Chapter really good I think.
I see that use Coldsun’s Secunda and Anja followers. Very good followers
Interesting Dreamancer
So if I understand correctly, Secunda and Florian are in a dream.
And they have to "make an alliance" men-snow elf"? Through a dream because in reality, they are more there.
Is that it?

> Masterly done.

Thanks to you  two above (and other common commentors) you guys always comment on peoples stuff and it is very motivational (even if it's just "good chap" it just really helps!) 

As for the plot...yeah even though I try to do better I think it still gets overcomplicated (its just me... I'm not the best writer is all)

Basically I think there will be seven "blessed" stories in blog ...Dragon (Ludis story), Snow (Secundas story), Blood (Toccatas story), Root, Sea, Fire, Heart (Forsworn story but not really...still working it out)

This is Solitude stuff but it will make more sense whats going on w/ future chaps of Snow-Blessed. Basically...the idea for this one is to be the most "Game of Thronesy" of all the stories...palace drama and stuff... 

But I say this and I'll say it for any entry I do from now on...if plot gets complicated or boring just remember there is like a quota of 1-2 sex/peril or general nude type scenes per chap...and skip to them 🤣 

10 hours ago, hana120 said:

Chapter really good I think.
I see that use Coldsun’s Secunda and Anja followers. Very good followers
Interesting Dreamancer
So if I understand correctly, Secunda and Florian are in a dream.
And they have to "make an alliance" men-snow elf"? Through a dream because in reality, they are more there.
Is that it?

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7 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Masterly done.

= CORRECT!

32 minutes ago, dryuya said:

Thanks to you  two above (and other common commentors) you guys always comment on peoples stuff and it is very motivational (even if it's just "good chap" it just really helps!) 

 

As for the plot...yeah even though I try to do better I think it still gets overcomplicated (its just me... I'm not the best writer is all)

= booooooooh 😉 I agree that we disagree on this point! 😛

You just somehow failed to write a proper CONTENT WARNING.But I fixed it for you: 😁

CONTENT WARNING:

Rating: 🥇👍

Ha well thanks! Goal was that nobody comes out scratching their head at all that just happened by the end of all chapters in each tale...maybe that will happen, maybe not...will see...but either way...still have some lewd stuff w/ most all of the most popular Skyrim follower mods by the end. 

Well if the palace of kings stuff was impressive enough I should just do that...that scene didn't give me high blood pressure like the boat and wall climbing stuff did. 😬

The story is not complicated.
Then you just have to connect the stories.
And frankly, you’re a good writer or a good writer.
Even very good, I would say. Your chapters are fascinating and interesting.
 

Enjoying this. One of the few Skyrim blogs that have have a (somewhat) consistent story. Do continue.

Well done. With how connected these stories are they don't feel like side stories but rather just one story. I like that.

4 hours ago, myriad said:

Enjoying this. One of the few Skyrim blogs that have have a (somewhat) consistent story. Do continue.

2 hours ago, ObeyMrWalrus said:

Well done. With how connected these stories are they don't feel like side stories but rather just one story. I like that.

Thank you both...and yes they will be one shared world but my planned idea is still like it was before...each is its own story within 6th era world (but yeah some interconnection as well). It may be overly ambitious but I also would get bored if say I just did one story set only...bored of characters and settings ect...so having potentially several story chains helps keep me interested as well.

Content warning: Just sex!!!?
Do my eyes deceive me?
Thank you sir, for delivering classy vanilla goodness 😃

11 hours ago, Myst42 said:

Content warning: Just sex!!!?
Do my eyes deceive me?
Thank you sir, for delivering classy vanilla goodness 😃

TY. Yeah content warnings I do because while I may USUALLY do a just sex chapter occasionally I do other stuff (torture and/or rape scenes) and that's the stuff that probably has split opinions. Its never going to be the other stuff that's popular on LL (beast/monster stuff) because I myself don't really enjoy that sort of content. So basically...just a warning when stuff gets non-consensual... 

The editing is especially good. Very pleasant on the eyes and compliments the intriguing story. Thanks!

5 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

The editing is especially good. Very pleasant on the eyes and compliments the intriguing story. Thanks!

Thank you. Sorry saw notification of a new post in this awhile ago but LL was (almost) impossible to even navigate this weekend to even get in and see it until now.