Proofreading my patch for Ordinator + Darkwood Manufacturing Toys

[Antiope_Apollonia]

Hello folks,

 

I was just hoping someone more knowledgeable than I am might be willing to help proofread this patch I made before I share it.  I think it should be finished, but there were a couple of things I didn't really understand as I was working on it, so I'm hoping I can learn something and make sure I don't break anyone's game.  The goal is basically just to make Ordinator accept the butt plugs from Darkwood Manufacturing Toys as an alternative to robes to satisfy the requirements for several perks for fully naked playstyles.  There are five perks that needed to be modified:

• Alteration: Energy Shield — This one has a bunch of separate sets of effects and conditions, and I don't really know why half of them are there.  I get that there needs to be a separate effect for each mana range, but why are there two effects for each mana range?  I went ahead and stuck a "Subject.HasWornKeyword(Darkwood's Keyword) = 1 OR" before the robe condition at the top of each stack of conditions and hoped for the best, but I don't fully understand what they're all doing.  Also, I had trouble getting it to let me edit the description—still don't know for sure what made it give in and allow me to—and then once I did, it flagged that edit in red as causing a conflict.  Which seems odd to me; I didn't have any trouble editing the other descriptions.
• Alteration: Geomancer — There are two separate records for Geomancer, and I can't figure out why.  I went ahead and edited both of them, but I'm not certain that was wise since I don't know what they're both for.  The perk has only one tier, but it seems like its function is spread across the two records.  
• Destruction: Robe of the Magi — I'm pretty confident this one is fine, but double checking wouldn't hurt.
• Enchanting: Gem Dust (Amethyst) — I'm pretty confident this one is fine, but double checking wouldn't hurt.
• Enchanting: Regalia — I'm pretty confident this one is fine, but double checking wouldn't hurt.

 

Thanks in advance for your education!

 

Darkwood Ordinator Patch.esp