hey man, great job again, not many people use quest or vanilla game characters and manage to make scenes with that creativity, but hey what's your skin and enb ? I was trying to guess the skin but I'm not sure if it's realore or bnp xD

10 minutes ago, MidNightQuiet said:

hey man, great job again, not many people use quest or vanilla game characters and manage to make scenes with that creativity, but hey what's your skin and enb ? I was trying to guess the skin but I'm not sure if it's realore or bnp xD

Thanks! It's BNP skin and PI-CHO ENB. I think the back story of vanilla characters could enrich the scenes, which makes us more related with the lewd story?

For a story, the scenario its more akin to a setting than to a developed tale. Yet it has a start, a development and a conclusion (though ending in a rather dark humored fashion), and the comic style makes it easy to read. You could make your task easier by also integrating the captions/narration in the images btw (would it be solely placed within a simple rectangle), as it would save you the effort to place your text afterwards (which lengthens the upload), but it's very readable as is. The images are also decently done, with the facial expressions and (ingame) fluid effects doing a good part of the job. So a pleasant read overall.

On 5/29/2023 at 10:25 PM, Tirloque said:

For a story, the scenario its more akin to a setting than to a developed tale. Yet it has a start, a development and a conclusion (though ending in a rather dark humored fashion), and the comic style makes it easy to read. You could make your task easier by also integrating the captions/narration in the images btw (would it be solely placed within a simple rectangle), as it would save you the effort to place your text afterwards (which lengthens the upload), but it's very readable as is. The images are also decently done, with the facial expressions and (ingame) fluid effects doing a good part of the job. So a pleasant read overall.

You got a point there. I may put narrations into the images in the future. Thanks for your advice!