Jump to content
  • entry
    1
  • comments
    4
  • views
    929

Once upon a time...


Elbrun

583 views

The first sensation, strain on arms, a dull biting ache from wrists pulled. Something jammed between teeth, spreading and filling the mouth. Darkness, unnatural darkness. Feet upon a cold surface, touching whatever it is, but not able to be placed down fully. Squirming, feeling the movements of the body, realizing how serious this situation is. Unable to end the stretching and pulling of the arms. No way to stand except on tip toes. No way to remove whatever blinds and gags. True panic begins to set in, gasps and moans muffled and changed by whatever gags. Eyes flared wide, but unable to see. Nearly snorting breaths in and out through the nose.

 

After a time panic begins to recede, and other things come to the senses. A slight breeze against skin, and the slight goose bump feeling of it's passage. The sound of a heart beat, a light snapping and crackling from in front of my body. The feeling of sweat collecting and running on my skin. The strain of my shoulders as arms hold me up.

 

Squirming about again, the sound of metal on metal comes to my ears, hard to put the sound to images. Chains?

 

A new sound, footsteps, the tap tap tap of hard soles on a hard surface.

 

Shivers run through this body as suddenly a hot breeze blows across my shoulder.

 

I nearly scream when a feather light touch caresses my back.

 

Fear floods through me, wondering what will happen next, who it is doing this, why is it happening.

 

Another sound, this time from before me, something soft dragged momentarily on a surface. Something soft on a hard surface. And suddenly a caress across my stomach that ends in sharp pain.

 

Gasping and panting, the feeling comes again from my rear. Then my back. Breasts. Legs.

 

Panic blows through my mind, fear, terror. When will it end...

4 Comments


Recommended Comments

You already bound and gagged the muse in here, all you need to do is abuse her; she can't run away.

 

Can it be that English isn't your native language? If yes I recommend you to ask someone to help you out a bit to turn these somewhat dull paratactic sentences into something more lively. That could greatly improve your text.

Link to comment

ROFL, oh no, definitely a native speaker. The sentence structure is purposely as I wrote it. The result being disjointed, much as the subjects thought processes.

Link to comment
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue. For more information, see our Privacy Policy & Terms of Use