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1365 - Out of Time and Place (Sian’s story)


jfraser

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The pickaxe digs into the crevice. I try to twist it but it is so heavy. My breathing comes in wheezes as the dusty air fills my lungs breath after breath. It takes five more strikes for a small chunk of ore to tumble to the ground at my feet. I absently push it to one side with my foot but have to take a moment to try to catch my breath before locking my eyes on the next spot. Just as I start the downswing, the horn blares. I drop the pickaxe and bend to gather my ore.

 

It is a small stack - master will not be pleased. He moves along the line now, stopping at each worker, counting their ore, complimenting or punishing, marking their tally on their chest with a piece of charcoal. There haven’t been new workers in an uncounted while and each day a handful of older workers have disappeared. There are gaps in the chains that connect our necks.

 

Master comes to me, frowns, tallies my ore on my breast and applies the switch to my legs but I am too tired and my throat is too raw to cry out. He moves on to the next. I gather my ore in buckets and carry them to the smelter, dump the ore into the pile, then resume my place.

 

The horn sounds again, and we shuffle in a straggling line to the dining area. I take my place, kneeling in front of a trough. An assortment of wilted lettuce and turnips is dumped in and I force myself to eat, though I have no appetite.

 

Once the meal is finished, we shuffle to the bathing room. We take turns on the chamber pots, then are chained standing along the wall. Masters douse us with buckets of water, rinsing away a layer of black dirt.

 

On, then, to the sleeping cell. I kneel on my pallet of straw and wait for master to lock my collar to the ring on the wall with a length of chain, then try to sleep but my rasping breath makes it difficult. Just as I an finally near sleep, I am re-awakened by a touch on my back. I shift my weight back, raising my rear into the air and spreading my legs. I feel master enter me, hear his grunting, press my face and arms into the floor to brace myself. Master finishes with a long groan, removes himself, and I crumble back to the ground. I am unable to get back to sleep.

 

The horn calls out and I kneel, waiting for master. He comes by presently, detaches the chain from my collar. I stand and wait until all the workers are in line and chained together. We shuffle back to the mine and take our places. I pick up my pickaxe and, when the horn blows, I strike.

 

The pickaxe digs into the crevice. I try to twist it but it is so heavy. My breathing comes in wheezes as the dusty air fills my lungs breath after breath. It takes five more strikes for a small chunk of ore to tumble to the ground at my feet.

 

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Uh-Oh.:worried: Sounds like Sian is slowly reaching the end of her tether. No surprise, given that she's most likely been in the mines for many months at this point. Sooo... what are the odds for a DEM-solution (Daedra ex machina) to happen soon-ish? AKA a certain "red man" has gotten bored of watching Sian hit rocks during the day and getting fucked at night and is now like "Boooring! Ok, fine. You can have your "Hunger" back. Happy now?"

I mean: It'll either have to be something like that or Skyrim/Tamriel will have to make due without a Dragonborn.🤔

 

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3 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Uh-Oh.:worried: Sounds like Sian is slowly reaching the end of her tether. No surprise, given that she's most likely been in the mines for many months at this point. Sooo... what are the odds for a DEM-solution (Daedra ex machina) to happen soon-ish? AKA a certain "red man" has gotten bored of watching Sian hit rocks during the day and getting fucked at night and is now like "Boooring! Ok, fine. You can have your "Hunger" back. Happy now?"

I mean: It'll either have to be something like that or Skyrim/Tamriel will have to make due without a Dragonborn.🤔

 


“many months” is certainly accurate. But not as many as i had originally planned - she will not end up in there for triple digit months this time, at least. 

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Sooo... It's only going to be 8 years and 3 month then? How very generous of you.😁 Also: "this time"? Now I dread to think how often poor Sian's been through this already. Don't tell me she's stuck in a vicious timeloop or something. That would be... cruel and unusual. Even by your standards.:scream:

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1 minute ago, HM1919 said:

Sooo... It's only going to be 8 years and 3 month then? How very generous of you.😁 Also: "this time"? Now I dread to think how often poor Sian's been through this already. Don't tell me she's stuck in a vicious timeloop or something. That would be... cruel and unusual. Even by your standards.:scream:

 

Minor spoiler alert:

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she has just finished her fourth year in the mine. Originally she was in there for over a decade, but that seemed unrealistic and would have meant trying to fill in ten years of extra content for the others, so I cut it down.

 

I just meant from the previous incarnation of the story before i started over after LL tried moving to a new host and then was forced to come back. Originally, Sian's story was the only one. Then I started the others because I started new playthroughs. Then I had the idea to make them one large integrated story, so I took that opportunity to start fresh. Every story you read is in chronological order, which is why there are sometimes several chapters of one person's story in a row and sometimes large gaps in time for others.

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I see. Didn't know that this is a re-telling of a story you had posted before. Guess I've not been on here for long enough. Sidenote: I think Sian's earned the title of Skyrim's "Countess of Monte Cristo", even if she's not been in the mines for as long as I'd feared.

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25 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

I see. Didn't know that this is a re-telling of a story you had posted before. Guess I've not been on here for long enough. Sidenote: I think Sian's earned the title of Skyrim's "Countess of Monte Cristo", even if she's not been in the mines for as long as I'd feared.


It is good that you did not see the previous versions because otherwise you would know what is about to happen. We have long since passed where we were in the other stories - Aithne was still with Borkul when I restarted hers, Sloan was still a sex worker (and was originally slated to be the stormcloak), and Trendil did not exist at all - but We have not yet caught up to where Sian was. Although parts of it have changed, it remains, in essence, the same. 

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There haven’t been new workers in an uncounted while and each day a handful of older workers have disappeared. There are gaps in the chains that connect our necks.

 

Standards are falling everywhere.

*shakes head sadly*

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1 hour ago, Content Consumer said:

 

Standards are falling everywhere.

*shakes head sadly*

Slaves just don’t wanna work anymore. 

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5 hours ago, jfraser said:

Slaves just don’t wanna work anymore. 

 

Back in MY day, we knew the value of a hard day's labor. My slaves had to carry me to school, uphill, in the snow, both ways. 

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