries with gifs) seems to cause more and more issues the further one strays from that. So the sweet pot might be in between those two points.

 

And providing feedback is the least I can do considering the amount of work there can be behind authors' works. So thank YOU for the entertaining work, and glad if my past feedback somehow helped a bit.

4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

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Legends tell that Women named Serana have a 100% chance to hijack your story

 

 

« That Arlan is really funny, so he can't be bad. Except for hemorrhoids maybe. ?

               Anyway, that's very true about the Seranas. The one I know is very the opposite of Arlan, but she's still a good person.   »

 

 

Thi epsiode is great! great fun to read i loved

Story advances, funy things happening, levid level is meet ghukan standards

 

Good mix, plus full chaos commencing ( next part going to be intresting! )

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, that's quite considerate to other authors. Kudos mister, and may we get more of that attitude in the blogs section ! 

I like people, I got annoyed by certain antics in the Blog section enough to not do the same 

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Yep, Vargr was the turning point from that point of view.

definitely. the second try was a move in the right direction but I confused myself too much and started to do the exact same mistakes.?

Third Time is a charm, so after Vargr grew out of Oldmans shadow it became more linear (and tbh, a very fun thing to work on. Since I can do almost whatever I want without breaking characters. I broke DB with certain actions so much that I couldn't even write him like I wanted anymore.) 

But hey, at least he got a Cameo in  Vargr like most of the other Oldman crew ?

 So I can still use them if I want to without messing things up ^^

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I find that people's interpretation of Serana tell something about their style as an author. Yours is... quite original.

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

If I ever resume storytelling, I may have to explore the custom assets way as well. Yet, piss seems harder to do than cum. So Arlan is right on point, once more. ^^

It's easier than I thought it would be once you get the first assets done and can work new ones out of them. I find using existing textures like the ones in Slacs and Slavetats when cut and positioned right, can make for very good pictures ^^

I still have to work on Blood for fight scenes tho, what I already have is hit and miss right now

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

seems to cause more and more issues the further one strays from that. So the sweet pot might be in between those two points.

 

Alright, ? That is something to keep an Eye out for in the future. Thank you.

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

And providing feedback is the least I can do considering the amount of work there can be behind authors' works. So thank YOU for the entertaining work, and glad if my past feedback somehow helped a bit.

I'm just happy that people enjoy reading it, that's more than enough ^^

And I'm always grateful for tips and critic on how to improve. You helped me in Oldman a lot when I first started. Can't say this enough ?

 

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

« That Arlan is really funny, so he can't be bad. Except for hemorrhoids maybe. ?

There are only very few people who consider Arlan not bad You're sure you are not related to Maari or Wuunferth?

 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

               Anyway, that's very true about the Seranas. The one I know is very the opposite of Arlan, but she's still a good person.   »

I know a few Seranas, most of them are better People than the Arlan

 

 

1 hour ago, Nonseen said:

Thi epsiode is great! great fun to read i loved

Thank you, I'm very happy you enjoyed it ^^

 

1 hour ago, Nonseen said:

Good mix, plus full chaos commencing ( next part going to be intresting! )

I'll try, starting later this evening. Team Scroll is in for an adventure and team Valerica will deal with Goblins.. (Again)  These poor little Gremlins.. ?