A quite entertaining chapter. It reminds a lot your previous works, since Nellie shares the introspection and exhibitionist tendencies of your previous character. Yet it's more eventful, with a robbery plot inserting itself in a more general scenario (cleverly reminded at the start) ; and enough twists to renew the chapter all along. As for the screens they are well posed, feature vibrant colors and varied viewing angles ; which combined to the comic layout make for a rather creative visual ambiance. So overall a quite pleasant read.

« At first I thought that Nellie gal was very intelligent. But then she started to dive in icy water and to pee-pee kiss another gal.

                 So I guess she's not that smart, no.  »

On 6/18/2023 at 2:00 PM, Tirloque said:

A quite entertaining chapter. It reminds a lot your previous works, since Nellie shares the introspection and exhibitionist tendencies of your previous character. Yet it's more eventful, with a robbery plot inserting itself in a more general scenario (cleverly reminded at the start) ; and enough twists to renew the chapter all along. As for the screens they are well posed, feature vibrant colors and varied viewing angles ; which combined to the comic layout make for a rather creative visual ambiance. So overall a quite pleasant read.

 

 

 

« At first I thought that Nellie gal was very intelligent. But then she started to dive in icy water and to pee-pee kiss another gal.

                 So I guess she's not that smart, no.  »

 

Thanks for the comment. It's basically a try to redo the old stories but with a overarching plot that will develop over the next few episodes.