Some parts are a bit confusing for example :

The first line suggest the first person to speak is the naked one (the jailed one), yet when she speaks again (third line) it looks like it's the contrary. So it's probably a part of what the second one (the one outside the jail) says.  It might be less confusing if the 2nd and 3rd line weren't separated : hyphens usually indicate a different person speaking.

Still, don't know where it's going, but seems interesting.

15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Some parts are a bit confusing for example :

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- Where are my clothes? Let me go. 

- Let you go? You sent the sistehood to kill me. 

- You should be thankful because I didn’t kill you… yet. And you’re not totally naked. 

The first line suggest the first person to speak is the naked one (the jailed one), yet when she speaks again (third line) it looks like it's the contrary. So it's probably a part of what the second one (the one outside the jail) says.  It might be less confusing if the 2nd and 3rd line weren't separated : hyphens usually indicate a different person speaking.

 

Still, don't know where it's going, but seems interesting.

That was my mistake. The second and the third line are only one.