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Chapter 1. Mysterious Artifact


pikarooh

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Trying out this form of content. Did some comic book strips for funs. I hope someone enjoys them... Nothing too special. Just something I made up without too much thinking, so text might be too small, will see... It seems text is very blurry on preview window but when opening original image it's sharp.. Shame and I might have to change text to a bit bigger.

 

Will see if I continue this further.

 

 

 

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Some deleted scenes I originally had but deleted and altered the story to have a bit more story focus and tease early on...

 

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They slot right after Yanna comes across Gian the fist and instead of him fondling with her breasts she offers to have sex with him instead of paying a toll (which I deleted).

 

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Really love your character’s blue hair. Esp on  the protag as she stands out among the others without being distracting. Speaking of distracting, I love her early suspender outfit! It reminds of the early Aphrodite IX character.

 

 At first, I was gonna offer some suggestions on placing your bubbles in a certain way so you don’t have to use arrows to guide the reader around your comic panels. But because your arrows match the style of the speech bubbles, I kinda like the charming look of the arrows within those pages!

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