Quite the funny story here, with its fill of hilarious twists. But the atypical khajiits sphere and the personality of the characters makes it unusual and refreshing simultaneously. The screens are colored, and well posed/prepared ; with efficient comic bubbles and effects to carry the dialogues. Those are closer to the ones of a modern family than regular khajiiti ones though, but that's part of the charm. And same for the ages and personality differences among the protagonists. The PNG format feels unnecessary heavy though, but the episode wasn't long enough for it to get troublesome. 

Overall, your stories have potential, good job !

Malicia : « It's very true that the daddy went out with only panties though. Just like those gals who wear iron swimsuits, uh.  »

3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Quite the funny story here, with its fill of hilarious twists. But the atypical khajiits sphere and the personality of the characters makes it unusual and refreshing simultaneously. The screens are colored, and well posed/prepared ; with efficient comic bubbles and effects to carry the dialogues. Those are closer to the ones of a modern family than regular khajiiti ones though, but that's part of the charm. And same for the ages and personality differences among the protagonists. The PNG format feels unnecessary heavy though, but the episode wasn't long enough for it to get troublesome. 

Overall, your stories have potential, good job !

 

Malicia : « It's very true that the daddy went out with only panties though. Just like those gals who wear iron swimsuits, uh.  »

Thanks, Tirloque for the critique and praise! The characters are actually from a custom wolf race called the Lykaios.

And yeah, the files are really large. Sorry about that ? What format should I save future pics in? Jpeg?

8 hours ago, theshiba said:

Thanks, Tirloque for the critique and praise! The characters are actually from a custom wolf race called the Lykaios.

And yeah, the files are really large. Sorry about that ? What format should I save future pics in? Jpeg?

Hmm, I didn't know about that race. That explains why they have a more canine look than Khajiits indeed. And why my associate here felt puzzled . ^^

As for the best format to share screenshots stories, I would indeed recommend JPEG, but fine tuned with a good compressor. Check the parts A & B of this tutorial, they may interest you.

7 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, I didn't know about that race. That explains why they have a more canine look than Khajiits indeed. And why my associate here felt puzzled . ^^

As for the best format to share screenshots stories, I would indeed recommend JPEG, but fine tuned with a good compressor. Check the parts A & B of this tutorial, they may interest you.

 

Lol. I'm sure that was confusing for your associate. There's quite a few custom beast races now on here: horses, deers (also includes antelopes, giraffes, and goats), minotaurs, bats, birds, leopards, saber-tooth cats/lions, black panthers, snow leopards, tigers, jackal-like canids, foxes, hyenas (striped and spotted), otters, and sharks.

Also, I went ahead and read the whole thing. ? It was immensely informative! Thank you for directing me to the tutorial, and thank you for making it in the first place. As I'm sure you gathered, I did not put any thought into image management (didn't even know what that was) since this is very new to me. I'll definitely use the information you've posted there for my future comics. ?

I loved it, and I hope you continue 

So do I

Hoho~ 💖