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Old Man Dovakiin - Dark Rituals


Gukahn

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Previous Chapter: The Fuck?

 

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Afterwords:

I've tried a bit different with some pages this time. I had a really big number of shots and honestly thought about making it a 2 Parter (of which i am not fond of) or don't use a ton of material (could have scrapped or reduced sex scenes. Would've been the best way.)

Thankfully tho, i didn't needed to. The Pics cleaned themselves up while writing. Still i would kinda like your thoughts about the Split Pages. Are they ok or would you rather have always full pictures? Thanks for reading me out, gonna work on the next chapter soon^^

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> First. Like the episode. :)

> Second, not sure i understood what you mean under "split pages". If you were talking about putting your story in several spoiler, I like that, especially that you marked them. And doing it like that, the page opens much faster than having a bunch of pics in one spoiler.

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Oh gosh, I'm really, really starting to feel bad for Lydia, not to mention feel bad about finding it so darn funny. ^^
Great episode, so now we got a love sick Succubus, a perhaps almost as lovesick DB-Vampire, a mysterious, cum collecting, mind bender, a protective older Sister Succubus who of all the people ends up being the voice of reason in all this ... and of course a Lydia. ;)
Well, things can only get more interesting from here on ... and a LOT more complicated.


Edit says: As mentioned before, I don't mind the split or no split. Might be worth keeping it for people with slower connections ... or when LL slows down again (which experience tells is only a matter of time).

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6 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> First. Like the episode. :)

> Second, not sure i understood what you mean under "split pages". If you were talking about putting your story in several spoiler, I like that, especially that you marked them. And doing it like that, the page opens much faster than having a bunch of pics in one spoiler.

 

5 hours ago, Talesien said:

Edit says: As mentioned before, I don't mind the split or no split. Might be worth keeping it for people with slower connections ... or when LL slows down again (which experience tells is only a matter of time).

Thank you both. No i mean the few times i combined to pictures with a little Wall to save some space. But since you don't seem to mind them i will further to save some space 😁

 

 

 

And don't feel too bad for Lydia.. Yet 🤪 Next Episode will open up a very big pile of what the fuck for her. Going to screen later once i decide how fucked up i want it to be. (It's hard not to spoil ones own story if the ideas for one chapter are so much.. This one had 2 other totally different versions 😅)

 

 

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