(Was watching 300, and the scene with the ephors and the nubile young oracle really caught my imagination. Plus the big unskippable infodump in this part of the main quest is hella boring the 26152th time round without some spicy headcanon.) 

Yeah, the contrast between the troubling but exposed young oracle and the controlling but repulsive old men around is one of the pillars of that troubling scene. Your entry is of the same vein (well not anatomically speaking XD), though richer in twists and more extreme in deeds. Well written all along, with a no frills but very efficient style, the first person narration adding even more to the immersion. And some welcome screens to illustrate it, though the header one might be the best of all three. Good entry !

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