Very well done, imo.

Yeah. I accidentally uploaded a few a little out of order so that bugs me a bit >.> Is there a more appropriate place to put things like this than where I put it?

Blogs are a pretty good spot for it, unless the Fallout subforums have a "stories" thread similar to the one in the Skyrim subforums. And if you want to advertise your story(s) a little, a link to the blog/blog-posts is a good way to do it.