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Scenes From The Life Of A Young Dragonborn [Chapter 4/3] - Condemned For The Curse


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Mistveil Keep, Riften


Aeliana: Maven, we need to talk. 
Maven: I'm longing to know what this is about, I'm guessing it's about this bitch.
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Aeliana: I want to buy it from you.

Maven: Well, well, can't a woman like you find at least one willing applicant for every finger to be your lover?
Aeliana: I want her. How much?
Maven: Hmm, come with me.
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Maven: We've never liked each other Leana, but our interests don't require it. I need you for your connections and you need me for the Guild. 
As your fair business partner, I say 10,000 septim pieces.

Aeliana: We have a deal.
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Maven: Is that all? No bargain? It may be important to you, I'll keep that in mind.
Aeliana: After I take her away from here, you'll closed your little business each other and never visit her again.

Maven: Okay. If I were in the mood, I wouldn't let you out of here until you let my son have a good fuck on your shapely little backside, he likes to say when he sees you.

Aeliana: Is there no other way for a powerful family like yours to get a woman for their son?
Maven: We are done. Get out!
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Aeliana: Come with me, you can finally get rid of these.
Cyra: That's wonderful news Leana, I don't know what to say...
Aeliana: I know a place for you to stay, follow me.
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Azura's Dawn Castle


Aeliana: This can be your new home if you want, I won't force you to do anything.
Cyra: It's more than I ever dared hope for...
Aeliana: I'll find a housekeeper to look after the castle while I'm away. Will you take it?
Cyra: Of course Leana, it's the least I can do.
Aeliana: We'll discuss the details later.
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Cyra: You know, I have not known for a long time what kindness is, what love is, when I was sold into slavery in Morrowind, I had to bury my feelings inside myself, otherwise I couldn't have stood it.
Aeliana: How did you end up in Riften?
Cyra: My master lost me on a card, he had nothing to offer but me or he would have been killed. Such is life in Riften.
Aeliana: I am very sorry. I promise, you will never have to do without me again.
Cyra: Oh, I am so grateful, you can ask me for anything you want in return.
Aeliana: I would ask nothing that would not be good for you.

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Aeliana: You're so delicious...
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Collage of Winterhold, a few days later


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Tolfdir: Well, do we see you around here sometimes? We miss you in class, I thought you were going to take your exams this year.
Aeliana: I'm sorry I've been away so long, but I can't stay now either. I'm trying to get information on a person and I was sent here with the idea that someone here might know something.
Tolfdir: Who is it?
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Aeliana: I don't know her name, somebody said to live somewhere in Skyrim and her abilities to read and understand the Elder Scrolls, despite her blindness.
Tolfdir: Remigius Fronius may have mentioned her in his works, but most of his works are banned within the Collage.
Aeliana: Banned? Why?
Tolfdir: Necromancy, summoning and perversity, these three were the hallmarks of his activities here. Perhaps there are still a few volumes of his less perverse works gathering dust, ask Urag.
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Urag gro-Shub: Yes, there are still a few of his volumes left, I think they are all rubbish, but of course we have to keep everything here for study.
Aeliana: Can I borrow them?
Urag: Of course, but your fellow cadet Brelyna has already taken them out.
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Aeliana: It would be very important for me to look at these books, where can I find her?
Urag: She went to the Midden to practice, she asked no one to follow her because she is practicing her summoning and she doesn't want anyone else to get hurt if things get out of hand.
Aeliana: Where is this Midden?
Urag: There is a hatch from the courtyard, on the west side of the building, but be careful.

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The Midden


Aeliana: A secret tunnel system under the Collage, interesting...
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As I look at it, it hasn't just been the scene of innocent little spells, death is coming at me from every corner.
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Ohhhhh, yeees, that's right...
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Hmm, is that Brelyna?
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Fuck, I command you to fuck me harder...!
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Aeliana: I wouldn't disturb them, hmm, I wouldn't have looked at that little bitch.
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Later

 

Brelyna: Um, how did you get here?

Aeliana: Calm down, I'm not here to betray you, I'm here to ask for your help.
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Brelyna: If anyone finds out about this, I could be expelled from the Collage.
Aeliana: That makes two of us, I don't exactly follow the rules here either.

I need Remigius books.
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Brelyna: Really? I think you also know why most of his works were banned.
Aeliana: Tolfdir mentioned it, yes.
Brelyna: Written in an extremely exciting style, any cadet can learn a lot from it when it comes to Summoning. If it weren't for the saucy details, it would be a textbook.

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Aeliana: I wouldn't have expected you to do such things. You are a young, beautiful girl, can't find anyone for yourself even among your classmates?
Brelyna: Of course I could find one, but that's not what I need. I don't want to go into details, but let's just say that we Dunmers have very hot blood and want to try everything that is exciting and enjoyable.
You can't understand anyway...
Aeliana: Believe me, I understand better than you think.
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Brelyna: Many things have been kept secret here within the walls of the Collage, you can acquire a lot of secret knowledge if you are clever. Take a closer look below.
Aeliana: You don't have to say it twice.
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Later in Winterhold, The Frozen Heart Inn


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Let's see if there's any reference to the person I'm looking for.
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You were brave enough to write these down like that...
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I can't help myself, I'm dripping... Aaaahhhhhh

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It's not enough for me, I need to find someone.
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Later on the road south


Aeliana: The fog is terrible, there's no shelter nearby, it's getting dark.
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Redguard merchant: But yes, there is a ruin not far down to the north, in it a shelter was built many years ago for inclement weather. Come with me!
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Here we are.
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Redguard: Uh, is everything all right?

Aeliana: What's the matter big boy, you never seen a pussy before?
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Aeliana: Are we not cuddling? It's too cold outside, we'll warm each other up till morning.
Redguard: Why not? 
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Aeliana: You're a big one! Aaaah...
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I cum...!
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Later 


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"And your actions will be covered in eternal darkness..."
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> Smashing work, man!? All these shots looks incredibly detailed and clearly, plus these astonishing angels & close-ups!? Passionate sex & bawdy humour are dripping from this story!? Aeliana is bisexual, vouluptous & vigorous  valkyrie ready for various challenges!:classic_wub: She got fantasstic hairstyle and assassin' skills, if you know what I mean.?

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12 hours ago, smartfon said:

> Smashing work, man!? All these shots looks incredibly detailed and clearly, plus these astonishing angels & close-ups!? Passionate sex & bawdy humour are dripping from this story!? Aeliana is bisexual, vouluptous & vigorous  valkyrie ready for various challenges!:classic_wub: She got fantasstic hairstyle and assassin' skills, if you know what I mean.?


Thank you for the praise. I'm glad you like it so much. ?
I know it could be better, but I've never written a story before, especially not in English. I'm trying to improve. A sequel is expected soon.

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7 hours ago, D3vilizeR said:


Thank you for the praise. I'm glad you like it so much. ?
I know it could be better, but I've never written a story before, especially not in English. I'm trying to improve. A sequel is expected soon.

> Here you go.:classic_smile: Once again I took a quick look at your text and all its sentences seems to be grammatically correct to me. There is no slang in this that makes me a problem in understanding / interpretation of your thoughts forged into story.:classic_tongue: In the case of my English it can be varies.. A quality of my statements depends mainly on my level of focus and interest in something. Smartfon have not be a good model of phone at languages.?

I really admire people who run a blog.? I know it's hard to be blogger! You know.. touch with fans, criticism and other things related with it.? 

All right, time for me to sign off.? Hone your skills, expand / broaden your horizons & express your taste, my friend.? I wish you a lot of enthusiasm and c(o)(o)l ideas!? 

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7 minutes ago, smartfon said:

> Here you go.:classic_smile: Once again I took a quick look at your text and all its sentences seems to be grammatically correct to me. There is no slang in this that makes me a problem in understanding / interpretation of your thoughts forged into story.:classic_tongue: In the case of my English it can be varies.. A quality of my statements depends mainly on my level of focus and interest in something. Smartfon have not be a good model of phone at languages.?

I really admire people who run a blog.? I know it's hard to be blogger! You know.. touch with fans, criticism and other things related with it.? 

All right, time for me to sign off.? Hone your skills, expand / broaden your horizons & express your taste, my friend.? I wish you a lot of enthusiasm and c(o)(o)l ideas!? 


I try to put it as simply as possible. ?
Thanks for the well wishes, I already have ideas, I hope I can implement them.

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On 8/25/2023 at 12:58 PM, D3vilizeR said:

I know it could be better, but I've never written a story before, especially not in English. I'm trying to improve. A sequel is expected soon.

From your early chapters till now you already improved a lot.

The pacing could be a bit slower to follow the story progression better. If I may?
I would suggest to focus on one big story element each entry instead of several important things. Like relationships of your characters or in the last entry, the vampires. You jumping a little bit fast from one to another. At least that is what I feel when re reading them^^

 

Nonetheless I like your story ? keep up the good work

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22 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

From your early chapters till now you already improved a lot.

The pacing could be a bit slower to follow the story progression better. If I may?
I would suggest to focus on one big story element each entry instead of several important things. Like relationships of your characters or in the last entry, the vampires. You jumping a little bit fast from one to another. At least that is what I feel when re reading them^^

 

Nonetheless I like your story ? keep up the good work


You're absolutely right, I also felt the transitions were a bit fast, partly because I don't know how much I can go into the character development and details, how much the readers are interested. ?
I am waiting for this kind of feedback, just like yours, so I know that they are not only looking at my blog for the sex screenshots.

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