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[Unfinished] The Poor Whore: A fantasy medieval whore simulator.


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Hi everyone.  Just a heads up before you read any further, to get it out of the way:  This game is made only using RPG Maker assets, with no erotic art, and contains text-adventure style narration for sex scenes and events happening around you.  Also, it's unfinished, and there is no demo as of right now.  Sorry.  :(

 

If you're still reading, then thanks.  :)  I just wanted to get this out here to see what people think about it before carrying on with it.  I've done plenty of stuff with RPG Maker, but that was all mainstream normal games, not an erotic one like this.  It's a small project, and I'll probably finish in a couple weeks or so at the rate I'm going.  It'll take maybe an hour to play through, at a guess.  And yes, no original artwork.  It's basically a text adventure game disguised as an RPG Maker game.  You walk around like normal, but there's no fighting or anything, just interacting with people, having conversations, and engaging in sex acts via making choices.

 

The game is a fantasy medieval whore simulator.  The setup is you're a whore of nebulous origins, broke, with just the rags on your back to your name.  You travel to the town of Ovavulvaville in the hopes of getting hired at the local brothel.  Your goal in life: to become the most famous whore in the lands.  You will do this by raising your reputation via two stats: Adoration and Infamy.  Adoration is how much the town loves and respects you, like a classic courtesan of legend, and Infamy is how raunchy and scandalous you are, just as famous, but everyone knows you for being a gutter whore instead of nice and classy.  So doing various acts will either increase your Adoration or Infamy stats, and at the end of the game, if one or both are high enough, you get a special ending (classy whore or gutter whore).  For instance, entertain a dinner of nobles, raise your Adoration.  Be the subject of a bukkake, raise your Infamy.

 

So at the beginning of the game, you'll actually create your character, with the help of a magical sex fairy.  She'll ask what you want your character sprite to look like, and there's 12 options.  And then you get to design your body.  You can be short and petite, or tall and voluptuous, and then you get to pick your breast size.  Small, medium, large, and extra large.  This results in 1 of 6 classes.  You will get bonuses to your starting stats based on your choices, and characters will behave differently with you, and the narration will of course change, specific to your look.

 

The other stats you'll be interested in are Beauty and Raunch, which describe how you visually appear to other characters.  Beauty is how classically beautiful you are, and Raunch describes how viscerally sexual you look (big tits hanging out, etc).  Generally, the more petite you are, the bigger boost to Beauty, and the more voluptuous you are, the bigger boost to Raunch.  Different customers will be attracted by different things.  Buy specific dresses at the clothing shop to increase these appearance stats.

 

There are also Vaginal Capacity and Anal Capacity stats.  These determine how loose you are.  You may not be able to take some things inside your body if you're too tight.  Rumors will spread about these stats around town, however, and they may reflect on your reputation stats.

 

Alright, here are some pictures:

 

http://imgur.com/a/JWom8

 

http://imgur.com/a/3n5Ia

 

http://imgur.com/a/MXopa

 

http://imgur.com/a/CaeHf

 

An in-creator shot of the inside of the brothel:

 

http://imgur.com/a/wxYaP

 

http://imgur.com/a/8MCUG

 

http://imgur.com/a/TzMrd

 

http://imgur.com/a/rmqzk

 

http://imgur.com/a/2ZvqS

 

http://imgur.com/a/YD4DG

 

So the setup for the main game is, once you start working at the brothel, you have 10 nights to prove yourself.  At the end of the 10 nights, the game ends and you get your ending based on your reputation, or other choices.  There are actually going to be 6 unique endings, with special relationships possible with some characters.  Each night is 1 encounter of your choice, and there are a total of 20 encounters, so the game encourages replays.  There's not  a lot of "courting" or whatever that occurs in most dating sims.  It's just sex scene after sex scene, basically.  They have some detail but move along pretty snappy.  The fetishes are pretty varied, I think, including interracial, gangbangs, bukkakes, lactation, fisting, extreme anal, public sex, monsters, futas, glory holes, BDSM, Dommes, subs, blackmail, cuckqueaning, lesbians, rough sex, and romance.

 

So there we are.  I know it's probably a hard sell, because yeah, no artwork.  This is really for lovers of erotic text adventures, really.  I was just interested in hearing what you guys think, as I'm still working on the project.

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I think it sounds great, myself. I prefer text myself, anything from A Dance with Rogues to visual novels. I'd be very interested in playing a demo once you feel it's finished enough for that.

Also plus for not linking a patreon and asking people to pay you money for an unfinished product.

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Have you ever thought about adding sprite sex to game?? I ask because if the story is interesting and you would want to change to rpg maker xp charsets i could provide you few templates (or help you by creating new ones). I myself working on brothel themed game but in my cases i lack creativity in writing so i only create mechanics and sprites so that i could create a clone of sim brothel in rpg maker mv.

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No demo, that's ok if you are fishing for ideas.

 

No art? That can work.... but it makes you reliant on VERY descriptive scenes, narration, and a story. A dance with dragons works because the writing and story carried it despite the lack of animated sex scenes. Saying that, I would rather have art than not.

 

Magical fairy to set appearance???? WHAT? This seems needless. Just have the players pick their appearance, don't make this needlessly complicated.

 

Another thing that worries me is that the whore appears to be for both genders. The reason that this worries me is that historically prostitutes are almost all female out of supply and demand. So were you going to have male on male sex? Are ALL the clients female then to prevent that? Do you see the problem? The other way is to code different clients depending on your gender and that literally doubles your work load. I HIGHLY recommend you restricting this to women whores only.

 

 

I'm going to admit, your beginning story makes no sense. Does anyone ever want to aspire to be a whore? "Mom, I want to be a whore when I grow up." People end up whoring out of lack of money and lack of opportunity. The beginning is really important because if you have a confusing beginning then people will just abandon it, especially if you are reliant on descriptive text. It needs to make sense. The first time should be emotionally hard to do, but each time after gets easier and easier. Maybe she isn't normal, and expected it to be emotionally rough but it wasn't, that can work too but it needs to feel natural. Note in a dance with dragons the first sex scene is not pleasant being rape. Second one is with a women which is less invasive than with a man. There is a natural flow how one builds into being sexual, it is not a switch, more like a container which is slowly filled with experiences.

 

I get the stats thing, but to be honest the looseness thing is more of a social construction. Unless the womens vagina is abnormally small or a mans penis is unnaturally large, a penis will not be fully be in contact with all the sides of the vagina. A women normally has to use her muscles to clamp down on the penis to create just the right amount of friction. A whore tends to be good at sex because these muscles are strong and controlled because of ... practice. This myth was created by prudes, it is totally about the concept that sex damages a women, which is silly and inaccurate. I'm not saying don't do it, but that is is totally bullshit from a realistic standpoint. 

 

For ten nights... that is a lot of fetishes to go through for being new. I don't see how you can do it and make sense. Normally if you look at porn stars, they commonly follow a progression. They don't start with the hard stuff, but start softer and SLOWLY work their way up until the public loses interest in them. Men who are looking for new whores aren't looking for the hard stuff, they want to touch that innocence. If they wanted to gang bang they would get someone who has experience who knows how to actually fuck strangers.  Only way I think ten nights work is that they are not consecutive nights, that is they have a week or two in between. Day 1, Day 11, Day 30, Day 60, etc... That way the whore has time to grow. Could make the story as if it was read out of a diary.

 

Do what you want, I'm just trying to give feedback what I think will help. My feedback could be wrong, I'm only one guy.

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Have you ever thought about adding sprite sex to game?? I ask because if the story is interesting and you would want to change to rpg maker xp charsets i could provide you few templates (or help you by creating new ones). I myself working on brothel themed game but in my cases i lack creativity in writing so i only create mechanics and sprites so that i could create a clone of sim brothel in rpg maker mv.

 

Thanks for the offer, but I don't think I'd be interested in it.  I'm not too big on visuals in my sex games, to be very honest.  I prefer the literary approach, like text adventure style.

 

And XJ347, thanks for the feedback.  Just wanna address some of it.  First, the whore is only female, there is no male option, so don't worry about that.

 

Other than that, the main thing I'm getting from you is you're viewing this project way too seriously.  It's not meant to be serious, more of a humorous, tongue in cheek, off the wall short little game.  It's only gonna be about an hour long.  That Magic Sex Fairy at the beginning should tell you all you need to know about the tone of this game: it's there because it's funny and people get a kick out of it.  The character's motivations?  Her backstory?  It's intentionally left open.  She wants to be a famous whore, because you're her, and you're playing the game, and that's it.  I'm going for simple, here.

 

I will say one feedback I'm confused over is the capacity stats.  Looseness is not a social construct.  Your average, normal woman is not going to be able to simply take a fist up the vagina or asshole just like that, or be able to physically fuck a horse sized cock.  That's just impossible.  She'd need experience.  There are several women in the porn industry who are famous for going down that route:  hotkinkyjo, Dirty Garden Girl, Roxy Ray, Alisya Gapes, just to name a few.  They've stretched themselves to take huge objects, and that's all my capacity stats are simulating, a bit goofily, admittedly. 

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