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Prelude to a Bloodbath


Ronin79

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Introduction (Because I deleted a few entries that didn't quite measure up)

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Ysmira is dead, and Sonja has drank all her blood, thus absorbing her powers as dragonborn, and making herself Tamriel's last hope against Alduin. Poised to take over the Volkihar clan from within, she has seduced Lord Harkon into naming her a Princess of the Volkihar, putting her on equal footing with his own daughter, Serana, and replacing Valerica as his consort. Having already ingratiated herself with most of Harkon's Court, either by cunning, or by seducing them, Sonja has carefully set the stage for his inevitable downfall.

 

Ysmira's former lover, Lord Vimar remains a prisoner at Castle Volkihar while awaiting his own execution for having plotted against Harkon. A proud nord himself, Lord Vimar has demanded trial by combat so as to meet his end in epic battle with the Lord of the Volkihar. Unbeknownst to him, Sonja has been working to arrange a pardon for him, if only to use him against Lord Harkon when the time is right...

 

After making herself an enemy of the Yarl of Whiterun, Balgruuf the Greater while threatening him in order to put a stop to Lydia's execution, Sonja has decided to betray the Empire, and bring the Jagged Crown to Ulfric Stormcloak. As Kodlak's chosen Harbinger, her shield brothers and sisters in the Companions are none too pleased with her open involvement in Skyrim's civil war, and the dishonorable way she obtained her dragonborn powers. To answer for this, the Companions have summoned her to the Underforge.

 

Jorvaskr, the Underforge

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Castle Volkihar

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TO BE CONTINUED...

 

 

Edited by Ronin79
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Interesting intertwining of storylines. I particularly liked the violet/definitive aspect of it, as the heroine killing and absorbing the dragonborn's essence is quite the involving choice. Also appreciated the overall visual aspect, and the comic style dialogue integration. Not to mention the stylistic quality of the writing. Now, if I may :

 

  •  Reading order is important when designing comics. The first dialogue should be in the first bubble that meets the eye, and so on. And so, most of the time, in occidental comics, the first to be read will be the top left corner, then it's left to right, top to bottom. Be mindful about it, as having the reader guess the reading order by himself ruins both immersion and comprehension.

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  • Second, don't forget about the facial expressions of your characters. Character feel more lively if their mouth is open while they are speaking. You can achieve so with mods like MFG facial expression .

 

Here's a club with some tutorials for storytellers ; have a look if you with for more detailed explanations. Anyway, thanks for the share, and have fun with your story. :classic_wink:

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