Pepe__ Posted January 29, 2021 Posted January 29, 2021 Hello everyone, I like to create extensive stories, one of which is down below. Right now I am looking for opinions and trying to get used to posting here. Do you guys like this type of format and aesthetics? Leave a comment, please. Also, there will be a lot of grammar errors and I am sorry for that. English is not my native language. CHAPTER ONE CHAPTER TWO - first part CHAPTER TWO - second part CHAPTER THREE CHAPTER FOUR - first part CHAPTER FOUR - second part Leave feedback
Pepe__ Posted January 29, 2021 Author Posted January 29, 2021 Let me know if there's a problem with hosting, should be ok now.
psygmr Posted January 29, 2021 Posted January 29, 2021 Really great start to the story! Looking forward to the next installment!
Pepe__ Posted February 14, 2021 Author Posted February 14, 2021 Second chapter is here. Leave feedback! CHAPTER 2 - first part CHAPTER 2 - second part
Pepe__ Posted February 17, 2021 Author Posted February 17, 2021 Chapter 3 is very short, enjoy! CHAPTER 3
Pepe__ Posted February 17, 2021 Author Posted February 17, 2021 Chapter 4! I guess I'm speedrunning today. Chapter 4.1 Friday Chapter 4.2 Saturday
Qalefir Posted February 17, 2021 Posted February 17, 2021 I read the first chapter. I Really like how you use the phone interface to setting the blackmail. And the overall is clean and consistent (except some of the place you use, but after taking a look at the following chapters, it looks better afterwards.)
Pepe__ Posted February 17, 2021 Author Posted February 17, 2021 8 minutes ago, RDA said: I read the first chapter. I Really like how you use the phone interface to setting the blackmail. And the overall is clean and consistent (except some of the place you use, but after taking a look at the following chapters, it looks better afterwards.) Thank you. The phone thing created cool, scary VIBE but it was very time consuming to make so I changed the concept a little bit.
Qalefir Posted February 17, 2021 Posted February 17, 2021 43 minutes ago, Pepe__ said: Thank you. The phone thing created cool, scary VIBE but it was very time consuming to make so I changed the concept a little bit. Well, regarding what happen next, it is not necessary anymore x) The other part were nice by the way.
Pepe__ Posted April 17, 2021 Author Posted April 17, 2021 Looking for a new story inspiration. Finally got some time to waste but no idea for a plot.
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