lesbian Close Alliance - Act I - Chapter I incest Entry posted by Kin Tsuchi January 1, 2018 6,274 views Follow on Followers 0 (Incest, Lesbian) Act I - Chapter I Open the following spoiler to see the chapter. You can find all chapters and characters in my blog-description. 0
Kin Tsuchi Posted June 30, 2015 Thank you =) added little changes to the story. The next part will come very soon Link to comment
Spectre_15 Posted July 2, 2015 Im really enjoying this, but as a fellow writer myself, I suggest doing an extra reading of your work for grammer. it's not a massive issue, but there are a few grammer issues that, for me at least, break the story up a bit because my brain gets stuck on it for a moment. Aside from that, very interesting story, and I love the use of the colors and the borders and whatnot. A lot of effort was put into this, and Im loving it. Link to comment
Kin Tsuchi Posted July 2, 2015 Hi TheVoid =) English is not my first language - if you could tell me where the mistakes was made, I can correct them. (I will add some side-numbers very soon so that it will be much easier) Link to comment
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