DVDCOVE Posted January 9 Posted January 9 (edited) The covers for every chapter so far (THIS IS OUTDATED NOW THERE ARE MANY MORE CHAPTERS) of a porn comic I've been working on, full chapters with dialogue available on my Loverslab blog linked below, let me know if you enjoy! Spoiler Edited March 15 by DVDCOVE 2
Doomonic Posted March 13 Posted March 13 (edited) Your panels flow well but tightening the dialogue can boost tension; try cutting filler lines and letting the art speak. Vary panel sizes for climax moments, and sprinkle in quick cuts to keep the rhythm snappy. I’ve been looking at homemade group sex for ideas on staging and pacing, and it gave me a solid feel for how to balance action and tease. Edited March 23 by Doomonic 1
DVDCOVE Posted March 13 Author Posted March 13 New chapters up so far, full stories of each with dialogue available on my blog: Spoiler
Recommended Posts