Liked this episode a LOT! Great fun! Lovly to see experimenting new things

i write this reaction in separate segment as the epsiode itself contain mutliple segment.

The Diary of Goblin:

if you do more of this style side character point of view story telling i personaly going to love it!

the lewid level and problems keeping control of the harem:

Lovely 10/10

Sarah convincing Arlan, plus the ulfric Scane:

Fenomenal i laguthed so hard

+Arlan reaction as expected

End of epsiode:

as Expected another cliff hanger

if not in here at least evry 2 epsiode its not Ghukan hand work

Serne Replacer:

Looks good but the face base lines seems show some smiliartys with  Alice... probably becuse both of them so scary

As for your question:

if i can wote: do it more side character view of story telling, if possible Kitten one in the next, i missing it! Curius what trap or trap like thing catch her agin

13 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

Liked this episode a LOT! Great fun! Lovly to see experimenting new things

Thank you so much ^__^

13 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

if you do more of this style side character point of view story telling i personaly going to love it!

Great to hear ? 

14 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

the lewid level and problems keeping control of the harem:

Lovely 10/10

And finally a chap where he doesn't force it

(Well yeah ok half of them are already hentaied... But it counts!)

14 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

Sarah convincing Arlan, plus the ulfric Scane:

Fenomenal i laguthed so hard

+Arlan reaction as expected

Thank you again ^__^

I enjoyed writing this part too and showing again how much influence she has over him and pretty much over a lot of other people too.

If this where a game, she would've the highest charisma stats out of all of them ?

Yorpers once described it pretty well.. Arlan is her Doggie (She just needs to FINALLY get a shorter leash! xD)

16 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

End of epsiode:

as Expected another cliff hanger

if not in here at least evry 2 epsiode its not Ghukan hand work

Meeeh I didn't want to I swear.. I just need a lot more space to make what I want to do work

18 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

Serne Replacer:

Looks good but the face base lines seems show some smiliartys with  Alice... probably becuse both of them so scary

Now that you say it, they do look equal scary.. But don't worry.. I got that covered

20 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

As for your question:

if i can wote: do it more side character view of story telling, if possible Kitten one in the next, i missing it! Curius what trap or trap like thing catch her agin

Mh... the order in which I will make those, I can't yet promsie. For Kitten will be having her big parts in the next entry again because of Flora and the other 2. But I will definitely make one for her too in the future ^^

Arlan doesn’t care about his passions.

Serana: Who are you?

A cute little sexy vampire who is going to get her pussy fucked by Arlan.??

Serana, will you join Mister Arlan’s wife arem?❤️‍?

I did not overlook the fact that Lilit shouted the gargoyles to death...but she sure took her time to do it.? 

1 hour ago, hana120 said:

cute little

cute and little..Naah not soo littlebut sexy? Aye oO

1 hour ago, hana120 said:

A cute little sexy vampire who is going to get her pussy fucked by Arlan.??

On it ?

1 hour ago, yorpers said:

I did not overlook the fact that Lilit shouted the gargoyles to death...but she sure took her time to do it.? 

Well ehm.. She was... Kinda ehm.. Having fun xD

3 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Now that you say it, they do look equal scary.. But don't worry.. I got that covered

i see your point... now!

this Version of Sernea need thamed a lot it seems... in this configuration she realy look scary

but i sure Arlan "can" ( and will ) fix that in not time....

Which Serana replacer did you settle on, if I may ask?  She looks real good btw.

Bit short on time, so ...
I liked the Gobo part for some reason, even if I don't usually like goblinoids much. ?
Shop part ... dunno, pretty disjointed IMHO.

Not a fan of your treatment of the A-Team. They seem to devolve. The first one or two times after splitting from A. they proved to be pretty capable, perhaps more so than A. and his band at the time. Things changed drastically since that time, without any explanation. By now, every time they show up they are less and less capable to the point where they are now reduced to the 'Damsel(s) in Distress' role now. What happened? Secretly hired a scriptwriter from the Rings of Power team? ? Might be more merciful to just stop using them rather than to trash them into laughingstock.

Somehow I think this is not going to be the Goody Two-Shoes Serana SDA makes of her. More the Queen of Screams type (stay away, that mod is such a mess). ^^

Nooice! I like the way your handling integrating the harem into the story. Harem Nation here we cum!  And I'm ready for Kitten's Dairy story Time. Yay! 

8 hours ago, Nonseen said:

i see your point... now!

 

this Version of Sernea need thamed a lot it seems... in this configuration she realy look scary

but i sure Arlan "can" ( and will ) fix that in not time....

 

 

Yeah, just not sure how I will go about it. ? I'll come up with something

7 hours ago, RamasesII said:

Which Serana replacer did you settle on, if I may ask?  She looks real good btw.

The newest ^^

6 hours ago, Talesien said:

I liked the Gobo part for some reason, even if I don't usually like goblinoids much. ?

thanks and Just think of her as an Orc without tusks then ?

6 hours ago, Talesien said:

Shop part ... dunno, pretty disjointed IMHO.

because I fucked ob the transition again and was to fast x,x weh doesn't matter now

6 hours ago, Talesien said:

Not a fan of your treatment of the A-Team. They seem to devolve. The first one or two times after splitting from A. they proved to be pretty capable, perhaps more so than A. and his band at the time. Things changed drastically since that time, without any explanation. By now, every time they show up they are less and less capable to the point where they are now reduced to the 'Damsel(s) in Distress' role now. What happened? Secretly hired a scriptwriter from the Rings of Power team? ? Might be more merciful to just stop using them rather than to trash them into laughingstock.

Ok here I have to be a bit.. Well me.

The last time they actually had a chapter was a  lewd one. Everyone gets lewd episodes here. The last time they actually had something to do is ages ago and there, yes they were badasses but like team Arlan always gets their oh shit we fucked up moments, so do they ?

They had an easy way through the crypt, Flora did stupid and they got catched. I always used Flora as a comedic character, so nothing really changed their either ?

So if there is something I've been missing please tell me x,x rough night and I'm actually interested if I am being to lash to them (but they will not stay damsels or mcguffins don't worry. we need Arlan invested in this story somehow and that was way to do it. ) 

1 hour ago, Jay-Omms said:

Nooice! I like the way your handling integrating the harem into the story. Harem Nation here we cum!  And I'm ready for Kitten's Dairy story Time. Yay! 

xD everyone loves her.. At one point I need a whole entry just with her.. Or would that be kitten overload? ?

23 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

thanks and Just think of her as an Orc without tusks then ?

Orcs are goblinoids (ok not in Elder Scroll lore, but I doubt the term goblinoid is part of ES lore, it's a distinct D&D term), in D&D goblinoids includes goblins, orc, bugbears, etc. some also include Ogres, but some prefer to include them with the giants... official stand here seems to change with the editions as well.
At any rate, only a dead Orc is a good Orc, nuff said. ?

As for the teams ... dunno, too lazy (and way too short on time) to go back and check in detail. It's my general impression though, which might be biased a bit by me liking them better (aside from Sofia I'm not really 100% sold on anyone in the current team, I like most, but I like the ladies in the other team better), so ... Still seems to be an unnecessarily demeaning way to 'reunite'. Once Sarah hears the story she will never take them serious. Yes, I consider her that aloof, by now. ? (And she got a way cooler story when she got into trouble and needed to be 'rescued', (with no shortage of lewds either, so that's obviously not mutually exclusive), alone, just for one char.)
 

Oh yea that was the episode! And rlan finaly reunited with old drieds, I miss them.  
And Serana omg good choice, she look not too much different from vanila but new enoght to be different. i like it. Can i have personal request? Can you edit her a liitle bit add a womb (slave) tattoo on her? For some reason i think it will look grate on  her with this model! And if you want you even can add lore in that or some effects. 

That said, I really liked the passage with Arlan furious who kicks the skeleton, kills the spider and the dog of easy death. And the appearance of Sese.

I prefer that to the beginning of the chapter.

Although, seeing Miss Big blue-eyed tits, tied to a pole and yawning made me laugh.

I thought, "Here you are today, my old lady. Arlan doesn’t care about you right now and you’re like an idiot without being able to do anything".

It will make his feet! 

15 hours ago, Gukahn said:

xD everyone loves her.. At one point I need a whole entry just with her.. Or would that be kitten overload? ?

Whoaaaaaa Kitten OVERLOAD!!!!  

23 hours ago, Talesien said:

Orcs are goblinoids (ok not in Elder Scroll lore, but I doubt the term goblinoid is part of ES lore, it's a distinct D&D term), in D&D goblinoids includes goblins, orc, bugbears, etc. some also include Ogres, but some prefer to include them with the giants... official stand here seems to change with the editions as well.
At any rate, only a dead Orc is a good Orc, nuff said. ?

<__< yeah let's not go into race talks of fantasy worlds.. I'm a bit short at time rn too xD damn

23 hours ago, Talesien said:

As for the teams ... dunno, too lazy (and way too short on time) to go back and check in detail. It's my general impression though, which might be biased a bit by me liking them better (aside from Sofia I'm not really 100% sold on anyone in the current team, I like most, but I like the ladies in the other team better), so ... Still seems to be an unnecessarily demeaning way to 'reunite'. Once Sarah hears the story she will never take them serious. Yes, I consider her that aloof, by now. ? (And she got a way cooler story when she got into trouble and needed to be 'rescued', (with no shortage of lewds either, so that's obviously not mutually exclusive), alone, just for one char.)
 

Well if this is how you feel about it, I can't  do anything about it xD

Just saying, everyone gets their stupid and unnatural horny moments here. Sometimes some chars even forget about things that would get them out of the bullshit.. Arlan hasn't used this stupid power ranger feature of his Armor for ages ?

18 hours ago, ERPModEnjoyer said:

Oh yea that was the episode! And rlan finaly reunited with old drieds, I miss them.  

thanks^^

(I missed Lilit T^T Double Dragonborn! With big titties!)

18 hours ago, ERPModEnjoyer said:

And Serana omg good choice, she look not too much different from vanila but new enoght to be different. i like it. Can i have personal request? Can you edit her a liitle bit add a womb (slave) tattoo on her? For some reason i think it will look grate on  her with this model! And if you want you even can add lore in that or some effects. 

Thanks you, I had to think a lot about this char.. Happy to finally have one.

Sorry, I think I won't do this^^

The way I started writing her on sunday, after this entry got released.. The only thing I can come up with is a Symbol that makes her horny, weaker or obidient and.. This Serana ain't obedient, I tell you that ? If you want a short inside on what's she doing

17 hours ago, hana120 said:

That said, I really liked the passage with Arlan furious who kicks the skeleton, kills the spider and the dog of easy death. And the appearance of Sese.

I prefer that to the beginning of the chapter.

Well you are more of an adventure kind of story person I believe, so it doesn't surprise me that you prefer actual action instead of lazy life parts ^^

17 hours ago, hana120 said:

Although, seeing Miss Big blue-eyed tits, tied to a pole and yawning made me laugh.

I thought, "Here you are today, my old lady. Arlan doesn’t care about you right now and you’re like an idiot without being able to do anything".

Who do you think put her there? xDDD

She enjoys every second of it, I assure you

8 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Whoaaaaaa

O_O

Ok.. I probably have to actually do that now..

1 hour ago, Gukahn said:

<__< yeah let's not go into race talks of fantasy worlds.. I'm a bit short at time rn too xD damn

 

Well if this is how you feel about it, I can't  do anything about it xD

Just saying, everyone gets their stupid and unnatural horny moments here. Sometimes some chars even forget about things that would get them out of the bullshit.. Arlan hasn't used this stupid power ranger feature of his Armor for ages ?

 

thanks^^

(I missed Lilit T^T Double Dragonborn! With big titties!)

 

Thanks you, I had to think a lot about this char.. Happy to finally have one.

Sorry, I think I won't do this^^

The way I started writing her on sunday, after this entry got released.. The only thing I can come up with is a Symbol that makes her horny, weaker or obidient and.. This Serana ain't obedient, I tell you that ? If you want a short inside on what's she doing

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She is currently using Arlan as a chair

 

 

Well you are more of an adventure kind of story person I believe, so it doesn't surprise me that you prefer actual action instead of lazy life parts ^^

 

Who do you think put her there? xDDD

She enjoys every second of it, I assure you

 

O_O

Ok.. I probably have to actually do that now..

 

I also like the lazy moments of life. But from time to time. Not too much.

On 10/17/2023 at 1:02 AM, Gukahn said:

O_O

Ok.. I probably have to actually do that now..

LOL  Oh man your reaction is priceless!