Well, things are getting interesting, aren't they ? Plotwise at least. And the drawing quality seems to be gaining in details and consistency proportions-wise as well. Now, there are a handful of typos in July entries ; and some bubble' tails do not point where they should (the very first one here points at Angela's belly, whereas it's the high elder who's speaking). Nothing that can't be fixed though.

On 7/30/2023 at 1:59 PM, Tirloque said:

Well, things are getting interesting, aren't they ? Plotwise at least. And the drawing quality seems to be gaining in details and consistency proportions-wise as well. Now, there are a handful of typos in July entries ; and some bubble' tails do not point where they should (the very first one here points at Angela's belly, whereas it's the high elder who's speaking). Nothing that can't be fixed though.

Hey! Glad you liked it, thank you... can u please point out some of the typos? I write these in Grammarly and then give them to my friend who uses a google translate it from and back to me.

On 8/1/2023 at 8:08 AM, Agent Tex said:

 

Hey! Glad you liked it, thank you... can u please point out some of the typos? I write these in Grammarly and then give them to my friend who uses a google translate it from and back to me.

On page 9 :

— second panel"grimes" -> "crimes"

On page 8 :

— Second panel "Mephela -> Mephala"

One page 7 :

— Fifth and sixth panels "Princess" -> "princes" ; "intance" -> "instance"