Well done!

excellent !

enjoyed it, i like the comic book style pages alot

Excellent work! That was a really entertaining read. Very trippy to think about too. Will she ever know when the dream ends? O.o

Great work. Compliments.

Very well done!

Very amusing and hilarious story! Looking at the layout and amount of pictures, it must've been quite some effort capturing all of them. Thanks for that

Hah, excellent fall at the end !

Not to mention the good work on the poses, and the layout. Great job !

Wow, things really got serious here both in terms of execution (the leap to a full on comic was very well done) and the story. It's sad that we will likely never get a follow up because this setup was great and had so much potential between the layers of dream worlds and the dream monster stalking its way through them. Great job @Zhao! Hopefully if you ever return to LL you'll see that people are still appreciating your stories and perhaps some day maybe even make a few more!

@Tirloque I saw you liked the first entry last year, was this in consideration for a Dwemer Spotlight entry? I think it would be a good one. 

On 4/1/2021 at 11:06 AM, SpyVsPie said:

 

@Tirloque I saw you liked the first entry last year, was this in consideration for a Dwemer Spotlight entry? I think it would be a good one. 

Hey, Spy. Well, Dwemer Spotlights were previously done with blogs a little more developed, while things merely started picking up here. But I think at the very least, though rather old, it could be featured in the library indeed.

On 4/1/2021 at 11:06 AM, SpyVsPie said:

Wow, things really got serious here both in terms of execution (the leap to a full on comic was very well done) and the story. It's sad that we will likely never get a follow up because this setup was great and had so much potential between the layers of dream worlds and the dream monster stalking its way through them. Great job @Zhao! Hopefully if you ever return to LL you'll see that people are still appreciating your stories and perhaps some day maybe even make a few more!

 

@Tirloque I saw you liked the first entry last year, was this in consideration for a Dwemer Spotlight entry? I think it would be a good one. 

Thanks! Turns out I am actually back and I did start a reboot of the series on this new account. However I'm not sure if you're still around ...

On 6/14/2022 at 3:32 AM, Zhao_ said:

Thanks! Turns out I am actually back and I did start a reboot of the series on this new account. However I'm not sure if you're still around ...

Wow when I wrote that message I really thought you'd never see it based on how long you seemed to have been away. I'm glad I did it anyway and glad to see you've continued/ rebooted your story! I will check the new one out for sure.