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Assumi main menu replacer

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Hello guy,

This is a simple mod to replace the main menu in fallout 4 with assumi(request).

There is no requirement except fallout 4 of course.

Work pertecly with MO2.

 

The artist is noname55 don't forget to visit her subscribestar.


 

  • 3 weeks later...
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9 hours ago, Nomore101 said:

Wait, her? Noname55 is a woman? Huh, you learn new things every day, I suppose.

I don't know, It’s just a spelling mistake on my part.

  • 8 months later...
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note this is just personal opinion mind you, but you need to improve your virtual photography some, yeah? Art is as subjective as sex is, but storytelling isn't.

 

the only one that really tells a story is the doggie one, because it shows her face/shoulder armor, and shows her in ahegao face with a SAM tongue sticking out (I would have crossed the eyes a little bit but that's nitpicking) but it's scene-framed so horribly it detracts from the story you're telling. bits cut off that are part of the story; one camera can never tell everything, so you have to tell it in other ways. is his cock too big? wide eyes, clenched teeth, balled fist; is she so into it she's topping from the bottom, aggressive, squinted eyes, even evil grin, hands placed so she's pushing back harder than he's pushing in, is this consensual or is she being attacked, you have to tell us, visually.

 

you're stopping at "she's getting fucked, look". which is fine I guess, but it's the difference between "neat!" and "holy fuck! NukaCharlie's shit is SO HAWT!"

 

as load screens go, static stills or animated, they need to tell a story, visually, and quickly. take the one with her gettin' buttfucked on the desk by the werewolf from the floor angle;  normally you either go for the super close-up of the penetration action, or a wide-angle showing the whole scene, you instead went with this mid-zoom value where his feet (her heels too, for that matter) are cut off mere pixels from being completely shown, and his face is partially in the view but only for a few pixels, tip of the snout and mouth, but what's worse this is supposed to showcase Assumi, but this could be anyone... and even the one from the seating side of the desk at least shows a redhead's face, but, it could be anyone... if you're going to use WoW or DOTA or whatever characters you want to bring into Fallout, just bring something else over from them, for them. like the armor. Maybe add a mesh for a weapon propped against the desk or something, anything; one quill and one mug prop is not a scene...

 

but even that face-showing one, your menus are STOCK! and it's right over her face! you ruin most all the shots by not using an .swf replacer that moves the main menu  to the left edge and removes the Creation news and Bethesda logo overlays. I've looked at all your menu replacers and you seem to carry this with you everywhere.

 

I promise you, if you take the time at posing them better and really tweaking your camera viewport settings, visually telling a story, not merely framecap'ing what's occurring, and tweak the main menu .swf so it's not so in-the-way (and say what menu replacer mod you went with and what the config is, for those that don't know any better), your notices and d/l's will increase by 100x or more on all of them! Yes I know it's a lot of work, art always is. And I do applaud you for feeling motivated enough to make them - I love anyone who makes any content whatsoever for games, but I know you can make them better! In fact, I know you want to. Because every artist does!

 

just keep this in mind going forward; who knows? maybe one day you'll get motivated to go back and remake even these!

 

and again, take this as you would any unsolicited criticisms, feel free to tell me to go fuck myself. I won't be offended, and I really hope you are not either. I mean this only to point out how your art is perceived from another perspective, mine. I can't speak for anyone else, after all. ❤️

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