what do you think of my.. poem?

[hazarada]

Naughty or nice?
True virtue has it's price.
Any shame could be forgiven,
yet honor will not suffice.

Revealing deeds delivered,
to appease the smearing tongue.
Bare your soul and praise be given,
or be blemished and be wronged.

 

 

I got a bit carried away when writing a spell description in CK but i think it turned out nice and I'm so proud

[ТigегШооd]

Interesting. Is it about yourself?

[hazarada]

Its not, its about the core concept of the mod I'm working on.

[Lobzpooatu]

Not bad at all. 

[eAthena]

In More Street where I did dwell

A butcher boy I loved right well

He courted me my life away

And now with me he will not stay

 

I wish, I wish, I wish in vain

I wish I was a maid again

But a maid again I'll never be

Till cherries grow on an apple tree

 

I wish my baby it was born

And smiling on its daddy's knee

And me poor girl to be dead and gone

With the long green grass growing over me

 

He went upstairs and the door he broke

He found her hanging from a rope

He took his knife and he cut her down

And in her pocket these words he found

 

"Oh make my grave large, wide and deep

Put a marble stone at my head and feet

And in the middle a turtle dove

So the world may know I died of love"

[eAthena]

I am afraid of the dark
I am afraid of the day
I am afraid to walk outside
And of what people say

I am afraid to drink too much
Because of what I might do
I am afraid to speak my mind
And of being with you

It's not that I'm not strong
It's just that I'm not strong enough for you
It's not that I'm not brave 
It's just that I'm not brave, 
It's just that I'm not brave, 
It's just that I'm not brave enough for you

I am afraid to be unloved
I am afraid to be forsaken
I am afraid of doing wrong
And to never be forgiven

I am afraid that you will find
I'm not the man you think I am
I'm not afraid to be alone
And of the unknown

It's not that I'm not strong
It's just that I'm not strong enough for you
It's not that I'm not brave 
It's just that I'm not brave, 
It's just that I'm not brave, 
It's just that I'm not brave enough for you

I am afraid to laugh out loud
Or to stand out of the crowd
I am scared of loving you
I am scared to lose you

I am afraid to lose control
I am afraid of growing old
I am afraid to die
But it's something I must do

It's not that I'm not strong
It's just that I'm not strong enough for you
It's not that I'm not brave 
It's just that I'm not brave, 
It's just that I'm not brave, 
It's just that I'm not brave enough for two

[eAthena]

Naughty or nice?

True virtue has it's price.

Any shame could be forgiven,

yet honor will not suffice.

 

Revealing deeds delivered,

to appease the smearing tongue.

Bare your soul and praise be given,

or be blemished and be wronged.

 

 

I got a bit carried away when writing a spell description in CK but i think it turned out nice and I'm so proud

Not bad i like it

[Reylegh]

yeah, quite nice