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  1. Rarely freezes. I’ll go through and see if I have un-needed stuff. Is just animation related scripts or should I also turn off mods with quest based scripts?
  2. What’s your CPU and system RAM? I was shooting a scene last night and after placing six or seven NPCs, my computer kept freezing
  3. Thanks! I think it was a way for me to handle some character development/arc for Jenny. Originally, the multiple Jenny thing was not part of my larger story outline. Weridly, I got the idea of the drugged part from a scene in the recent Netflix Dark Crystal series I did my best to work around the incomplete areas of my scene because I wasnt able to use CreationKit to finish up spaces/cells. In Part 2, you will notice that the rooms and hallways have no ceiling.
  4. Thanks so much! I realized that I mentioned back in chapter 1 that I was going for a Numeneria style theme, but at the same time didnt show enough scifiDecor around the city. So yeah, I was aiming for a cyberpunk style theme in the market, hence the noodle shop and billboards of half naked women. I also got the quantum idea from the AntMan movie:
  5. Manic I think may be the best term? But yeah, there's probably some Freudian, psycho-sexual analysis to determine if your multiple personas orgasm is considered masturbation But thanks so much for the comments as the original setting as you mentioned back in chapter 1 is tricky to do.
  6. Funny enough, I would have to look away from those panels as well as I may have done too good of a job because I could also feel my eyes start to strain looking at the drugged effects too
  7. I love the color tone and palette for the first set of shots! it really shows off the scenery so well and the multiple layers Nora's white dress! And holy fuck that kitten strut around his legs....HOT!!
  8. Really cute story! You know I’ve never thought of using that Cube like a companion cube. i was getting Wheatley/R2D2 vibes from it and hope we get to see it again On the last two pics, it did take me a few extra seconds to figure out to whom the red and white bubbles were coming from. I don’t know if it’s because of the white text bubble, but it took me a few moments to notice the two flying machines (though really pretty looking btw). Maybe have one shot much closer to one of them in the foreground with the other in the mid/background?
  9. -Holy cow! My heart stopped when I saw the shot with all of those guests! My Skyrim would’ve crashed from that! That said, did you have them placed in CK first then teleported there, or did you go there and “placeatme” your NPCs in? -When Nora asked him not to be rough shoving his cock in her mouth, for a moment I thought her fear was the poison could spread from his blood to his semen. Was that the reason or something else I missed?
  10. Glad to have a SFW chapter to read without fear of wife/kids looking over my shoulder! I always find aloof type characters like Emma fun to read!
  11. Amazes how your write Cass’s aloof naïveté that it never gets old! it’s weird how as much as she has sex, she still feels innocent and pure 😍
  12. After losing track of time in the village, Jenna rushes back to Korinth in hopes she did not miss her appointment with the armorsmith. Along the way, she stumbles upon former Scientists from the Institute. She learns that they developed a way to travel between dimensions and realms without the need for gates or portals. Will Jenna use this moment to go back home and leave her life at Erywon behind? Part 1 Part 2 Dark Ascension: Horizon, Book 2 Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7: Part 1 Chapter 7: Parts 2 and 3 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 "SPECIAL" Chapter 10 Dark Ascension, Book 1 Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs Chapter 6: Vestal's Order Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall Chapter 10: No Tomorrow Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence Chapter 14: Lascivious Connections Chapter 15: Cross the Rubikon Dark Ascension, Initiates' Tales -From the Drunna’s Den Blog- Part 1: Initiation of Innocence Part 2: Lustful Maneuvers
  13. Character = sexy lighting = fabulous Room = gorgeously awesome!
  14. Love Cassidey’s personality, and enjoy reading her dialogues. I admit, I was expecting g Cassidey to admit she had a very garlicky meal after the vampire disintegrated.
  15. Nice story! However now I need to go back and read your story from the beginning! So I am guilty of this as well, but noticed in some spots you are using the same verbs around spoken dialogue within a section or paragraph ex: said and hissed. While not required for every instance, but paragraphs when you use “said <person>“ several times in a row, maybe reorder sentence structures and use other speaking verbs to give a variety of different “said“ action verbs or descriptors.
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