[help request] #1 The president's daughter #VisualNovel

[ueslei2302]

 

Hi, I'm producing my first visual novel.

My biggest problem is the grammar of English, since I am Brazilian.

I intend to release the download in a few days. 

EDIT: https://www.patreon.com/braz

 

Someone available to help with grammar?

Just check for errors.

 

 

IMAGE OF THE GAME.

 

 

 

 

IMAGE OF THE GAME.

[randomflops]

why is her asshole fucking red? sorry i am def not the directed audience, i just came to LL for the ripped assets, but just asking about the asshole

[Humlebien]

I'm sure most can help with some basic grammar. But I think there is a little more needed. Like game length. Also some sort of site for production, if you have one, so you don't just accept a file from a total stranger.

[ueslei2302]

I'm sure most can help with some basic grammar. But I think there is a little more needed. Like game length. Also some sort of site for production, if you have one, so you don't just accept a file from a total stranger.

I'm going to create a patron and a website to promote the project.

why is her asshole fucking red? sorry i am def not the directed audience, i just came to LL for the ripped assets, but just asking about the asshole

 

I'll fix it ..

Decrease the red tone.

And repair other errors.

I'll fix it .. Decrease the red tone. And repair other errors.

[Humlebien]

Was thinking in the line of, if someone offers to help with grammar/editing, they would need to know if it's 3000 words or 300.000 words. But yeah, a Blogsite or whatever with at least some basic info about the project, so people don't have to take it on blind faith.

[ueslei2302]

I think I've found a partner. "

I'll take care of finalizing the Demo and then creating a website and patreon.

edit: Patreon.

I will soon edit the whole profile.

https://www.patreon.com/braz

 

I think I've found a partner. " I'll take care of finalizing the Demo and then creating a website and patreon.

Patreon.

I will soon edit the whole profile.