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Chapter 14


Black Princess

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- Wake up, Elen. 
- Where am I?

 

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- Living your new nightmare. 
- No, it can’t be truth. You… You should be dead. 
- Yeah, but I came back from death.

 

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- Where are my clothes? Let me go. 
- Let you go? You sent the sistehood to kill me. You should be thankful because I didn’t kill you… yet. And you’re not totally naked. 

 

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- At least take off that mask and show your face. 
- That’s a good point. The thing is: when I take it off, I’ll be in your place. 
- My place? 
- Why not? You’re locked here because of it. I want to know why you’re helping Morgana.

 

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- You wouldn’t understand… 
- Try to explain to me. 
- I… I… I want a revenge.

 

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- Oh, a revenge. Against who? 
- That’s not your business. 
- It is now. If you’re not telling me, maybe Morgana will tell.

 

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- No, you can’t do thiis. 
- Wrong. I can. And you can’t do anything to stop me. Now, if you don’t have anything interesting to say to me…

 

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- Wait. Don’t leave me here. 
- There are clothes in one of the wardrobes and my maids will take care of you. 
- Come back! BITCH!

 

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Some parts are a bit confusing for example :

 

- Where are my clothes? Let me go. 


- Let you go? You sent the sistehood to kill me. 


- You should be thankful because I didn’t kill you… yet. And you’re not totally naked. 

The first line suggest the first person to speak is the naked one (the jailed one), yet when she speaks again (third line) it looks like it's the contrary. So it's probably a part of what the second one (the one outside the jail) says.  It might be less confusing if the 2nd and 3rd line weren't separated : hyphens usually indicate a different person speaking.

 

Still, don't know where it's going, but seems interesting. :classic_smile:

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15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Some parts are a bit confusing for example :

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- Where are my clothes? Let me go. 


- Let you go? You sent the sistehood to kill me. 


- You should be thankful because I didn’t kill you… yet. And you’re not totally naked. 

The first line suggest the first person to speak is the naked one (the jailed one), yet when she speaks again (third line) it looks like it's the contrary. So it's probably a part of what the second one (the one outside the jail) says.  It might be less confusing if the 2nd and 3rd line weren't separated : hyphens usually indicate a different person speaking.

 

Still, don't know where it's going, but seems interesting. :classic_smile:

That was my mistake. The second and the third line are only one.

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